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MOMENTS OF BLISS by moonymaniac

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Remus Lupin is a man with a tragic past, filled with pain, suffering and sorrow. But it is also a past filled with great adventure, true friendship and…love? Even though the odds were against him, Remus found happiness at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He had the Marauders, he was a prefect and his transformations were less horrible, thanks to his Animagi friends. What more could a teenage werewolf want? And how long could his happiness last? Remus and the Marauders prove that in the saddest of lives and darkest of times, there can still be moments of bliss.

Remus centric but with a lot of the other Marauders. This story is a romance, but has almost as much general Marauder era background and side story as romance.
Pre-HBP and DH, so some things from DH will be disregarded, as the warning indicates, but some Spoilers will be incorporated.
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 43: Decisions, Gag Gifts and Worries Aplenty

moonymaniac, this entire fic has been incredible. i was reading the 5th book today and i was reading the scene where James tortmented Snape. all throughout that i kept relating to your story and i read that chapter in a way i had never read it before. so while i thank u for presenting this awesome version of Lupins life as a Hogwarts teen, i also have to thank u for essentially screwing up my perspective on reading all of the books, dating back to PoAzk and likely continuing into Deathly Hallows. thanks!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, first of all, thank you for the compliments. I\'m flattered that my story would make an impression, but of course, screwing up your perspective on the actual books isn\'t what I would have gone for. It has been my intention to keep the characters and the story line as canon compliant as possible, with the hopes that it would sort of flow right into the first book. I\'m not sure exactly what would make you view the books differently from what I have written (with the exception of perhaps viewing Remus as the amazing wonderful star that he should be, instead of just as a cool secondary character *wink*.) I have a friend on the forums who doesn’t read FF because of this. If you feel like dropping me a pm or an email, I’d be interested in knowing what you view differently now. But for now, I don\'t know what to say, except that I\'m sorry if it has hurt your enjoyment, somehow. :*/

A Battle of Mind and Heart by mollyweasleyisfantastic

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

Ginny and Harry worked together throughout the war to overcome darkness, with some particularly unfortunate outcomes. As she looks back now and remembers their lives, the milestones and major moments, she finds herself lonely and missing her best friend. However, unexpected surprises await her as she moves forward in her life...hopes return as well as those she loves.

Thank you for all the reads so far, keep the reviews coming!
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/16/07 Title: Chapter 14: Telling Stories and Teaching

great chapter as always. wen r u getting 15 up? i really want to read more!

With Tired Eyes, Minds, and Souls We Slept by QuIDdITch_PlaYA

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sequel to Revenge of the Serpent. The title is taken from a One Tree Hill episode title.

Harry and Ginny are happily married and living together. They are about to become parents. Still, life has never been normal for Harry Potter, and it may never be.

Edit: Final author's note was edited.
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Chapter 14: Not So Happy Anniversary

why the hell did u kill Brian? u sicko! harry's son! and u kill him! and of all ppl, McLaggen is Dark! sure! aside from that crap, a pretty good story

Author's Response: um...ok.

Imperfections by some_kinda_superstar

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Lily has a secret. Afraid of her secret being revealed, she locks herself away behind a mask of perfection. What will it take for her to realise no-one is perfect?
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Imperfections

well, it was very short and you didnt get very far in the romantic situation, but for a first time, not terrible.

Harry Potter and Beyond The Veil by tear_away

Rated: Professors •

Harry's life stands at a crossroads.

He is torn between a return to the only true home he as ever known or a dark and dangerous winding and twisting road through Horcruxes and ending with murder.

But can he become a murderer? Can he over come the Dark Arts, while dabbling within them? Will Ron and Hermione stand beside him on the road to doom? And if love is truly his greatest power then why did he let his only true love go?

To defeat evil, Harry must climb a mountain of dark Death Eaters and Ministry mayhem - but will he come out on top in the Final Battle?

Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Harry Potter and Beyond The Veil

hello, i absolutely adore this fic and u should definitely not stop writing just b/c some stupid freak insulted your nationality. wat he did was disgusting and i hope u have been corresponding with the site administrators b/c chapter 14 wont allow any1 access to it so could u pleeeeze get it validated. i love ure fic!!!

Author's Response: It\'s waiting for validation don\'t worry. It should be ready for the end of Monday/Tuesday since its a pretty small chapter. It will be the last chapter until writers are able to post chapters again on July 23. I won\'t let what this person said get to me and it certainly won\'t stop me from writing.

Harry Potter and the Serpent's Eye by Marauder9744

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A 7th year fic in which Harry, Ron and Hermione search for the remaining Horcruxes and ultimately battle Voldemort. Post HBP; in canon, no slash. H/G R/Hr

Chapter 25 is up; Chapter 26 is with my beta!
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Betrayal

interesting, but not so believable in the sense that, based on what was said at the end of HBP, Harry was supposed to stay at Privet Drive for a day and then after his birthday leave. whatever, i still have more to read!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, grawp22! Very true about what was said in HBP, but keep that question in mind until the very end of this story... there\'s more to it than meets the eye. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Back to the Burrow

Much better than the previous chapter! i like the fact that Hagrid is Head of Gryffindor and we knew from HBP( sort of) that Sluggy would be Head of Slytherin.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, grawp22, I\'m glad you liked it! This was my first attempt at a fanfic so the first few chapters, I admit, are a little shakky... but the story will get better as it goes along, I promise.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, grawp22, I\'m glad you liked it! This was my first attempt at a fanfic so the first few chapters, I admit, are a little shakky... but the story will get better as it goes along, I promise.

Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Serpent's Eye

ooooohhhh, suspence is building!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Revelations

hello!!! malfoy and his mommy living in the house!!! not likely! aside from that twist, an ok chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, grawp22, I really appreciate it! I will say, though, that Dumbledore did offer Malfoy and his mom protection at the end of HBP... but do keep this in mind for the end as well ;) Thanks again!

The Portrait by the_evenstar

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Mark, a young Hogwarts student, meets a mermaid in the Hogwarts lake. Overcome by his fascination, he paints a portrait of her. However, it soon becomes evident that his portrait is more than just a painting...

Written by the*evenstar of Ravenclaw for Seminar 2: Hogwarts Portraits.
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Portrait

cute story with a day-dreamy atmosphere

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you liked it! <3

Broken Souls by kingbobrules

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: As the wizarding world rejoices, Harry’s never come so close to just giving up. But as he tries to walk away from Voldemort’s crumpled body, something stops him. Someone. Ginny.

But Harry’s a broken man. He’s in no state to deal with his feelings for Ginny or to give her the relationship she deserves and he tries to tell her that. But Ginny’s got something of her own to tell. Something that might just make Harry face up to his demons and stick around.

However, Harry’s not the only one struggling to cope. Ginny is on the verge of breaking down and fleeing herself, but will anyone notice in time? And what on earth is Ron going to say when he learns of his seventeen year old sister’s situation?

Extract: Truth to be told he didn’t really know how exactly you would classify things between him and Ginny at the moment, but he did know the lie of land. They were having a baby together.

This fic is finally back!!!
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 6: Confrontations.

really depressing dramatization, but pretty well written.

Author's Response: Hopefully it\'s not 2 depressing!

Mortality by dashofmagic

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Everything was fine. There was pain and hurt at the death of their headmaster, but they were all okay. And then, he fell in love with her. And their romance would spark a betrayal unlike anything Harry had ever known. But it isn't just lost friendship Harry must worry about. There is an epidemic sweeping through Hogwarts and threatening to destroy the Wizarding World. And as his own health begins to deteriorate, will he have the strength to defeat the man behind it all? Or will the betrayal of his friend, in essence, destroy him?

This fic has not been abandoned!! I'm having a bit of writer's block in reference to the ending, but it is NOT abandoned.
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Bell Tolls Seven

wow, really great chapter!

The Funnier One by yanagi_yuna

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Fred and George Weasley are bored, now that their brother's wedding is over, nothing is worth staying. But when Mr. Weasley brings in another Muggle artifact called, Computer, and the twins learns to operate it, things are about to get interesting.

But once they managed to "hack" in the site called Mugglenet, the issue of who's the funniest came up, they decided to battle it out.

Once the results is up, things are about to get dirty.

Author's notes: I have fixed this fic: verb tenses and all. Thank you to those who made reviews and comments, you made me realize my mistakes, now I fixed it.. I am still waiting for a beta for my next fic but I don't think it will take too long. *throws confetti*

Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Funnier One

a sorry attempt at humor. no offense.

Author's Response: no, that\'s fine.. =P (but please next time tell the reason of how you came up with your criticism, it helps a lot, you know..)

Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Funnier One

however, for a 1st fic it could have been worse. advice: if u do a sequel, stick to Fred and George-ish humor but make it more realistic

Author's Response: my plans on the sequel is much more realistic, but i have second thoughts about writing more fanfictions (because i\'ve just realized i haven\'t updated the original story i have been working on and i haven\'t studied calculus in a very long time)

Broom Cupboard Confessions by cto10121

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry Potter learns how his parents got together...in the most unexpected way. Can't say anymore for fear of giving too much away. A bit of AU, ( all right, I'll admit it, a lot) and the sexual situations warnings for a little bit of kissing. The rating is for sexual innuendos. R&R!!
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/16/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two-Accidentally Together?

really great funny fic. good job!

Firewhisky by sheriden

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: The war was more than anyone had expected. Ginny drinks Firewhisky. Draco can’t stand the stuff. Ginny dies. Draco lives. And the war continues. One-shot.
Reviewer: grawp22 Signed
Date: 07/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Firewhisky

sheridan, this is a depressing drama. i dont quite understand how things got to be as bad as they were, or how ginny lost her magic and how firewhiskey staved her powers, and above all i dont appreciate your comments concerning the Holocaust. u took what was already a horrible scenario and, essentially, turned it into an anti-Semetic one as well. overall, this fic is a jumble of confusing plots with bad details and insulting non-fiction mixed in.

Author's Response: I am not anti-Semitic! I was trying to imply how awful the Holocaust was, and how it might happen again if there really were wizards in our society… If I offended you and confused you, I am sorry. I didn’t mean to do that at all.