Penname: Lulu Sugar [Contact]
Real name: Lucy Nevin
Member Since: 07/10/07
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Bio:
Hi I'm Lucy (Lulu's a pen name). Here's a bit about me, if you're interested.

Moi:
Eyes: blue-green
Hair:Boring mud brown
Skin: Olivey
Favorite subjects: Art, English and Textiles
Detested subjects: Maths, all sciences, all langauges...
Fave foods:Jelly babies, guavas, strawberries.
Worst foods: tomatoes, liquorice.
Things I hate: snakes, cold, anything emo, marilyn manson
Friends on mugglenet: Phoebe Gruzelier and Wolfiejojo

Harry Potter:
Favorite HP book: 3
Worst HP book: 5
Favorite HP Characters: Tonks,Luna, Dobby, Dean Thomas, Sirius, Hagrid, Aberforth Dumbledore
Worst HP character: Lucius Malfoy, Dumbledore, Quirell, Bertha Jorkins, Xeno Lovegood
Times when I cried in last book: when dobby died, then all the way through the last three chapters.

Thanks for bothering to read my bio! I'm hoping to write a story soon, involving Luna Lovegood, and murder...
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Double, Double Toil and Trouble by Gmariam
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 21]

Summary: With wedding preparations in full swing, tensions are high in the Weasley household. Fred and George blow off some steam by casting curses at each other, only to have Bill walk in on their magical mayhem. He decides to settle things down for the rehearsal dinner and casts a spell of his own on the twins. But Fred and George strike back at their older brother, ensuring a night everyone will remember.

This story was written for the One-Shot Challenge: The Twins and received second place.


Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2532 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/03/06 Updated: 08/09/06


Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Double, Double Toil and Trouble

Wow! Loved it! The best bit was the part when they were cursing each other...really funny images! I liked the cha-cha-ing pot plants especially. It's all so sad after the end of DH :(

Author's Response: Everything is a bit sad after the losses of DH. Thank you for reading this story and leaving such a nice review! I liked the cha-cha plants too, it seemed a likely thing to see at the Burrow. Thanks again! ~Gina :)

 

Three Weasleys and a Wood by timestep
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 35]

Summary: Fred and George are interested in Ginny's love life. Will they hurt or help her efforts. Warning for later chapter.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Epilogue? What Epilogue?

Word count: 18003 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
03/06/07 Updated: 10/02/09


Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 08/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Vincent Crabbe! Poor Ginny! I woulda thought it would be harry...but anyway

Author's Response: Ah, but what would be the fun in that!! LOL

 

Roses and Thorns by Phoebe Gruzelier
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 65]

Summary: Love's not a bed of roses...
there's also pain, betrayal and heart-break.


A lonely and neglected girl. A stubborn young Order member. A sarcastic Healer. Hermione's been trusted with a secret. But with knowledge comes danger...

Againster a backround of prejudice, family ties and surpression, two powerful love stories are playing themselves out. But the clock is ticking against them...

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 43265 Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Published:
06/19/07 Updated: 12/11/08


Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 06/25/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Parents and Children

....JESUS! Binka Fudge wrote a long review! I kindof gave up, because neither of you guys seem to like paragraphs.
.... I LOVE MYRA MIX!
She's like a kickass tonks/luna. And her nail varnish is funkalicious!. She is my new idol. And I wouldn't mind flirting with Sirius, even if he is a bit old. Oh, and the no sports thing is just up my street. She reminded me a bit of me actually, except she's way cooler and prettier etc.. But did you have put her in griffindor? Everybody's in griffindor? Oh and Mollie sounds like a turd
....I LOVED the whole thing with Cho and Robert Moore! It was hilarious!
.....I'm just going to go through the story again and then leave another review.....

Author's Response: I know!!! Binka Fudge\'s review was probably longer than all 7 Potter books put together (she\'s amazing, though). In my defense, for some reason when I answer reviews, I can\'t put paragraphs in. It goes all weird like this:\r\n\r\nI love Myra Mix too! My only problem with her was that I was worried that she wouldn\'t live up to my image of her. I needn\'t have worried, Myra can take care of herself! I knew you found Sirius hot, so I decided to have them flirting (I don\'t find him remotely attractive, but that\'s just me). I don\'t think she\'s much like you, really. But I did base some of her on things you\'ve said that have helped me understand girls like her better (i.e. the whole dating boys on their looks, which I still don\'t really understand, but you explained). I put her in Gryffindor because I thought that very few of MY characters are Gryffindor (the ones I\'ve borrowed off JKR and the ones I\'ve invented)...except Hermione, and Harry, and Myra, and Rob and...actually that\'s quite a lot of characters (sorry, I\'ve just realised). Well, I don\'t think she really fits in any of the other houses, to be honest. I wanted to give Myra a sister who resembled a turd, because I thought way too many of my characters are only children.\r\nAnyway, thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 06/25/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Parents and Children

....ok, firstly, you must write the next chapter very, very fast. Like arnold shwarznegger of writers. Ok?
.....Draco is great! Your writing of him as a moody teenage brat is fab. And I love the way he has to change. Change is the oil in the engine of life. (Wow, that was deep).
......Please please please don't put Myra and Draco together! I will throw myself out a skylight and I'm not even joking. Don't do it, unless you want my death on your conscience.
.......Your similes and metaphors are great-my favorite was gormless little parasite. That really made me proud.
.......Ok, now I have to be mean. I'm sorry,but I know you're good at taking constructive criticism. Please do't be offended. It's just a few tiny, stupid things.
.......I thought maybe Harry should use another insult apart from prat, like 'git' or 'pile of dragon dung' . Something like that.
.......maybe another simile apart from chocolate for Hermy's hair. Like hazlenut or oak or something. Ok those are really crappy but you'll think of something better
.......now here's the biggie. I think Hermione sounds too wimpy. When Dumbledore asked her to solve the prophecy, I think she would have been nervous but brave about the challenge.
......In connnclusion-I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I love Cho and Robert Moore, they're such a great pair!

Author's Response: Right, who exactly is Arnold Sw-whatever his name is? And I won\'t write as fast as him, I\'ll write faster! I\'ve already finished the first draft of the chappie (now I just have to type it up...) \'Change is the oil in the engine of life\'. Wow, that was deep, I\'m proud of you! But yes, I love books where characters have to change either their opinions or their a personality trait. It\'s tres cool.\r\nNow come on, would I ever reveal to you the sacred mysteries of who is going to get together? Let\'s just say Myra is involved (romantically) with more than one boy during the course of the story (though not neccessarily at the same time. I\'m glad I made you proud! Simalies are so difficult - they either sound really cliched and predictable, or really weird. OK, new insult for Harry, and no chocolate for Hermione\'s hair (it sounds really boring and cliched and I can\'t believe I wrote it. But brown IS a really hard colour to find nice simalies for. And alot of people have brown hair/eyes: Hermy, Cho, BCJr, Myra etc) And Hermy\'s reaction WAS completely OOC for her. I have no idea what possessed me when I wrote that. I love Cho and Rob as well. Writing their banter is SO fun!

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The Prophecy of the Six Elements

Omiggiddigod! WAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Too exited to write!

Author's Response: Breathe.

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The Prophecy of the Six Elements

I have recovered. Deepbreaths. In..Out..
THIS CHAPTER IS SO INCREDIBLY BAFFLING, DELICIOUS AND ENTHRALLING I HAVE BEEN TAKING NOTES! NOTES! Ok, firstly...
1. Earth is definitely Harrry, Water is Hermy and darkness is old dracoboy. I think Cho is either light or air and fire might be BCJ. But those are just guesses...and PLEASE don't let Cho be air!t then Hermy could be light and BCJ could be darkness...AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!
2. I love the whole polite conversation thing! BCJ is just David Tennant reborn.
3. Ummm....Suddenly i see? I know you like that song but I'm just not seeing the connection
4. You use the word probably too much. That's my only criticism
5. Really, you shouldn't be writing such an interesting story. It's in the interest of my health. I'm just not sure how much longer my nerves can take it.

Author's Response: ALESHA WON SCD!!!! I WAS SO SURPRISED, BUT VERY PLEASED!!!!! TAKE THAT, MR SMELLY MATT!!!! THE JUDGES ARE NUTS, SHE SHOULD\'VE GOT 40/40 FOR BOTH HER WALTZ AND HER CHA CHA CHA!!

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The Prophecy of the Six Elements

I have recovered. Deepbreaths. In..Out..
THIS CHAPTER IS SO INCREDIBLY BAFFLING, DELICIOUS AND ENTHRALLING I HAVE BEEN TAKING NOTES! NOTES! Ok, firstly...
1. Earth is definitely Harrry, Water is Hermy and darkness is old dracoboy. I think Cho is either light or air and fire might be BCJ. But those are just guesses...and PLEASE don't let Cho be air!t Of course, Hermy could be light and BCJ could be darkness, because of the black and white roses intertwining (by the way, what king of intertwining is this going to be? I don't mean to be dodgy minded,but still)...AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!
2. I love the whole polite conversation thing! BCJ is just David Tennant reborn.
3. Ummm....Suddenly i see? I know you like that song but I'm just not seeing the connection
4. You use the word probably too much. That's my only criticism
5. Really, you shouldn't be writing such an interesting story. It's in the interest of my health. I'm just not sure how much longer my nerves can take it.

Author's Response: 1. Can\'t tell you who the elemets are (obviously). Hey, I like \'old Dracoboy\' can I use that? And there won\'t be any dodginess going on between BCJr and Hermione, mainly becuase I can\'t write dodgy stuff because I\'m scared my parents will find it! (A little phobia of mine) 4. Probably will be EXTERMINATED from my writing. 5. Lucy, I didn\'t know you had Delicate Senses. Shame on you, girl!

Author's Response: Extra: The song\'s meant to be what Cassandra used to be. I know this is pretty strange, but I really couldn\'t find a quote, and I wanted to post the chapter, so I chose that. If I find a better one, I\'ll change it.

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 08/28/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Cassandra Trelawney

I can't take it! My pea brain is overwhelmed!!!!!!!! I'm not called trollus for nothing- how do you expect me to cope with this? JE NE COMPREND PAS!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I\'ve explained it the best I can. :( Errm... Can anyone else help?

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 11/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Harry Comes Home

C'est fabulata! I have many points to discuss:
. I agreee with Jo about the colours. And I saw she had pens like yours!
. Nice to seek Sirius flirting with the female population and getting himself dismembered. However, I don't think Ron could've chopped his leg off.
. Hi Lav-Lav (wave)!
. Robert Moore is Mr Rochester but young and sexy. I love him! And he has a flickin' fringe!
. This chapter was really good for Cho because he realising all that about hermy made her way more 3D.
. Just one constructive criticism: sometimes you desbribe her actions a bit too much.
. T'was most entertaining et brilliante, therefore you must get writing quickly...

Author's Response: I get confused with which chapter to post on too! ;)

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 11/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - An Everyday Story

C'est fabulata! I have many points to discuss:
. I agreee with Jo about the colours. And I saw she had pens like yours!
. Nice to seek Sirius flirting with the female population and getting himself dismembered. However, I don't think Ron could've chopped his leg off.
. Hi Lav-Lav (wave)!
. Robert Moore is Mr Rochester but young and sexy. I love him! And he has a flickin' fringe!
. This chapter was really good for Cho because he realising all that about hermy made her way more 3D.
. Just one constructive criticism: sometimes you desbribe her actions a bit too much.
. T'was most entertaining et brilliante, therefore you must get writing quickly...

Author's Response: Heya! The colours and actions=I will fix! Ron didn\'t chop Sirius\' leg off! (He\'s not an axe murderer!) It got smashed in the battle. You LIKE Rober Moore? It\'s a miricale!!!!! You find him attracttive? (I\'ll let you into a little secret...his appearance was slightly based on your favourite guy! But not his personality. Nothing like) You liked the soul-serching? Good. I just felt the chapter would be a little bitsy without it. Thanks for your review. I have an urge to sing: \'Say it\'s ME that you want to dismember!\' Oh and Cho\'s 3D? Yay!

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 07/31/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-The Only Man He Truly Trusted

wow loving this new side of voldy voldy voldermort. if that's who 'the master' is? we shall see. oh and thanks for dedicating the chapter to us! nice to see you here jo!

Author's Response: Yeah I know, I was just kind of -Ok, let\'s make Voldie a bit more intresting. I hope he still seemed like the Dark Dude though, I mean I don\'t want him to be tooooooo softie!

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 07/31/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Robert Moore, Healer

i really hate cho. i keep having this insane urge to strangle her. it's really not good at all. and also, you're being disrespectful to mcconalgal! remeber the charging desks?

Author's Response: Me, disrespectful to McGonagall? NEVER! (But bear in mind I did write this chapter before DH came out.

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 02/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Harry Comes Home

Wow, that was really cool! I LOVED your description of Narcissa, but I do think you went a little overboard on the wimpiness. But still,she was really good. But she definitely wouldn't smell of JASMINE! I think she would smell of tea-tree, or maybe geraniums, but that's just a personal thing.
I love Draco, I think you captured him perfectly. I loved the way he was completely incapable, at the age of 15, of entertaining himself!
And the ring...I have a feeling that it will be important in the future...hmmm...

Author's Response: I know, I know, Narcissa was a little OTT. What\'s exactly wrong with her smelling of Jasmine? I change it to tea-tree or geraniums if it\'s THAT important to you [is a little confused]. Care to explain exactly why jasmine is a big no-no? I never really felt Draco had much independance or imagination (from the books). He\'s SUCH a wimp. Thanks for reviewing! Hope you like the next chapter (when I\'ve finally finished writing it!)

 
Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Harry Comes Home

Heya Pheobe! Glad to have read your story at last. It's amazing! Once again, I am proud of you! I like it, although i'm still not convinced about Cho. You're wrong, the second chapter isn't rubbish. Now write another chapter girl!

Author's Response: I spent about two hours last night outlining the whole story! I\'m going to start the third chapter tonight!

 

Summary: The Dursleys have left Privet Drive and are in hiding with Hestia Jones and Dedalus Diggle. Hestia and Mr. Dursley are constantly fighting, Petunia is avoiding the wizards at all costs, and Dedalus is trying to make them all the best of friends. Meanwhile, Dudley discovers he has an interest in Harry's world, but his parents are less than pleased when they find out.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 37701 Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Published:
09/27/07 Updated: 06/18/11


Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 01/16/08 Title: Chapter 1: Septum Aperio

Wow! This is so cool! You've captured the charaters perfectly. It actually makes me like Dudley. And I love the bit with the 'Ely-Vader.'Only read the first chapter...will read the rest when i have time.....

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

Being a werewolf by Wolfie Jojo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary:
Just a poem about the trials of werewolf-ness. I hope it inspires a little pity in you, fellow potter-fan.


Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 140 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/24/07 Updated: 12/01/07


Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 12/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Being a Werewolf

YOU SNEAKY LITTLE BOGGER!!! Oh yes Jo, I remember: 'I read this poem on mugglenet yesterday called being a werewolf, it's really cute...' HAH! i KNEW ALL ALONG, i THOUGHT IT WAS SUSPICIOUS! Not telling us. You little swine!
Hehehehehehehehehahahahahah!
mwahahaHA!
Don't worry Jo. I'm not really angry. Good poem though. Are you trying to tell us something?

Author's Response: I apologise most profusely for being a sneaky little bogger, I just wanted to see if I could do that. I was kinda trying to imply... but then I thought how much it would mean to lose you as a friend, so I layed off a bit. So yeah, if I go a bit... you\'ll know what\'s up.

 

Summary: It is late Christmas Eve and Harry is in all kinds of trouble. He has the worst possible person mad at him, and no it isn't Voldemort this time. Fortunately, someone still loves Ginny's pies.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2588 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/02/07 Updated: 12/12/07


Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 01/13/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Saw Ginny Kissing Santa Claus

So cute! that's really cheered me up. I love the end bit ; mischief managed!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading. Eric B.

 

A Matter of Property by anath
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: When Sirius Black dumps a girl, she cries and begs him to come back. When he humiliates her in front of the whole school, she does not seek revenge. Never. Too bad that no one ever said that to Angela Peters.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2284 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/02/08 Updated: 01/12/08


Reviewer: Lulu Sugar Signed
Date: 01/13/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ha! sirius deserved it, the womaniser. Go Angela! She is SUCH a cool character

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for your review. Yes, Sirius got what he deserved, didn\'t he? I love Angela\'s character, too, that\'s why she is included in many stories - some humour, other dramatic. If you are interested in her, you may want to keep watch on this site - the threeshot The Final Choice is already in the queu. Hopefully, it will be approved.

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