Summary: Sirius Black has just lost everything in his life worth living for...now all he wants is revenge. (Takes place after the Potters' death) Rated for some violence and language. One-shot.
wow...that was good.
I liked how you explained everything in that fic, how Sirius felt when he found out they were dead, why he didn't trust Remus and the emotions that drove Sirius to hunt down Peter.
I think you depicted Sirius well, there was a lot of different emotions going on here and you showed all of them.
The only thing I can say is that from PoA, I think that Sirius went looking for Peter, realised in wasn't in hiding, and then went to Godric's Hollow. Although I think it's great you got Remus in there.
Summary: “Imperius… Werewolves…You-Know-Who…” The last words of a dying man force Remus Lupin into a dangerous investigation at the infamous Feral Institute. Sequel to Oblivious; pre-reading would be useful but it isn’t vital.
That was a sweet ending! I loved this fic and I really hope you keep writing R/T!
Summary: Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs join old Moony at the Hospital Wing the morning after the last full moon. Sirius plays the Grim; Remus loses another girlfriend because of his problem, and the four friends stay together when rejection comes their way. This is my first HP fanfic.
aww...that was sweet, with a bittersweet ending. Keep it up!
Summary: Ginny Weasley feels abandoned when her family dies. As she stands at their grave she promises to avenge their deaths. She leaves her former life as Ginny Weasley. She is now known as Xanthe Gwynne, a new prominent Death Eater.
Every tear has been shed. All that’s left is the bitter taste of vengeance.
Entry for the Gauntlet 3rd run.
Name: Foxy Wolf
Character: Ginny Weasley
I liked this! Ginny, I felt, was just a tad out of character, but you explained so well that it worked with your fic. You got her feelings perfect- anger at the death of her family, determination as she went for revenge, and despair as she realised the depths she had to go to in order to gain revenge. Well done!
Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny find themselves in a Muggle hotel in Godric's Hollow on the Winter Solstice. During an enthusiastic snowball fight, Harry and Ginny step through a stone circle that transports them seventeen years into the past. This may be the only chance Harry has to spend with his parents, and it may also be what he needs to figure out his relationship with Ginny.
The warning is for later chapters.
Edit: So, this was originally strictly a Harry/Ginny fic, but Ron and Hermione kept trying to get together too, so I felt like I had to change the category. And there's a bit of Lily/James in there too, though they're already married, and I've also added a bit of Remus/Tonks. Poor Sirius is the only Singleton (though he may manage to get a girl of his own)!
Edit: This story was cannon until after Deathly Hallows came out, so I changed it to Alternate Universe, but it's still pretty close to cannon. Only a few things will end up being different when the story ends.
Edit: I've changed all of the chapter titles to the titles of Christmas songs that I felt reflected the events in the chapters best. Tell me what you think! Does it fit?
wow...this fic is really well written...one of the best time-travel fics i've ever read.
Summary: Six years after the defeat of Voldemort, Harry still suffers from major memory loss, and shows no signs of recovery. How will Ginny handle Harry's transformation?
That was so sweet! A unique take on Harry/Ginny. Well done!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I\'m glad you enjoyed it - and took the time to leave such a sweet review. <3
Summary: Whoever knew that a couple still went on "dates" after they were married?
Runner-Up in the Best Canon Romance category of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Awards
For those interested, I'm planning on writing a Prequel to this story. Just thought I'd let everyone know.
That was incredibly sad...I was almost in tears at the end of that..
Summary: While running away from Grimmauld Place, Sirius thinks about family, home, and what a brother really is.
Aww...that was a very sweet ending.
I really liked that Sirius and Regulus got along in this fic. Many people have them hate each other from the start, but you showed that Regulus was not a bad person, just more of a misguided one.
Another thing I liked was you showed Sirius being an older brother, which is something we rarely get to see. I think Sirius was more dissapointed when his brother joined the Death Eaters more than anything, and you really showed that in your fic.
Summary: Chapter Ninety Six is posted!
This is the story of four boys. This is the story of a boy from a family he wants to escape from. This is the story of a boy who is from a family he loves deeply, but lacks the gift of a best friend. This is the story of a boy who has been living with a curse his entire life, fighting to overcome it. This is the story of a boy who wishes to show people what he can do. This is the story of how these four boys came to know each other, of how they became friends. This is the story of their unbreakable bond, of a bond that could survive any test, any trial. This is a story that will ultimately end in tragedy.
Nominated for a 2007 and 2009 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Marauder's Era Featured Mugglenet Fanfiction, October 2011
Yeah! Great chapter. They are studying to be Animagi now...can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Yep, the Animagi training begins! Thanks for reading!
Summary: "We do not remember days; we remember moments."
What follows is a collection of little memories that make up life: moments, both significant and obscure. A series of vignettes more than anything, that, put together, may paint a picture of the lives of our favorite Marauders. Rating because of language.
nice! I like it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Summary: Lily Evans is determined not to become another Cinderella story.
And it's not just Cinderella that bothers her: so often a character begins her story insisting that she doesn't need a man’s protection, when—lo and behold—she’s saved by a handsome man and they ride off into the sunset despite her “determination” otherwise.
And if you started to think that their stories probably began much the same way as this one, well, you must not know just how determined Lily Evans could be.
Not an average James/Lily fic...(but still some fluff)...please read and review!
I really liked the comparison to Cinderella...I suppose the whole year and a half thing was a tad unrealistic...but I agree that Lily was probably very determinded and I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Yes, bad planning on my part...I wanted the story to start in 5th year and end with them going out, so I had to jump to 7th year. The result was that Lily was far more determined than even I had expected!
Summary: This story begins directly after The Deathly Hallows (Pre-Epilogue). How will the trio handle the world that is waiting for them after the defeat of Voldemort. Harry and Ginny can finally move forward with thier relationship and so can Ron and Hermione. Loved ones must be barried, but lives must go on. What happens in the months following Harry's victory as the wizarding world begins to rebuild what it has lost?
This was a really good first chapter! I liked the conversation between Harry and Ginny...very sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks for the first review it means a lot. This is my first fan fic and I\'m hoping people will enjoy it. I\'m also trying to keep it updated, and the second chapter is in queue
Summary: Remus Lupin never dreamed of going to Hogwarts because of his 'furry little problem'. However, when the letter arrives, he begins to think otherwise...
Second place winner in the 'New Beginnings' prompt for the Autumn Challenge!
I like how you used Remus for this, even though he's not techincally a muggleborn. Great Idea.
Summary: One Shot Set Post Imperius - A short set of interludes in the life of Remus and Tonks at Winter Hollow
That was so sweet! How neither of them let the others odd habits drive them crazy...please keep writing...please?
Summary: What do you do when you find a baby with your morning milk?
Nice job...that was interesting doing it from Petunia's point of view...You protreyed the feelings well. Poor Harry.
Summary: While in Charms class one day, Lily feels James’ eyes on her. After her first glance back at him, she starts to think. It’s just a game to him, right? And is all really fair in love and war?
Interesting...I think that would be the sort of thing Lily would think....Good Job
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you liked it!
Summary: The hunt for Sirius Black is not going well. Two years after his mysterious escape from Hogwarts, Kingsley Shacklebolt is no closer to finding the infamous murderer, and to top it all, rumors of Voldemort's return are seeping through the Ministry. So when Mad-Eye Moody offers him a chance to join the Order of the Phoenix, Kingsley is more than glad to accept...until he meets someone unexpected at headquarters.
Really Good! Interesting piont of view...don't think I've read a fic where we see Kingsley learning of Sirius' innocence
Summary: They were here. She had known they were coming, and the prospect had allowed a tickle of annoyance to prickle at the back of her mind in the days since the news, but now they were here and Petunia had never before felt so angry, had never before felt such a hot coil of fury that sat heavily in the pit of her stomach and blazed behind her eyes.
Nice Job! I liked how you used Petunia's POV for this. Keep up the good work!
The Noble and Most Ancient House of ... Nevermind. by TCole
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Sirius Black was the complete opposite of every member of the Black family, save for Andromeda. What made him become this way?
He thought his brother, Regulus, was a complete git, and he disliked him even more when he became a Death Eater at the age of sixteen. How did Sirius feel about him while the two were growing up? Were they close, or did they never get along?
I enjoyed this! I like how you protrayed the relationship between Sirius and his family- how Regulus and Sirius really act like brothers and how Sirius feels regret that his family turned out the way they did. I aslo thought you handled the flashbacks and memories well. I liked how you used photographs to explain the memory, and your transitions from memory to what is happening at the moment are fairly smooth.
Keep up the good work!
Hugo doesn't remember the last time Aunt Muriel came to stay, but Rose does...
Awww! That's so sweet! I love your characterization of Rose, the nice yet slightly evil older sister educating her brother on the perils of visits from Auntie Muriel. Amazing job as always.
Thank you! I saw her thinking about the past visit, considering whether to tell Hugo about it, then deciding to let him find out for himself...and take his turn giving up his room! :D