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Lovely Fatima is an English Teacher living in Miyakonojo, Japan.
When she is not attempting to finish the next chapter of her HP fanfic, she is either practicing kyudo, Japanese archery, studying Japanese, or working on her original novel.

A Voice Upon The Waves is her sole venture into the world of fan-fiction, and is intended as a novel-length work.

I started writing this story in November of 2005, and it was my first attempt at novel-length fiction. As such, it was always a writing experiment for me. Here in 2007 and at the mid-point of the story, I decided that it was time for a major re-write. The reasons for this were many. Primarily, I felt that I had made some unsatisfactory characterization choices. I also had some woefully underdeveloped characters, issues with phrasing, and scenes/dialogue that needed to wear more flesh.

As these changes were extreme, I was told I needed to delete the old story from the MNFF archive and re-submit the new chapters as I would a new story. I'm posting the old version [marked (O)]on my website (see above) so that readers can still access it. I will also post the new version [marked (R)] in later days so you can see the differences between the two versions.
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Stories by Lovely Fatima

House: Gryffindor

Screenname: Secret Akasha

Severus Snape contemplates a fateful choice and its consequences.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 109 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
03/15/07 Updated: 03/27/07

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