I AM NO LONGER UPDATING ON THIS SITE!!!!
I want to thank everyone who has supported me during my stay here on mugglenet and i wish things had ended differently as this was where I started my fanfiction love affair, but alas all good things must come to an end...
Very funny...i liked it....gnomes being thrown into the side of the house...very cute....i hope you keep going with this cause i like it....the only thing i jave a qustion about is if there is a reason the whole thing is in italics?
Author's Response: Thanks, this is my first fanfic, glad to know someone enjoyed it. I will be posting a second chap tonight that hopefully won't be in queue for too long. The italics is an editing glitch. Both my moderator and I tried to get rid of it but it wouldn't go away. Hopefully the next chap won't do that.
wow...ususally im pretty adept with this things but i didnt put two and two together that Bella was the snake until you spelled it out at the end...opps... poor nevell everything always does happen to him.... good chapter i cant wait until the foursome figure out the verses....keep writing.....
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm working on chapter 10 now and hope to have it up soon. There will be another trip down to the caves in chapter 10.
AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!.......what a way to make us squirm....evil evil cliffhanger....but i cant get to ad cause i know you wont make us wait too long like some people who will end a chapter like that and wait a month before updating.....I'm glad they got their items but i think the girls wouldnt have reacted that well to being "protected" like that....Ginny and Hermione are fairly independent women.... I cant wait to see harry make bellatrix pay.....great good again......
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. As for the girls' behavior, Hermione did try to protest, but Ron put his foot down. And Ginny also didn't stand idly by. It took a lot of courage for her to sacrifice her own protection by giving Harry her half of the amulet. So, even if you don't think they'd like to be protected like that, I think they both still showed that they are courageous. And I think I know what I'm going to have Harry do to Bellatrix. He won't have the pleasure of killing her (Bella's ultimate punishment will be given out by Voldemort; he will be much tired of her incompetance). But don't worry, Harry will get to put his rage towards Bella to good use. I just have to look up some Latin words for an interesting spell first!!
well then....remind me not to piss off harry.... i really liked that you had him make the decision to kill bella and had dumbledore stop him.....i thought it was very realistic...people do make the wrong decision sometimes and i liked how you showed that....another great chapter as always and as always i cant wait to find out what happens next...especially with poor milius...i like the idea of a ghost healer...thats cool....
Author's Response: I figured that if Harry was actually in front of Bella, and knew he couldn't be hurt, that he would seize the opportunity to get medevil on her buttocks!! As for Dumbledore, isn't he always saying wise things?? :) I thought he should be no different in my story. The ghost healer idea just popped into my head while I was writing. I've even got it all planned out how she can set Milius to rights. My story editor said that her cure sounds like something off of Charmed.
oooo....whats behind the tapestry? i cant wait to find out.....so update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Just have to wait till I can get chapter 4 on here. I'm going to submit it tomorrow so hopefully it'll get validated soon. Thanks for reviewing again!!! :)
Im first!!!!! yea for harry and ginny....cant wait for more with them.... is the thing with bella a new plot line or did i miss something in a previous chapter?.....great chapter i really enjoy milius i think he's cute....as always i am eagerly awaiting your next chapter...
Author's Response: The beginning of the chapter (the scene with Bellatrix) is the introduction of the *evil element* into the story. You will see the plot that is already going on...and the new evil element...slowly drawn together in chapter 9. So no...you didn't miss anything ;) Thanks for reviewing again...I think you're my most faithful reviewer!!
Aww shucks....I wanted to be the first to review the last chapter since i was the first to review the first chapter....sighs.... o well.....great last chapter although my personal favorite nickname was 'my sexy little bookworm'....but thats just me i love the future mrs weasley too....and i looooved the last line of the story...it was just too perfect.....Im glad bella got what she had coming to her.....o i also loved how a part of ginnys hair stayed purple....if you cant tell, i loved alot about this chapter as well as the whole story....great work one last time and great story......until next time
Author's Response: I know, and I'll always be thanking you for being my first ever reviewer! You reviewed all of my chapters, even before any real action started. I'm glad that you were happy with everyone's endings, and keep an eye out for the sequel!
YAYYYY!!!!!! for ron and hermione!!!!!!! Personally i like the mushy stuff, so bring it on........another great chapter and as always I'm eager for the next one to see how the quill works out and to see what is behind the doorway..... I hope you update soon like you always do, and as always i'll be keeping a look out for it.....
Author's Response: Thankyou thankyou thankyou! I was really worried about what people would think of the scene with Ron and Hermione. But after all...this is the romance category.......and what's romance without a little mush. ;) Anyways, thanks again for reviewing...I will try to get chapter 7 up tomorrow.
Another cute chapter...see you got the italic thing worked out.....i cant wait to see what happens in chapter 3 and i love how quick you update......keep writing!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again, you are terrific!!! Chapter 3 is already submitted, just waiting for validation. I have all the way to the end of chapter 6 written out by hand and am very excited to get the next few chapters out where they've arrived at Hogwarts. I hope you keep reading! (I know I'll keep reading yours!!)
what can i say....this story just keeps getting better and better..... but what is going to happen when the potion wears off....will harry nocice that she is different again or will he remember how he felt?....... your chapters arent long enough because im greedy and dont want to wait for more......so UPDATE SOON..... before i have heart attack
Author's Response: You'll be happy to know I already have the next two chapters completed. I'll get 6 on as soon as I can. Chapter 6 and 7 are double the length of my other chapters, so hopefully I can submit without being rejected. And don't worry about Ginny :) .....maybe she'll find something else that will help Harry along.(after all, she and Hermione ARE going back into the caves) You'll just have to keep reading to find out!!!!
ooooo.....great chapter....i love how you infuse humor into all of your chapters.... like the ghost sneezing hiself into bits.... this story just keeps getting ore and more interesting and i cant wait until chapter 5 is up so i can see what happens next.....
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again...you are awesome!!! It's great to hear what parts of my story grab a readers attention the most :)
awwww.... i love remus and tonks.....they are just too cute...... very god chapter with everything else as well....cant wait for the next one!!!
Author's Response: Working on it as we speak. And I would love to see the two of them together as well, Remus NEEDS some happiness. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
great chapter....i loved to read someone elses idea of potter manor.....keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Happy that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
finally!! i have been trying to review for forever...*grumbles at worsening login problems*....anyways thanks so much for the mention!!!! it totally made my morning..... i loved how you delt with kreature and that dobby wont say exactly what happened to him, bit i am personally glad that he got what he deserved....also i loved the nursery!! i have a similar idea that im going to use far when harry and ginny have their 1st baby but that is still a ways away....i also liked that you thought of buck beak....hippogriffs deserve happiness too!!! all on all a really good capter filled with all kinds of goodness!!!! update soon!
Author's Response: Hippogryphs are people too! er...well maybe not, but still. I couldn't leave him cooped up at Grimmauld Place. I am hoping that JKR does put in some punishment for Kreacher. As for Dobby, that would not be something he'd want to discuss, at least not in my twisted mind. LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Wow...great story and chapter.....You have been so great to review my stories i thought it was long overdue to return the favor so i thought i would review yours......
I loved the way Harry put Snape in his place that was just fantasitc and I'm glad that Molly lit into Petunia too even though she is all reformed now i still think she deserved to get yelled at..... I'm also very happy for our couples, they are so cute!!! there were a bunch of other things that i loved through out the story but if i said them all this review would be enormous.... update soon cause I'll be waiting....
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for the raving review! I have some further, somewhat twisted, ideas....will be getting those up asap. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
*Gasps for air* whew....sooooo funny i love this story!!!!!!! it makes me luagh so hard!!! Best part was "Neville showed his bravery in a break dancing contest against Lilí Voldemort and his gang of groupies called the Death Eaters." i just see Voldemort breakdancing on a cardboard box..... hehehe....great work!!! Oh i read your bio... its all about SoCal girls....what up from the VC (Ventura County) for those who dont know....well great chapter and i cant wait for the next one!!!!
what up home dawg, whats krackalakin..... (i am so white hehe) OMG.....So funny!!! Im in class right now so i was like crying i was trying so hard not to laugh.... i just have this mental picture of all them with their little british accents trying to be gangster.....i think that this fic is fab so keep it going.......
YAYYYY!!!!! finally....I'm so glad you have started it!!!! i have been looking forward to it.......great start i cant wait to see what happens next, so update soon
Author's Response: Oh, believe me, there's a LOT more excitement to come!!! Just wait til chapter 7. Heheheh....
wow....awsome chapter.....so very cryptic at the end, i cant wait until we find out what every one is talking about.... i really enjoed all the little funny bits....pookie.....hehehe....update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I absolutely ADORE DUmbledore. He's by far my favorite (well, besides Harry and everything). Glad you liked it!
Good Chapter.....I'm eager to hear about the little girl malfoy got and also exaclty what they have to do with their little brothers and sisters....(thats what we called it at my old school...1st graders were paired with 8th graders...)....keep up the great work....
Author's Response: Oh yes... I have BIG plans for little Aurelia. You'll like that chapter, I think. :-) Thanks for reading! (We had the little bro/sis program at my high school- only we called it 'slaves' and 'masters' behind the admin's back- heheh)