Hello! I am currently 13 and at a middle school in Wisconsin. I am also a female. I like to play soccer, volleyball, and toss the football around for fun. I also like biking, hanging with my friends, and making jokes though half aren't even funny. I'm an HP fan and love watching the Lord of the Rings movies. I like reading and writing in my free time, and school is okay I guess. I get A's and high B's. I'm also in a band-in-progress called, Rent. I am also a Lutheran Christian. I believe that as long as i do not truly believe or practice the magical arts that it isn't a sin to God.
I like fanfictions that have a little romance, yet a little dark angsty shots, and obviously the whole fantasy thing. My favorite characters are: Sirius, Lupin, Tonks, Hermione, and Krum.
I hate same-sex pairings very much. I am against it and it will never happen. I do like imagination, but not stuff that's WAY out there. I don't like poems with no meaning; they're pointless! I also find Draco/pals, Snape/teachers, and mystery fanfics boring.
Please read and review my work, i always appreciate your opinion! :D
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ps. I am currently working on a fanfiction about Sirius. I will probably post more poems up in the mean time so y'all don't get bored of my page, but while you're all busy reading, i'll be busy writing.
pss. you can get hold of my personal profile at www.livejournal.com (user name: eagle_of_sin) and we can become friends upon that website; or else get hold of my personal email at email@example.com if you have any questions, comments, or even plot ideas.
Byes 4 now! :D
That was a really good start! I just kind of wish you put some more detail into it instead of jumping straight into the classes. But all in all i liked it! On my way to chapter 2!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you did. I guess more detail would have been welcomed, but I include more stuff later.
This is a really good poem, Quill, but it wasn't your best. Your two other poems have a little more depth and feeling while this one it seems like you just threw it all together in 2 minutes. All-in-all, very good. :D
Author's Response: AH, you got me. To be honest I jotted this one down because I had some more candy rhymes that I didn't think fitted in choccy frog. So Yeah, I promised myself I was going to redo it, because I like this one least out of all my work. I am going to see if I can make it better. Thankyou for the constructive criticism and the review! :)
You are an excellent writer! I'm so glad you wrote more than one chapter right now! It's just a little confusing with the wedding of Bill and Fleur. From what I understand from the fourth book Fleur was 17 and Bill about 22! That's 5 years apart! Whatever, lol. Great writing and keep it up. Also, long chapters make for a good bold picture. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review hon - as to Bill & Fleur: they are actually regarded as a canon ship as of OotP; and in HP timeline she would be 20 as of my story, and Bill would be 25. (Five years is nothin' - and wasn't Hermione 14 when she *dated* 18-year-old Krum? Now THAT's strange...)
Again, I have read your poetry. Awesome....you are very, very talented with poems. I hope you write more whether they're about love or angst! I just love 'em all! :D
Author's Response: Thanx!
Diamond Quill, sorry to say, but you are too obsessed with rhyming! Rhyming or not, a poem is a poem. It's the body of the poem, the words of the poem, the depth of the poem! :|
Caly, this is a really good poem! I enjoyed it probably as much as you wrote it! I give this a 9/10, and this is high for me! I'm usually stricter than this (if that is even a word, "stricter") :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the 9/10. And yeah, I think the word is: More stricter. LOL!
I really liked this first chapter! I'm also interested in where you're going to bring the next chapter to! I award your talent on explaining even the little details of the dread he felt about Snape's letter, to the precise details about his emotions. Detail is important in a good fanfic! And don't forget that length doesn't matter--so make it as long as you want! Great chapter! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! It's always nice to hear something good about my work. :o)
That's really good, Quill! Except I don't understand why you said that Harry never forgave. I understand that you were trying to rhyme, and it sounded really good!-but that little part didn't fall true. Otherwise it was really, really good! It got you thinking about all those things! Great job! Kudos! :D
Author's Response: Sorry, but I disagree! The never forgave line was about how Harry never forgave Voldermort for the murders of his Parents, Sirius etc. I hope you see where I'm coming from, Thanks for da review.
That was.......vivid i guess you could say. It almost had nothing to do with "Harry Potter" though except the Head Boy part. But don't you agree that dark and intense writing is so much more easier to write about than happy pappy stuff? To me it is, but that doesn't mean that I like killing, torture, hate, and pain (etc.)--i'm totally against it. Know what I mean?--very good all-in-all. :D
Author's Response: Thank you...and I hate happy pappy! :oD