Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!
uh oh, i wonder who it is?
it couldn't possibly be snape, snape, severus snape?
just a random guess.
um, this is sort of weird...
Summary: Remus Lupin has a secret that not even his best friends Peter, Sirius and James know. He can't let anyone know because this secret is about none other than Lily Evans. (Please review)
that's pretty much all i can say. that was an amazing story. so so sad. i cried. you are an amazing writer. oh my god, i know the harry potter stories so well and this is a completely different take but it was all so believable. this is such a good piece of writing - you should have made it longer. poor poor remus. it would've been cool to have a little bit with harry potter in there but it was just perfect the way it was. wow. wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow. that story is terribly-erribly depressing, but not over the top, and gorgeously put. oh, how i envy you!
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Wow. This is such a story! Congrats, I really like it.
oh. my. god.
things are starting to heat up...
Oh, it's so joyous! I love it.
Just one thing; the Voldemort thing seemed a bit rushed to me. I know what it's like - I've got this hundred and twenty something page story and I just can't wait to finish it, so everything is so rushed. It's trivial so there's no real need to change it now, but just a hint for stories to come.
P.S. this is probably one of my favourite stories for the lovely writing. Good job.
That was such a beautiful story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!
Summary: Rather suddenly Hermione found herself single and out on her own. Luckily for her, Harry has a spare bedroom. But when the fit hits the shan, will they be able to come out the other end sane? That remains to be seen ... Chapter EIGHT is HERE! YAY! Please enjoy. Warning: mild to severe language.
Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.
hey, is the boy ginny's dancing with seamus?
Summary: A shock comes at the end of Hermione's fifth year and it will forever change her life. As she and her friends enter their sixth year, amid the second war, a frightening prophecy is made. A prophecy which will alter the Wizarding World and bring about a Christmas no one will forget.
Interesting, but what I'm wondering is, if it isn't Harry's child hermione is carrying, then whose is it?
Summary: "What can I say?" James shrugged his shoulders. "We are just obviously,"
James laughed, "Meant to be."
Lily Evans and James Potter share absolutely nothing in common, not even their feelings for each other. Lily, perceived as a ‘model student,’ detests the handsome, popular, Quidditch star James, who she thinks to be something of a git. James, on the contrary, has been infatuated with Lily for years, and has let her and the whole school know it.
As time progresses into Voldemort’s ‘reign of terror,’ the two have to learn to trust, tolerate, and love each other.
Please note, this story is incomplete, and will likely remain so for a long time. I apologize!
sorry about lack of reviews - interesting, interesting. a private lounge? that's too stylish even for hogwarts! oh well. i'll believe in it because that's what story telling is all about. OMG poor petunia - i can imagine why she hates magic so much if she came home to find her parents dead, lily gone and the house completely destroyed. anyways must keep reading!
Is Professor Voyant's first name 'clair' by any chance?
Author's Response: haha it is now. :)
ooh it's so gorgeous.
i'm a sucker for lily/james love stories btw.
oh my god not james too!
they're dropping like flies.
okay. i didn't think potter's death had anything to do with the evans' death. it's all coming together...
oh no. that's it? hurry up, i need more!
i reckon it's a pretty interesting change to the norm - congrats. i'm excited to see were this goes... and as of yet, i can't think of any mistakes (which i like to look for, being a jerk) although i was just wondering how james charmed the parchment with the Trace still on him. Unless he charmed it at school, but anyway. i am in love with the angry lily and cocky james predicament too, it's such a good invention. JK Rowling is the master of the theory 'opposites attract' - well, in the end, anyway. thanks for such an entertaining story, by the way, but i think i'll stop now so i can keep reading. sorry, but i reckon i'll have to send an extensive comment for almost every chapter. well, bye!
i still don't understand why voldemort turned up just to murder lily evans but i'll take your word for it...
Summary: Told all in the point-of-views of Lily and James. Lily Evans doesn’t have time for guys—between prefect duties, all her homework, and helping her friends with their messy breakups, she barely has time for herself (or so she thinks). And then there’s James Potter—he’s been asking her out every day since they were second years (and been staring at her like an idiot for a lot longer besides). When will she realize that James Potter isn’t joking and that she has feelings for him, too? It's basically the story of what happened to Lily, James, and their friends during their seventh year at Hogwarts (and I have to admit, theres's definitely some romance. Between Lily and James and other people...). WARNING: IF SUICIDE, ALCOHOL ABUSE, OR SELF-INJURY OFFENDS YOU, DON'T READ! IT DOES NOT GO INTO GREAT DETAIL, HENCE THE PG-13, BUT IT CONTAINS ALL OF THIS!!
Wow. congrats on such a cool story. Constructive critisism: it all happened too fast for me. Maybe next time introduce more of your characters before killing them off. But that's just a pointer. Otherwise, you have a really good writing style and the text flows really well.