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I updated my bio back in 2014 and time has flown its now 2017. I haven't written anything new for the Harry Potter fandom in a while but I still write.

The Charm of Fall Bay: In-Progress Chapter 3

The Mattering Report File Sirius Black: On Hiatus till further notice. I love Sirius I really do but writing his diary... sorry, journal is hard.

Wishes by the Fireside: Finished! (Ginny/Neville)

A special thanks to my wonderful Beta Reader, Megan_Lupin. Thanks for beta-ing The Mattering Report File Sirus Black!

Thank You to my Beta reader Chante' thegirllikeme on the MNFF. She beta-ed Wishes at the Fireside.

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The Curtain Call by Amelia Bedelia

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James and Lily spend their summers together producing plays, though neither are happy about the presence of the other. With James, as the set designer, and Lily, as the actress, tensions run high.
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Ministry Ball

Wow that was so good! I wonder what would have happened if James had let Lily take the green glass... I loved that part and when they almost kissed! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yes - almost kissed! :D Haha! But not quite - just a bit longer for that one! Thanks for the review! Yours truly, Amelia Bedelia

Wednesday Dates by belladonna_tb

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Whoever knew that a couple still went on "dates" after they were married?

:::old H/G:::

Runner-Up in the Best Canon Romance category of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Awards

For those interested, I'm planning on writing a Prequel to this story. Just thought I'd let everyone know.
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful...so lovely. It makes me smile to know that Harry would continue on with their Wednesday dates.

Dear Conscience by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Mini-fic with 3 parts.

Dear Reader,

I am a troubled girl. Everything that could go wrong, seems to go wrong. Throw in the biggest pain in the derriere a girl has ever had to put up with, a best and worst friend that you both love and hate, and a sister you just purely hate, and what do you get? My life. So that’s why I need an outlet – someone to yell at, someone to blame, and someone to draw some kind of twisted comfort from. Who better than my conscience? And how do I keep in contact with said conscience? Through writing letters to it of course! Need some convincing?

Well, I hurl a lot of verbal abuse about, make mistakes that could cost me everything I hold dear, and occasionally I get things – sort of – right. And where else could you read about lipsticks, rhubarb crumble and foam fights all in one mini-fic?

Well, I think I’ve convinced you enough. Don’t tell me you’re not tempted! Read my personal letters addressed to my conscience, and be amazed and enthralled at how utterly unstable my life is ...


Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 09/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Conscience (Where Do I Start?)

I love it! The "Dear Conscience..." letters are so funny! Keep up the great wrok!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully I will!

7 Ways to Win Her Heart by x_lily_evans_x

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

Ah, Christmas. The season of joy and love. And Head Boy James Potter fully intends to use the loving atmosphere to his advantage by coming up with plans and using them to capture the heart of Lily Evans.

But since when do plans transfer beautifully from parchment to life?

Six plans become five, five become four, four become three, three become two, two become one, and then there are none.

Then his friends come to the rescue.

But of course.
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter V

Loved it! It was great how you incorporated Slughorns party with James' and Lilys first kiss! I can't wait to see the next chapter!

Author's Response: Haha, ol\' Sluggy had to come in somewhere. :D Glad you loved it, and thanks for the review! (:

Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes by A Cappella

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Gilderoy Lockhart, the ever-vain wizard, has decided to take up teaching the Defence Against Dark Arts subject at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Follow him during his first day of school as he wrestles with back-talking students, unpleasant teachers, and absolutely no breaks in the day to style his hair.
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 09/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes

Oh my! It was really good! You described Gilderoy Lockhart perfectly. I especially liked it when he told Oliver Well, Mr. Wood, Im expecting you to know all the colors of my robes by next class."

Entangling the Snake in Lion's Fur by BloodRayne

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ginny is involuntarily helped by a very unlikely person, which causes her to have a few reconsiderations.
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 10/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: Entangling the Snake in Lion's Fur

It was very good! I love how you wrote Draco's part.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Calliope and Thalia and Their Inspiration by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Callie and Lia, a Gryffindor and a Slytherin. A lady and a tomboy. Two opposite souls. Two sisters. Separated at birth by circumstances they are determined to discover... and undo. Yes, after being reunited, the siblings plan to reunite their parents as well. Let’s see them accomplish House Unity, too!

“It’s our rule not to dredge up past things, remember?”

This rule is about to be broken.

~Inspired by a worldwide beloved film.

Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: So near yet so far

I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens!

Couldn't Be Happier by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lucius does not understand what there is to like about snow: its cold, its wet, and it sticks to everything. Perhaps his mind will be changed once this afternoon is finished . . .
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Couldn't Be Happier

This brought a smile to my face. It's an intresting pairing and I loved how you wrote Andromeda and her love for snow. Wonderful!

Author's Response: ^.~

Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Couldn't Be Happier

This brought a smile to my face. It's an intresting pairing and I loved how you wrote Andromeda and her love for snow. Wonderful!

Author's Response: It brought so big a smile to your face that you wanted to leave two reviews, huh? ;D Just kidding. Thanks very much for your sweet review!

Love Will Do That To You by hermione_granger4life

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Melanie Lostner, a sixth year Slytherin, has known Draco Malfoy all of her life. Their parents were best friends when they were in Hogwarts, but when unfortunate events lead to Narcissa Malfoy's death, Lucius Malfoy's imprisonment, and Melanie's parents mysterious deaths soon after she arrives at Hogwarts, Draco and Melanie are all alone in the world: except for each other. Melanie battles her brother's rage over her unique powers while she and Draco grow closer with each passing day. Draco is working as a spy for the Order but when some dangerous tasks for the Dark Lord get out of hand, Melanie worries for his safety. Will their romance last, or will Melanie be ripped away from Draco for all eternity?
****UPDATE**** 7/31/08 Chapter Five just submitted :) ********

7/30/2011 Years later I'm finally getting ready to update this story. I've re-written this chapter five times so far now. Chapters 5 and 6 sort of blend together, I'm trying to pick a good separation point. Chapter 5 is less Draco. Chapter 6 is ALL Draco. Thanks to anyone who has stuck with this story.

CHAPTER FIVE IS VALIDATED AND UP! :D Reviews are appreciated.

Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 01/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- No Bravery

I loved it! Draco was written exceptionally well and Melanie was amazing! I like how you portray Melanie and her brothers relationship. Charles fully admits to the killing of his parents and I think thats essential to their brother/sister relationship. And the end part was very sweet and Draco's promise was gentle.

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you sooo much! I worked reallyyy hard on this one. I don\'t know why, but for some reason I wanted to make Melanie seem like a really nice person who didn\'t have any problems on the surface, but really she\'s got more problems than she can handle. Chapter three is giving me a hard time because of all the content I\'m planning on placing in it...lol. The rating is going to have to go up after this chapter. Thanks for the review! :) **Emma

Tears Of Innocence by Siriusly Mr Black

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: An external monologue, from Narcissa Malfoy to Voldemort, in which she talks about her daughter Rose.
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 01/13/08 Title: Chapter 1: Innocence Is Always The First Casualty Of War

That was beautiful! Rose is so sweet and Narcissa was amazing. I loved it but it made me sad, in a good way!

Author's Response: I\'m glad yo liked it!

Her Father's Girl by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ron makes mistakes. He loses his way and drifts off path. But he always fixes it. Coming home on Christmas Eve, he hopes this will be the same. But will Hermione forgive him? Can Rose?

I am kask of Slytherin for the ' Winter's Tales: By The Fireside' prompt.
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 01/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Her Father's Girl

I loved it! The whole daddy daughter relationship was wonderful. I hope you also write more about Rose and Scorpius.

Author's Response: I will be definitely writing more Rose/Scorpius. I really love the pair. Thanks for the review! I\'m glad you liked it!

The Final Choice by anath

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: One day, Sirius comes back to his flat to find the protective wards removed, blood on the carpet and his family nowhere in sight. He has to choose whether to be James Potter's friend first, or his wife's husband and his son's father. SBOC
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 05/14/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

First off I can't believe it's completed! I really enjoyed this story although the ending just kind of ended if you know what I mean. I can't wait see what else you have written!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I am glad you enjoyed the story. Don\'t worry about the ending, there is another story after this one that will (hopefully) be posted here. That\'s if I don\'t receive a refusal based on a wrong category, of course.

Tulip in the Sand by Evilevergreen

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: [WIP: 3 of 25] Their arranged marriage was a tug–of–war: a war–of–wits, a war–of–pride, a war–of–dominance. But if both ever succumb to each other, will either survive the other's trials or the real war brewing around them? [Draco Malfoy & Angelina Johnson]
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 06/18/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Arrangement

I really like the way this story has started and am really excited to see how everything turns out for Draco and Angelina.

Author's Response: I\'m really glad you are enjoying the story so far. Thanks for the review. =D

Of Pureblood Dances, Secret Disguises, and Glass Slippers by R_Ravenclaw

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: In this spoof of Cinderella, Ginny is sent on Auror business to Draco's party in which he has to find a wife. He becomes entranced with the disguised Ginny, who finds she doesn't hate him as much as she thought she would… or at all?

Epilogue disregarded.
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 03/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

I love it! I can't wait to see what happens at the Ball!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

The Business of Strawberry Cheesecake by Pondering

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Draco/Luna. The Quibbler is in great need of financial funding, and the only person to express any interest in it whatsoever is Draco Malfoy. However, is the Quibbler what he is really interested in?
Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 09/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Strawberry Cheesecake

This is such a cute little story! I loved how you wrote Draco. He was so formal with Luna and yet it was obvious that he wanted sometime more… and not just strawberry cheesecake. I also found Luna to be sweet and very in character.
I also wanted to let you know that this story has been picked for the Ravenclaw Story of the Week! I hope you get some great reviews.

Bare by Northumbrian

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
All I ever wanted to do was fit in and be normal. I wanted friends, a nice boy, marriage and kids, the usual stuff. It wasn’t much to hope for.

Fighting a war can leave scars, and you can't always hide them.

This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw writing for the Madam Pomfrey One-Shot Triathlon - Round Two: Minor Canon Characters, Prompt 1 (encounter with a mythical creature).

Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 05/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Bare

I really liked this story. It was interesting to read a story about a character that didn’t have a real happy ending at the end of the series. I enjoyed learning more about Lavender and her struggle to hold herself together after the accident. I especially liked the part about the werewolf attack I was not expecting it.

Author's Response: Thanks, as I pointed out, this story is a guess the narrator (and guess whats wrong with her) fic. I accept that reviews will often be spoilers. And Id like to apologise to the reviewer whos deleted a review. There was no need. Ill just have to accept the spoilers. N

Collateral Damage by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

Albus Potter had what some would call a fascinating job -- working for the Magical Law Enforcement's intelligence department. But when suspicious activity caused the Ministry to think the infamous Knights of Walpurgis were up to something, their leading expert was called into action.

In disguise and out of his mind, Albus embarked on an impossible task, but when things started turning for the worse, why were his only thoughts about the one person he would hurt along the way?


This story was nominated for a 2011 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Next-Generation Story AND Best Same-Sex Pairing Story

Reviewer: dancingwithneville Signed
Date: 01/12/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I was blown away by this chapter and can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. It is a rather strange story, but there is something to be said for thinking outside the box. :D