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Too Far Gone by Gemmika

Rated: Professors •
Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/18/07 Title: Chapter 2: Starlting Revelations

uh oh, i wonder who it is?

it couldn't possibly be snape, snape, severus snape?

just a random guess.

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/18/07 Title: Chapter 6: Rehab and Healing Words

um, this is sort of weird...

Solitude by snuffles2984

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Remus Lupin has a secret that not even his best friends Peter, Sirius and James know. He can't let anyone know because this secret is about none other than Lily Evans. (Please review)
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Solitude


that's pretty much all i can say. that was an amazing story. so so sad. i cried. you are an amazing writer. oh my god, i know the harry potter stories so well and this is a completely different take but it was all so believable. this is such a good piece of writing - you should have made it longer. poor poor remus. it would've been cool to have a little bit with harry potter in there but it was just perfect the way it was. wow. wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow. that story is terribly-erribly depressing, but not over the top, and gorgeously put. oh, how i envy you!
love ella


Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Letters From Home

Uh oh...

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Choices

Wow. This is such a story! Congrats, I really like it.

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Clearing the Air

oh. my. god.
things are starting to heat up...

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 14: Quidditch and Goodwill

Oh, it's so joyous! I love it.
Just one thing; the Voldemort thing seemed a bit rushed to me. I know what it's like - I've got this hundred and twenty something page story and I just can't wait to finish it, so everything is so rushed. It's trivial so there's no real need to change it now, but just a hint for stories to come.
P.S. this is probably one of my favourite stories for the lovely writing. Good job.

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: In Her Father's Arms

That was such a beautiful story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

Odd Couple by Raven_Stag

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Rather suddenly Hermione found herself single and out on her own. Luckily for her, Harry has a spare bedroom. But when the fit hits the shan, will they be able to come out the other end sane? That remains to be seen ... Chapter EIGHT is HERE! YAY! Please enjoy. Warning: mild to severe language.
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 09/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Aftermath


From the Notebooks of Hermione by SpellBound05

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/24/07 Title: Chapter 18: Falling

hey, is the boy ginny's dancing with seamus?

O Holy Night by innocence_wasted

Rated: Professors •
Summary: A shock comes at the end of Hermione's fifth year and it will forever change her life. As she and her friends enter their sixth year, amid the second war, a frightening prophecy is made. A prophecy which will alter the Wizarding World and bring about a Christmas no one will forget.
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 03/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Truth be Told

Interesting, but what I'm wondering is, if it isn't Harry's child hermione is carrying, then whose is it?

Moving On by brunahilda171

Summary: Told all in the point-of-views of Lily and James. Lily Evans doesn’t have time for guys—between prefect duties, all her homework, and helping her friends with their messy breakups, she barely has time for herself (or so she thinks). And then there’s James Potter—he’s been asking her out every day since they were second years (and been staring at her like an idiot for a lot longer besides). When will she realize that James Potter isn’t joking and that she has feelings for him, too? It's basically the story of what happened to Lily, James, and their friends during their seventh year at Hogwarts (and I have to admit, theres's definitely some romance. Between Lily and James and other people...). WARNING: IF SUICIDE, ALCOHOL ABUSE, OR SELF-INJURY OFFENDS YOU, DON'T READ! IT DOES NOT GO INTO GREAT DETAIL, HENCE THE PG-13, BUT IT CONTAINS ALL OF THIS!!
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. congrats on such a cool story. Constructive critisism: it all happened too fast for me. Maybe next time introduce more of your characters before killing them off. But that's just a pointer. Otherwise, you have a really good writing style and the text flows really well.

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It's pretty funny; I have this friend called Eve and she's the exact opposite of yours. Tiny, shy, quiet: when answering questions in class you have to strain your ears to hear her. In her former life I reckon she was a mouse. So it's a bit weird getting to know this new Eve who's a totally different character to mine. But you're doing a really good job convincing me. I love it.

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ooh, it's getting interesting...

Lily Evans, This Is Her Life by AbnormallyAbnormal

Summary: A typical LilyJames story, but with few twists. Lily is a Marauder and is best friends with James. If you are looking for pink hair-dye, Truth or Dare and revenge on evil Slytherins, then this is the story for you!
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Pink hair and Truth or Dare

okay, it's cool and all, but there's just a few things...
please don't use so many exclamation marks. they are the most pointless type of punctuation and they can get really annoying and make the narrator sound like a blonde, big-boobed bimbo. Also, wasn't james openly in love with lily? anyway, the storyline is pretty good and i'm interested to see how it's going to unravel, but i really hope you take some of those tips on board.

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 2: Conversations and Explanations

gosh, after saying 'oh, hey, lils' and 'lils, we have to talk' james only said two other words? sorry i'm so cynical, but...
p.s. i like sammy's character

Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 3: Walks and Talks

ooh, i wanna know what hapens.
Exclamation mark police - ew, they're so unnecessary.
p.s. there weren't any firebolts when lily and james were at school; they were invented in harry's third year.

Not Another Teen Love Story by 365 letters_ryan gosling 20

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This is not your typical love story. It begins in the summer before James' and Lily's seventh year. Lily gets a letter from Remus about Dumbledore's surprising choice for Head Boy. Is Lily happy about this choice? Will James finally win Lily over in the last year that he has left? Read to find out more!

Last chapter in queue!!!
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 04/27/08 Title: Chapter 8: Rejected For the First Time

I like the Remus/Sirius bet, but it seems all too neat and tidy having their crushes both like them back. I'm just hoping that Sirius loses the bet - it would be very cool having him 'profess his undying love' to McGonagal!

James's Sketchbook by Houlestar

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Lily placed the violin on the floor, the sorrowful song only added to her misery. She could still feel Snape’s kiss on her mouth, and wondered why she had done such a thing. Looking up at the doorway she saw James standing there, and a new emotion filled her, something she hadn’t felt before...
Reviewer: ella_wyse Signed
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

um, i thought lily hated james?
or are they in love already?
sorry, i'm lost, but otherwise, it's good.