That was really good! I liked it a lot. A wink can tell it all. Indeed, indeed. Very good. I liked it a ton! A great idea for a plot. Fantastic work!
That was a good first chapter! I liked it a lot so far. Oh gosh, I just love Sirius. I mean, who doesn't? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: oh thanx! haha i know I sure love Sirius. =)
Luna Lovegood, after her ordeal in Hidden, goes on to become an advice columnist of the Quibbler, using personal experience to teach desperate, helpless souls what she knows. Read problems submitted by members of MNFF and even suggest one yourself!
Chapter One - Destroyer of Pretty Girls
hehehe. That was a REALLY funny chapter. I really like it. Great work so far!
awww, the ending was so sweet- i loved it! this is a really good story. it's for sure one of my favorites!
Author's Response: Thank you - I loved the ending too! :D That\'s one of my favorites in this story, I must admit... So I\'m glad it\'s your favorite, too! Thank you for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia
EEK!!!!! That chapter was sooo good, I'm squealing with happiness. hehe. This is my favorite story by far- I love it! This was a really wonderful chapter. I had been checking every day to see if this chapter had been validated, and of course, once I saw it had, I read about 3 paragraphs and I had to go to the pool. I was thinking about reading this chapter the whole time, and that's saying something, since I love to swim and spend just about my whole summer at the pool. Here were my two favorite parts:
And then he did something that he would have never dreamed that he would.
James took Lilyís hand and held it the whole way home.
But Lily didnít say any of these things. She just shook her head and walked away.
Jimmy Dunne grinned.
FANTASTIC CHAPTER! I loved it, keep up the great work and be sure to update as soon as you can! :-P
Author's Response: Oh, good, squealing! That\'s what I wanted - either squealing or sighing! :D I know exactly what you mean with the pool thing... I had to take this kid I was babysitting to the pool, but stopped writing to take him while I was in the middle of the chapter, and all I could think about was what I wanted to write next! Thank you so much for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia
OH. MY. GODNESS. GRACIOUS. That was absolutely positively amazing! I was waiting forever for this chapter to get validated and now I believe I'm the first reviewer for this chapter, right? Well, if not, either way , fantastic work! I LOVED this fic! AMAZING!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, I do believe you are. Congratualtions! I\'m very glad you enjoyed it, as it was very enjoyable to write, too. I\'m really glad you liked it, and I\'m not some random crazy person wasting her time. At least it seems to have paid off! =D Thanks again for the great review.
I just finished the whole story and I have to say it was so awesome! I loved it! It was very good, and you did a great job or portraying all of the characters. I especially liked the ending!
That was really good. Poor poor Snape! It makes me sooo sad. And looking into the eyes... Lily's eyes in a sense. (hope that didn't give anything away from the 7th) So sad, but so good! I really liked it!
Author's Response: I\'ve already read the seventh, this fic was inspired by it in fact! Thanks for the review.
That was really good! It was also really sad. Poor poor Snape. I liked how you portrayed the characters! This made me think of the part in DH when Snape looks into Harry's eyes, or in a sense, Lily's. Great work!
Author's Response: Thanks again!