Summary: Harry and Ginny can't make it throught the war for peace, but is it all bad? Harry's pov
We brought each other to such great heights,
And all we left behind were silhouettes...
WOw i loved it!! i thought it was beautifly desciptive and i loved your use of assonances and such (much better then some poems i ahve read that ryhme ginger-cat and beater's bat) but it was simply beautiful..excellant work!
Summary: What's it like to watch the one you love marry another? Wrong. Heartbreaking. Alone. And so much more.
Ohhhh! i really loved it! Excellent desciptions...I could see it all playing trhough my mind with little effort...wow.... and i also loved Draco emotions in this fic. Excellent job!!
Summary: George's world has stopped. But he must beat back the darkness, or it will overcome him.
woah..that was pretty intense..and insane..oh man i really loved it... excellant job!
(e-high five stubby!)
Author's Response: Woah, thanks, KC! Glad you liked it; that was the response I was looking for! What\'d you like about it?
woah..that was intense..and totally insane (it the good way)..i loved it!..excellent job stubby!!!
Author's Response: Uh, thanks again... \'twas sort-of a double review....
Summary: a trRain waits for me
at king's cross
i will not take...
Albus Dumbledore waits for a train and wonders.
I think its awesome! Much better than I could do.I think you really got down the feelings that Dumbledore would be feeling at this time in his...death (i guess since he's not alive ;D ). I also think your last stanza is quite powerful. Like I said before I'm not really good at writing poetry (I just like reading it) so i can't really tell you if you need to improve in anything. But i enjoyied it so good job!
Author's Response: Hey, Black_Dust! ;) Thanks for the review. Poetry\'s really interesting to write, because you can pretty much do whatever you want. So, if you think you can\'t write poetry, it\'s just subjective: maybe you haven\'t found your type of poetry yet or a subject that works for you. I\'m really terrible at rhyming, but then I started free poetry and created my own style and find that I enjoy it. People even seem to like it, too, so that\'s a bonus! I do like the last stanza as well. I was loking for a way to finish it, but then that popped into my head and it worked, so.... Thanks again! -Stubby
Summary: Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks are both going through hard times. Money problems plague them both. When each are given a secret mission, they find their needs for money and secrecy work against their true desires. What will each decided?
Excellent! It was very well written and I loved the suprise twist. I didn't see it coming :D
Author's Response: Very glad you enjoyed the story! We did try to add the twist and make it fun! :) Thanks for the review!
Summary: Ron's dreams are still haunted by Bellatrix Lestrange's brutal assalt on Hermione three years on. His admission to Hermione leads to an unexpected reaction and a revelation about their relationship which he will not soon forget.
Ron sat there, lost for words, staring helplessly at the clearly deranged woman in front of him. Hermione was quieter and her voice steadier, but no less dangerous, when she spoke next.
Note: The opening lines are taken from Chapter Twenty-Three of Deathly Hallows.
*takes a slow, deep breath* wow, that was gorgeous! I loved it. Even got the little goosebump-type-tingles from it. :)
Excellent job and a great representation of the characters. The only critique I have is that I was a little unsure of where this was taking place (besides of course, in a sleeping type area) Good job though.
*now has to find a way to make an equally brillant banner for it*