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The Power of Suggestion by DragonDi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Remus Lupin and Potions class have never been the best of friends. And then he brews something unusual... “It’s like some kind of liquid Imperius! You tell me to do something and I want to do it!” Sirius shouted.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Strong Profanity

Word count: 5137 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/12/09 Updated: 03/22/09


Reviewer: AJRoald Signed
Date: 03/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for a wonderful story! Your characterization of the Marauders was brilliant - some of the best I've read (and I've been reading fanfic for a *few* years lol)

The interactions were perfect - just enough Peter to remind us he was their friend (but not too much), James and Sirius playful banter to get Remus to do what they wanted, and Remus' reaction to them - pure genious. Thanks again!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I've had a bad couple of days, so your wonderful review and kind words were exactly what I needed to cheer me up! I'm glad you thought the characterisations were done well--if they're too off-kilter from what everyone expects/thinks, it'll destroy a story quicker than anything, so when anyone tells me I've done a good job with that, I feel like I've accomplished something. Thanks again for your warm review!

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