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Daughter of the Dark Side by Lyra Lestrange
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 305]

Summary: Past Featured Story

Lindsey Tonks appears to be a normal, almost invisible Hogwarts student, but underneath her is someone far from normal. What the world doesn't know is that Lindsey is the daughter of two well-known imprisoned Death Eaters, and has an identity she must hide from the world. Underneath Lindsey is a girl named Lyra Lestrange, a girl who is meant to be a secret forever. But will it last forever?

*Begins in GoF and follows the series through DH.

**Will appeal to fans of the Black family! Prominent characters are Bellatrix, Tonks, Andromeda, Sirius, and (to an extent) Narcissa.

Part Four Synopsis:

It's the summer after Albus Dumbledore's death, and the whole world is falling to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Broken-hearted Lyra, unable to return to Hogwarts, must go into hiding with her family. It doesn't last long, and eventually Lyra is faced with a choice: join or die. Lyra's decision comes with many surprises, including a new ally who follows her to the final battle of good versus evil. While Lyra's path may seem clear, she finds herself torn between two sides for the final time, and in the end, despite tragedy and loss, Lyra accomplishes the impossible...which defies all of the agreements she and her family ever made.

Three years later, the fic has been completely finished! Enjoy reading it without having to wait for new chapters. Thanks to those who patiently waited and faithfully reviewed!



Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 156762 Chapters: 57 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/25/08 Updated: 03/05/11


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 02/08/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16- Christmas at Grimmauld Place

Hi Miss Lyra :)

Sorry for being quiet but I have been busy with college. As you already know I love your story and I thought this was a great chapter.

Not sure if I have a favorite, but iI really enjoyed this one and I loved the Kreacher part.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

Author's Response:

Hey! I was wondering where you were. I understand about being busy, though. I'm busy with school, too, and I'm just in high school, so I can't even begin to imagine college. But thanks for dropping me a review. I'm glad you like the Kreacher part. It seems like a few people do. I thought it might be a good way to end a chapter.

 

Summary: A potion has been created that has the ability to strip a wizard of their powers: a potion the Ministry of Magic couldn't wait to get their hands on. After the Battle of Hogwarts, lesser convicted Death Eaters are given a choice: go to Azkaban, or spend the rest of their lives as Muggles. While many people refused such a degrading option as a matter of pride, one Draco Malfoy chose the potion. Now, cast into the city of London, Draco both struggles with, and eventually enjoys his adaptation into the Muggle way of life.

But what happens when the effects of the potion turn out to be not-so permanent?



Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 11880 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
05/13/08 Updated: 07/20/09


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 07/21/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Shaming the Ancestors

Let be honest: I had lost the interst in HP fanfiction and the only story I were reading was a favorite of mine, because I still get a mail when it is updated - but today I strumbled across your story and I have seen you on the Betaforums so I knew you were a person with a lot of opnions so I thought I want to give your story a try. Especially because I thought the story it self sounded excting.

So now back to the review: I thought this is great story so far. I love the story idea it is very unique and orginal. Your choice for the title is also good because it makes you as a reader - be courious.

I loved this chapter I felt sorry for Draco. Your charactizon (Damm my spelling) of Draco is wonerful - very in in - character. I liked the girl with a balloon. Oh about the tricket thing I have never tried to get a tricket thing myself so I could complety see myself in Draco's place. ;)

What I love about your story is your style of writing. You are very good at describering things, you makes one feel, you are there etc.

So I am looking forward to the next chapter,
And thanks for giving my interst in HP fanfiction back.

Author's Response: Wow! What high praise! I hope I can continue to keep your interest.

 

Shining Through Blackness by luinrina
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 49]

Summary: Past Featured StoryIsla was born into a well-known and respected family: the Blacks. She grew up with their traditions and was proud to be who she was – until she met someone who showed her that what she knew was not the only world.

Follow a young witch through her teenage years and discover how a traditional one will change and rebel against what she believed was the only truth.

~ * ~


Due to plot development in chapters nine and ten I've changed the warning from "None" to "Sexual Situations" for the rest of the story. In some chapters there are still punishments which do not qualify as “Abuse”; those are meant as reprimands for bad behaviour, a common method in the middle of the nineteenth century. If you can’t stand children being smacked by parents or others as well as any sexual situation occuring, do not read that story. You have been warned…


Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 75406 Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Published:
05/14/08 Updated: 05/22/10


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 04/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Soon

Hello Bine,

Finally I got time and a chance to read a story of yours! And this is one I have wanted to read for a long time.

You are great at writing I must say. It is a great chapter and I already want more, when I am finished with this chapter I am off to the next. You are great at describing things and you really make me feel as I am there.

Tatjana

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words, Tatty. :) *hugs*

 
Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 04/04/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Slytherin

Another great chapter :D I really like this story and I really liked the Sorting Hat part, I always think it is interstering to hear what the hat says . (I always wonder what the hat would have said to me.. okay now I am rambling)

Off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: lol Thanks again. Enjoy the rest.

 

Für Das Größere Wohl by Tim the Enchanter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 70]

Summary: Past Featured StoryDieter Heydrich is a model German boy. He has perfect Aryan complexion, is an exemplary member of the Hitler Youth, and is fanatically loyal to his beloved Führer.

But on his eleventh birthday, Dieter discovers a hidden magical world led by an extraordinary wizard named Gellert Grindelwald…


Nominated for QSQ 2009, Best History/Mystery.
WINNER of QSQ 2009, Best Male Original Character.


Note: As you might have guessed, Für Das Größere Wohl is German, meaning: “For the Greater Good.” Yes, this story is from the perspective of the bad guys.

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 85950 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
08/18/08 Updated: 01/05/11


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I: Auf Wiedersehen, Herr Schwalbe

Dear Tim,

What an interstering story and I have now added it to my favorites. I am looking forward to see the next chapter and I hope that you will finish this one.

More I can say that one thing I like especially is, that apart from this great plot and idea, is that you are VERY good at dreibering things instead of just dialogs, as I have read many fanfic in that way.

Agian - you have done a great job so far.

Tatjana Black

Author's Response:

Salutations, Tatjana Black!

Thank you for reviewing my story! I actually wrote this story simply because I wondered how Nazi Germany and Grindelwald’s Germany influenced each other, and what that magical dictatorship would have been like. Creating a story and characters to go with it was a bit of an afterthought!

Also, I’m glad that you like my writing style. Dialogue is useful, but nobody wants to read a story where two characters just talk to each other! I think that you can explore a character in depth with body language, thoughts, and actions, in addition to just plain old speech.

Tim the Enchanter

 

A Christmas Miracle by Sly Severus
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Andromeda spends her first Christmas with Teddy, which is also her first Christmas without her husband and daughter.

This is a Winter Snows entry by Sly Severus of Slytherin for a Reflecting Christmas.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2796 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/24/08 Updated: 11/24/08


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 11/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Christmas Miracle

Oh you just made my day. Det var en vidunderlig historie

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.

 
Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 11/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Christmas Miracle

Stupid review box deleted half of my enry but the sentence I wrote means it was a wonderful story

Author's Response: Lol. Thank you.

Author's Response: Lol. Thank you.

 

This Is Where You Belong by luinrina
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Harry has seen many Christmases; some of them were cruel and cold, others were what a Christmas should be – a holiday of love, celebrated with family and friends.

Will this year be as bright as the best Christmases Harry has experienced? Or will the memories of decades back close in on him?

~*~


I am luinrina of Hufflepuff, writing for the Reflecting Christmas prompt (#2) of the Winter Snows challenge in the Great Hall.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2649 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/13/08 Updated: 12/23/08


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 12/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: This Is Where You Belong

Liebe Bine,

I thought I would give you an review before I go to sleep. As you already know I think this a great Christmas story, and you made me smile and I really felt I was there. Also I liked the flashback about one of Harrys' Christmas. It was good. You are great at writing.

I wish you a very Christmas.

Tatjana

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Tatty! *squishes* Merry Christmas to you, too. :)

 

Black Christmas by Sly Severus
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Christmas at the Black's is never fun. In an attempt to make the holiday season a little more special for Narcissa, Bella meets someone who will change her life forever.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Substance Abuse

Word count: 1595 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/24/08 Updated: 12/24/08


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 12/25/08 Title: Chapter 1: Black Christmas

It kind of shocked me a bit that it was the Dark Lord in the end, but in a good way. I think it is only fic where I have seen him before he got to be really evil and no human. Interstering. I really really like this fic. You did great job and as always I love your Bella.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It gave me something to do on Christmas Eve. :D

 

A Certain Slant of Light by Hatusu
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 61]

Summary: Past Featured Story

At age fifteen, Regulus Black became sole heir to the largest fortune in Wizarding London. At sixteen, his abnormal intelligence won him entry into the most notorious cult of Dark wizards on earth. At seventeen he made a mistake – one that he would never be able to take back – and his entire world came crashing down.

Enter London, 1979. The story of a boy who managed to defy Voldemort at the height of his regime. But what price did he have to pay?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Non-Consensual Sex, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 65364 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
01/11/09 Updated: 11/15/09


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 01/30/09 Title: Chapter 2: Duality of Light

Normally I am very careful about what I read and I don't very often read Proffesor rated stories, but I decided to give this one a try becuase I simply loved your other story - the travel one. Also because I have a thing for the Blacks.

I really enjoyed this one so far. You did a great job with all the Blacks. But what I like most about this story and about the others you have written it is the way you write. You write in a way, so you simply just are there. You have good dialoges, are good are describing things.

Do you write non - fanfiction? Because I think you would be really good at that. I think you could be an auother.

I am looking forward to read more.

Tatiana

Author's Response: Thank you - I am flattered that you decided to overlook the Professor rating and give this story a chance. Most of it is minimally explicit (a few swear words here or there) except for chapter four, which is the reason I had to rate it Professors.

Thank you again, for the compliment about the way I write. More that with any other story, I paid special attention to wording and style in this one, so I am glad you noticed it. As for non-fiction, I have tried to write it, but I am not very good at it yet, and it doesn't come easily. I will keep trying until I get something good, though. :) Thank you, this review was very inspiring. Enjoy the future chapters!

 

Act of Innocence by Indigoenigma
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Somewhere there's a happy medium between innocence and evil. Minerva, though, doesn't know where that might be.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4713 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/29/09 Updated: 04/05/09


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 04/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Fantasy

Do you know how much I love this one? I really like it. so belieave and characters IC. Really loved it agian, you have nice writing style.

Tatjana

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm SO glad that you liked it.

 

From Here On Out by luinrina
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1]

Summary:

How did we get here
When I used to know you so well?


Making a decision is never easy – especially if it could mean more than just a break up. And the power emotions hold is stronger than Isla Black thought possible. Will she be able to stand up to it all? And what will Savaric Orwell’s reaction be?

~*~

This one-shot is a companion to Shining Through Blackness.


Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 4351 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/23/09 Updated: 07/23/09


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 07/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Fools of Ourselves

Hi Biinee :-) Godmorning.
Well I really liked it - and I have not even read your other story. But I am off to read it now that is for sure.:)

Anyway I thought it was great. I really like your writing style.

~ Tatjana.

Author's Response: Thanks, Tatty. :)

 

Take Me Far Away by Karaley Dargen
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: In his school years, Remus Lupin became known as a "bookworm": Where he went, he usually went with something to read. But those weren't textbooks, as many of his fellow students originally thought – they were books of great adventures, of other worlds, that drew him in and let him forget about his worries.

But how did this boy grow to love, even to need books so much? When Remus Lupin was a child, there was little he could do; his overprotective father never let him go outside on his own, and least of all was he allowed to play with other children. But he had other friends – he had his books, to take him far away, to different places.

Until one day, a stranger arrives at the Lupins' doorstep, and he might not need his books to find a different world anymore after all.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2878 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
09/04/09 Updated: 10/11/09


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 10/14/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Kara,

What can I say? Das ist sehr gut. :D You are such good at writing.. and I am not lying, but I could not help to have a tear or two in my eyes after :

Dad?” Remus asked, suddenly insecure. “Will I really have to stay there all alone?”

and so I teared up by his father's answer.
Anyway I enjoyed so much reading this chapter and I am looking forward to the next one.

*kram*

~ Tatjana

 
Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 09/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Kara,

As I said before I really wanted to read your stories. I think this is the one I have read before, but I have never posted a review but now when I finally figured out my password
then I decided to tell you my opnion.

I really enjoyed your story. I read it so quick because it has such a nice flow. I also really liked the way you protayed Remus.

The beginning was very good.

Hello,” the old man said, and looked at him kindly. “You’re Remus, I’d guess?” And, looking at the book the boy was holding tightly to his chest, he added, “Dickens? You don’t meet many wizards who enjoy Muggle literature, especially not at such a young age.”

^ I really liked so that you put the name 'Dickens' in the paragraph. :-) By the way this paragraph also made me smile, because I so clear could picture Remus and that is a good thing I guess, because when you can see the things, you read, then the writing is good.

I also think that you protayed Dumbledore very well and Remus' father. I enjoyed reading the dialouge between them especially this part.

And the ending is very good as well ^^

~ Tatjana

 

Carpe Diem by Karaley Dargen
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Carrie McKinnon, soon-to-be seventh year Hufflepuff, is not going to let the war get her down. However, it is going to affect her in one way or another – and maybe that's a good thing.


Sirius/OC


This is for Carole/EquinoxChick, and much less than she deserves. You are an incredible, magnificent person, and I still completely fangirl you. If I ever get close to what you are/have now, just talent-wise and with all the ideas you always have, I'd be happy. I really admire you and what you do a lot, so don't ever change.

Muchas muchas Gracias to Nat/hestiajones for helping me out, event though she should have been in bed.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2572 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/21/11 Updated: 03/21/11


Reviewer: tatjanablack Signed
Date: 04/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Carpe Diem

Hallo Kara,
Finally I got around to read it. I thought it was such a great read. What I espcially liked was how neautral it was the dialouges ^^

 
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