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The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5423]

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 154682 Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Published:
01/17/05 Updated: 05/22/06


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 11/06/07 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

OMG!!!!!you better update soon or I will personally come and kill you with my own two bare hands! That was sooo bloody fantastic!!!!!!!!!! Seriously though, you better update soon. I'm sure the other readers and I will get very mad otherwise. Well anyway, i think that the Love-Knot comes off because when they said that they hated eachother they meant in their hearts "I love you!" and that was what the love-knot was supposed to do. please update soon though! sometime before thanksgiving if possible or christmas at the latest! love u and your fabulous story!
The_Undomiel

 
Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 11/06/07 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

hey, i know you probably wont respond to this but i just wanted to tell/ask you to please update your personal info because it says that chapter 37 will be out in mid-September but we are now on chapter 39! i cant believe it

 

Love Is Pain by PhoenixCGandAC
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 95]

Summary: ONE SHOT - Love is a delicate thing not to be meddled with. When it is, hearts end up torn, ripped apart and abandoned. Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger share a love indescribable. That’s why it was destined to end. And it ended too soon. For both of them.


"Hermione, I love you and I would do anything for you," Draco whispered.

"Then do me a favor. Don't break my heart. You've already shattered it beyond anyone's repair but your own. I need you to stay and fix it for me. I need you. How am I going to survive without you there with me?" Hermione sobbed.

NOTE: The suicide warning on this story is only for a mention of an attempted suicide. There is quite a bit of fluff and emotion included so you are forewarned.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Suicide, Character Death

Word count: 4530 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/29/05 Updated: 06/29/05


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 11/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Love is Pain

hey, pretty much loved the story except how draco died. I wish he had lived. also, the quote "I dropped a tear in the ocean. The day I find it will be the day I stop loving you." is actually a very common quote used, it is anomynous so the quote does not actually belong to her, she just used it and took credit for it (no offense to her or anything meant, it was for lack of a better phrase)

 
Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 11/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Love is Pain

hey, pretty much loved the story except how draco died. I wish he had lived. also, the quote "I dropped a tear in the ocean. The day I find it will be the day I stop loving you." is actually a very common quote used, it is anomynous so the quote does not actually belong to her, she just used it and took credit for it (no offense to her or anything meant, it was for lack of a better phrase)

 

Summary: After the fall of Voldemort, an ancient nemesis rears his head against the magical world. This time Harry is not the center of any prophecy, but can he prevent it anyway? Can a battle weary Harry Potter stand up to someone who even Voldemort feared?




Chapter 24 is in the queue

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 58988 Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Published:
11/25/05 Updated: 02/26/08


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 23: King's Gambit

I just started reading this story so I don't know when the last time you updated was but let me tell you, you had better update soon!!!!!!! I love stories where harry has almost super natural powers like in the fan fic This Means War! You are doing a great job!!!!!!!! Keep it up!

 

Summary: Consumed by her thoughts, Lily pours them out to a friend, only to find the wrong person hear them. Or is it the right one? One-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1027 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/05/05 Updated: 02/26/06


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 11/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

Very cute. also i read your profile and i wanted to recommend the Immortals series by tamora pierce for more fantasy books. and you've probably seen it but Tristan and Isolde is amazing for a romance movie. the-undomiel

 

Summary: With the death of Albus Dumbledore came the passing of the most powerful symbol against the Dark Lord Voldemort. Now the Death Eaters are more active than ever, the Wizarding World is in mourning, the Order of the Phoenix has to regroup, and Harry Potter has to follow the path set before him. But Harry will get more help than he bargained for, will have more responsibilities than expected, and will find a spell that nobody knows how to work.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 151830 Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Published:
05/06/06 Updated: 02/28/09


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 12/15/07 Title: Chapter 31: The Key and the Vault

Hey, i love this story but I am a little confused about some things 1) Where is Ginny? 2) on the last chapter, Ron and Harry had this discussion:
“You don’t think–?”
Harry waved it off. “She wouldn’t stoop that low,” he said just before a painful gasp issued from behind the curtains. “How is she?”

What are they talking about? 3) Was he bleeding (the red marks signaling that he had stolen)? thanks, the_undomiel

Author's Response: well Ginny was (forcibly) sent to beauxbatons since hogwarts was closed. understandable that little fact was forgotten by some. but she\'ll be back. i should have made that discussion in the last chapter clearer. ron was a bit worried that lavender was lettting out some negative feelings on hermione due to the break up. and no, it was just some marks that were undeniable proof that harry stole from the vault. thanks for the review.

 

Everybody Does It by Grimmrook
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 108]

Summary: *Runner Up in the 2006 Annual Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Dark/Angsty*



It's the one thing everyone must do. You can't avoid it, you can't bargain with it, you just do it. It hurts sometimes, hell, it hurts most of the time, but it's also the most natural thing in the world. One of those rare things that makes us human.







This story is included in the Epilogues story arc, however it is a side story that can be read at just about any time. it is most favorable, however, to wait until reading Epilogues Part I for certain thematic reasons.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 5552 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/06/06 Updated: 05/10/06


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 08/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Everybody Does It

Oh my god. I am surprisingly happy to say that I barely could see the computer screen through my tears. That was definately the best and most amazing story I have ever read in my entire life. That was so well written and I started crying two paragraphs in. I don't have a story to tell but when my grandmother died from breast cancer, she was in a coma so none of my aunts or my mother got to say goodbye to her. I don't really have anything else to say because this was such an amazing story. I can't say it was magnificent because it was so much more than that. It has such a powerful and spiritual meaning to me and probably everyone who reads this. I continue to read the Epilogues series and continue to think you are one of the most amazing writers I have ever read. You might be better than J.K. Rowling because you are able to connect with your ereaders and that is a very hard things to acheive but with this story you didn't have to make any effort at all. Love you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I am sorry for your loss. Breast cancer seems to me to be a vicious animal, and I wished no one had to go through with it. I am glad however that through the tears you both enjoyed this story and it meant something to you, that was, this now so late since I\'ve written it, the whole point. And your praise humbles and honors me, though I would have to defer the idea that I am better than JKR. I at least can read her stuff, I somehow can never really read my own stories, they just aggravate me for some reason. Again, thank you.

 

Summary: A man from Interpol comes to question Harry Potter as part of a murder investigation. How will Harry react? And how will this affect his search for Lord Voldemort’s Horcruxes? Plus, the question we all want answered: What will happen with Ginny?





This story picks up immediately after HBP, and is very slightly AU. But hey, aren’t they all?



Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 177505 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/18/06 Updated: 10/05/07


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 10/04/07 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Fear

I have to day that at this moment I hate you sooooo much. Awesome cliffe but I think I have it figured out for what will happen. I think that Harry will somehow deflect the curse, not at Ginny but Voldemort. I don't know how but hello! It's Harry Potter.

Author's Response: Yet another interesting theory about how Harry and Ginny will both escape with their lives. Of course, I\'m not saying one word about what happens in the next chapter. Sorry you hate me now, but I think you\'ll get over it eventually. This cliffie was just too good to resist. ;-)

 
Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 10/06/07 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Answers

Could you write a Epilogue? Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Sorry, but the second half of this chapter was the closest thing I\'ll be doing to an epilogue. I tried, and it ended up just being \"This person did this, and this other person did this, and...\" -- it wouldn\'t work. So just rest assured that Harry and Ginny do indeed live happily ever after. :-)

 

A Golden Ribbon by Periwinkle
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 40]

Summary: It's eight days until Hermione leaves Hogwarts and she is faced with a difficult situation to make that has nothing to do with her graduation. Seeking the Astronomy Tower for its isolated comfort, she finds none of it when he chooses to pay her a visit.

Will she let him go, or will she stay?

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1893 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/18/06 Updated: 07/26/06


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 12/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

omg! i love this! it is so pretty! and i love the spiritual meaning of the ribbon

 
Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 12/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

omg! i love this! it is so pretty! and i love the spiritual meaning of the ribbon

 

A Sleepwalk to Remember by Lady Knightly
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 943]

Summary: For once in her life, Hermione is faced with a problem she does not know how to solve...

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Student/Teacher Romance, Violence

Word count: 4746 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
07/26/06 Updated: 02/15/10


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 01/19/08 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

I don't care how long the chapters are, just update soon!

Author's Response: I will try, thanks for reading!

 

Escape by BlackClaude
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 36]

Summary: A ballad about my favorite conflicted hero and the lengths to which his loyalty drives him.



Second place entry in The Ballad Challenge


Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 394 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/22/07 Updated: 01/24/07


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Escape

Omg! This is so pretty and i am amzed at its length! i could never write a poem that long, for me poems just come to me and i sometimes write them down but i cant sit down and actually write a poem like based on something so Great Job!!!!! i love it so much.

 
Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Escape

Omg! This is so pretty and i am amzed at its length! i could never write a poem that long, for me poems just come to me and i sometimes write them down but i cant sit down and actually write a poem like based on something so Great Job!!!!! i love it so much.

 

Summary: Sixteen years after the conclusion of the second part of the Epilogues trilogy, the wizarding world finds itself again at the mercy of a new menace. Can England's top Aurors vanquish this new foe before time runs out?

UPDATE: With cool new links to supplemental material!

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 170122 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/31/07 Updated: 05/15/08


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 10/30/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: The Reaper

I am a little confused. I know that they are looking at the survivor's memory of the event but aren't they like moving around? How can they do that if they are watching the event through his eyes? and how did the Reaper know that they would be there? Is it because they are the leading Aurors on the case? Once again, I love your story and please update soon! Great job on everything. And I love how you put songs to the chapter as it really adds effect when you are reading the story. The_Undomiel

Author's Response: Perhaps this is my fault for not making it clearer; they are watching this in the pensieve. As you\'ll recall, memories perused in the pensieve are done so out of body, that is to say, external from the person whose memory it is. I did this specifically so I could do exactly what I did; have Ron and Harry interact, have them move around, etc. As for how the Reaper knew they would be there and take the muggle\'s memory?... well, the answer for that one will have to come in the next chapter (yes, this is a promise, we will have the answer to that and quite a bit more in the next chapter!) Thank you so much.

 

Killer Instincts by Ginny Weasley Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 228]

Summary: London: Four murders have taken place under bizarre circumstances, for what seems to be an equally bizarre reason.

Harry, a happily wedded man with a wonderful wife and a cute daughter, is an Auror at the Ministry of Magic and is now given a new case to solve with Ron and four other Aurors. Incidentally, the four Aurors include Ginny, Harry’s ‘schoolboy crush’; and it turns out to be much more than a crush when Harry sees her again. What’s more is that Harry is working upon a case that seems to connect to him directly. And once again, it opens up old fears: fears of losing loved ones.

Ron, on the other hand, seems to be tired of Hermione. Tempers are running high and fights are breaking out more often than usual. Are they really falling apart? Or can they sort this out before it is too late?

Then there is the case itself. Who is trustworthy, and who is not? Who is deadly enough to murder four people in cold blood?

Indulge into the gut-wrenching action, combined with warm romance and tingling suspense; while I tell you a story of love, ambition and obsession… a story of what those killer instincts can do. EDIT: MAJOR revamping going on, with regard to plot, characterisation, and general style of writing. I would urge you not to read this until I've removed this notice because I wasn't very good six years ago, and this is as bad as I was. *Places traffic cones*

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 130889 Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/27/07 Updated: 10/03/10


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 03/27/08 Title: Chapter 6: Interrogation

PLEASE!!!!!!! even if you have parvarti or Naina dying, you have to change that now! I started crying at the end of this chapter! please update soon, even if it is a short chapter, i am so nervous! oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I\'ll definitely update ASAP. And relax, this is only fiction! I\'m still writing the next chapter, though. Thanks for reviewing! And smile! :)\r\n

 

Hesperides' Apple by Ogygiasylph
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 228]

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhen Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 159368 Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Published:
05/06/07 Updated: 02/01/13


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 01/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: 8. Kindling suspicion

Hey! Love the story but please, when Draco finds out (since we know he will) could you have him be caring and understanding instead of mean and mad? Please?! And since I'm assuming Ginny does want to have children, does she continue to preform the conctraception spell because she is scared the
baby would have red hair? Thanks!

 

Far From Here by Marauder by Midnight
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Ginny is afraid of losing Harry, who wants her to be ready to live out the rest of her life even if he's not part of it.

Written after the release of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows but conceived before July 21, 2007. Does not incorporate any spoilers from the seventh book.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 2764 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/24/07 Updated: 07/28/07


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So is harry dead? And if so, you wrote it so elegantly! i love it. *Evenstar*

 

The Marauders by Lyra Lestrange
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Remus, Peter, Sirius, and James were best friends, but this didn't last forever. The story of the Marauder's summed up in a poem...

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 591 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/12/08 Updated: 01/21/08


Reviewer: The_Undomiel Signed
Date: 01/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Marauders

for the second part of the Sirius verse you could do

A traitor he was once thought
but a true friend he would remain

I'm not sure if you are planning to continue or not but u should!

Author's Response: I\'m sorry! The stanza about Sirius got cut off when I tried to edit, along with the rest of the poem! It\'s actually much longer than what appeared!

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