Penname: Gary Potter [Contact]
Real name: Mike Sullivan
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A recent college grad who enjoys writting short stories or any other creative writing activites. I was not an english major, but have a strong imagination and see writting as an outlet for it.
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To See You Through The Dark by Narwen3
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 1598]

Summary: PRE-HBP!!! Harry starts out his sixth year in sorrow at the loss of Sirius. Ginny helps him to overcome it, and our heroes learn a lot about life and love. This story has been completed! Special thanks to my mod, Danielle and to my fantastic readers!

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 70054 Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/02/04 Updated: 06/01/06


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 28: Easier to Give

That part with Viktor was bad. It seemed way out of place. All of a sudden you typed viktor with his accent and his advice seemed out of date and our of place

 

Summary: It is Harry's sixth year at Hogwarts and Voldemort is getting stronger again. Meanwhile, Harry finds love in the eyes of Hermione Granger. Will they be able to deal with Voldemort and his death-eaters??? Please read and review.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 22583 Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/12/04 Updated: 04/15/05


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 08/20/07 Title: Chapter 5: You're definitely not a boy after all.

Amazing chapter. One of the most well written kissing scenes or chapters. Amazinging well done. I can't say enough.

 
Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 08/20/07 Title: Chapter 6: The pleasures of solitude

Again a very well written chapter. You've caputred the emotions of an adolesecent teen very well. I know I'm reading this over 2 years after you wrote it, but I'd like to read more stories by you.

 

Daddy by blondebouncingferret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1739]

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 40801 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/02/05 Updated: 03/21/06


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

keep an eye on your best friend. Hillarious and I'm still smiling. I'll be honest, I read the summary of your story about 5 times, and each time I skipped over it not wanting to read it, but I finally decided to because so many people said it was a great story. It really was and I'm glad I read it!

 

Just Like Him by SecretKeeper
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 36]

Summary: ONE-SHOT. Minor fluff warning. There was just no way around it. Whether it was necessary or not, heroic or not, there was simply no escaping the fact of his actions. He had killed. And he made me just like him… Harry thought miserably.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6352 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/16/05 Updated: 05/31/05


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 08/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just Like Him

Beautiful

 

Last Peaceful Days by Ravensgryff
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 86]

Summary: Past Featured StorySet in the summer immediately following HBP. This is a sequel to Before It’s Too Late. It’s the day before the big wedding. Ron and Hermione take advantage of some alone time before Harry joins them at the Burrow. Mrs. Weasley and Ginny have a heart to heart talk about Harry and a bit about the first war. HBP Spoilers.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6824 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/10/05 Updated: 12/12/05


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 2: Nighttime Surprises

Cute and very well written until you got to the proposal, that might have been a little much, but we'll see with the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 3: Gateway to the Next Stage

Very nice finish. Well done

 

Guilt and Innocence by Cassie Payne
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 87]

Summary: Harry and Ginny spend a "happy hour by the lake" while Harry wrestles with his guilty feelings about taking the physical relationship farther. (rated cautiously!)

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5227 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/28/05 Updated: 08/28/05


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 07/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: one shot

what happened to your story. Before you know it there is too much going on and too many characters appearing. You didn't need the treavor the toad part.

 

Harry and The Love by rockeye
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 624]

Summary: This story starts a few days after the end of HBP. Harry has already had one shock to him, so what are a few more? Mainly H/G with R/Hr and other pairings. AU since its my version of book seven.



Read Bio, important info to be revealed.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 82158 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/11/05 Updated: 03/31/06


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Will

This first chapter jumps around too much, suddenly something new happens and is loosely explained or not even explained. Despite seeing a lot of good reviews I will not read any more of this story.

 

Avenged Sevenfold by SecretKeeper
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 363]

Summary: Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting


UPDATE: Guys, I'm back!

The innocence I’ve lost
The blood it's cost
Leaves unhealed scars within.
But I will not abate,
I will employ the hate
That has been planted deep inside.
I will not falter
Valor will not tire,
And I will survive
This trial by fire.


Many things are different now. Potions class is the least of the trio's worries. Battling dragons would be a welcome alternative to what it is they're attempting to battle now. The Order of the Phoenix is hallow without its leading member. And when someone close to Harry is stolen, Dumbledore's rhetoric of love, hope, and faith is challenged. Harry's strength and resolve are pushed to their limits. Loyalties are tested and new leaders emerge while Harry and Hermione struggle to balance new emotions and uncharted territory. Yet while this time after sixth year proves to be drastically unlike anything Harry's ever experienced, some truths remain, and some affections stand solid.

A novel-type story that explores the engimas of Snape, Horcruxes, war, and above all, the puzzle of love. HBP compliant. HHr.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 63389 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
11/29/05 Updated: 04/16/07


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 08/23/07 Title: Chapter 15: Knocks on Doors

I'd submit a blank review if possible because I'm speechless at how amazing this story is. It is much deeper and mature than J.K's Potter stories, but thats what makes it amazing. Its your own story, you're not trying to impersonate another author.
I'm a recent college grad with a poly sci major, but I hope you're able to do something great with your english major...

 
Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 10/24/07 Title: Chapter 15: Knocks on Doors

If this story goes unfinished it will go down in history as one of the greatest unfinished pieces of work....... However, I hope it gets finsihed

 

Summary: Past Featured Story


My take on how events may pan out in book seven. Spoilers from all previous HP books.



The events of the previous year have brought home to Harry the realization of what has to be done, and the knowledge that it must be done alone. Now as he sets off on his final quest, making new acquaintances along the way, he must bring all his knowledge and skill to bear in his effort to destroy Lord Voldemort. But will it be enough, or is there something that he has missed which might prove to be his undoing?




Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 57733 Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Published:
01/09/06 Updated: 10/30/08


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Wedding Bells

What just happened?

 
Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 10/17/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Mind of Harry Potter

I've really become quite enchanted by your 7th book. Hope it continues

 
Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 10/17/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Mind of Harry Potter

I've really become quite enchanted by your 7th book. Hope it continues

 

Summary: Set in HBP: Hermione and Ginny escape the Great Hall for some solitude. Misery loves company. A bottle of butterbeer, a heafty slice of chocolate cake, and an unexpected visitor put the last few months in perspective. Sometimes funny and often heartfelt, Butterbeer And Chocolate Cake takes the sting out of cupids misplaced arrows.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4482 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/17/06 Updated: 01/17/06


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 07/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Well written and a very nice 'missing piece' to the HBP. I enjoyed it throughly

 

The Seventh Horcrux by Melindaleo
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1198]

Summary: The hunt for the Horcruxes begins. Harry has to decide who to trust as he moves closer to fulfilling his destiny. Will he be able to find and destroy all the Horcruxes? And at what price? Will he be able to find the strength within himself – the Power the Dark Lord Knows Not – in order to succeed in vanquishing Voldemort? And…can he do it and still get the girl? Join Harry and his faithful friends on their quest to finally defeat a Dark Lord.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 303697 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/17/06 Updated: 11/11/06


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 10/18/07 Title: Chapter 3: ...And Another One Opens

Great chapter, couldn't stop laughing. I love the lines you wrote for Fred and George, and the Gnome screaming all the way, just made me laugh out loud!

 
Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 10/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets Unraveled

Me like

 

Summary: A 7th year fic in which Harry, Ron and Hermione search for the remaining Horcruxes and ultimately battle Voldemort. Post HBP; in canon, no slash. H/G R/Hr

Chapter 25 is up; Chapter 26 is with my beta!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 101902 Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Published:
01/06/07 Updated: 10/16/07


Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Revelations

we have to do things that other people may not like, not for ourselves but for others

One of my favorite, if not favorite, quote I've read

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a bunch, I really appreciate it! Glad you enjoyed :)

 
Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 10/16/07 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Christmas at Grimmauld Place

What a cliff-hanger. I knew I should have waited to read this until your next chapter was in queue!

 
Reviewer: Gary Potter Signed
Date: 10/16/07 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Christmas at Grimmauld Place

What a cliff-hanger. I knew I should have waited to read this until your next chapter was in queue!

 
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