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Harry's our WHAT??? by Kelsid

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: *Last chapter is up!* Due to a mishap in Charms class, James and Lily are taken away to Harry's time, only to meet Ron and Hermione. Kept hidden away from Harry by his two best friends, Ron lets something slip about Harry, James and Lily's relationship. Will James and Lily find out about their son, or at least before Remus, Sirius and Peter in the Marauder era figure out a way to bring them back? Includes people turning into ducks, Monty Python quotes and lots of Marauder goodness. PLEASE R & R- Hint, this does not mean read and run!
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Meeting

This is great! I really like the characterization on this. I suppose this would be the only reason for James to mess up on a spell, trying to impress Lily=D.

Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 08/23/07 Title: Chapter 12: Frank the Duck and Other Odd Tales

OH MY GOD! I was laughing out loud the whole time! BRILLIANT!!!!!

Caught! by d3pr3ss3dNhappy

Summary: Merona Knowles, your ordinary graduate from Hogwarts. During the day she's a janitor for the Ministry of Magic. At night, she's a spy for the Order of the Phoenix. One night Merona is caught with some crucial information, she is submitted through all sorts of torture. Some mental abuse. Last chapter has been submitted. Contains surprise twist...
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: Chapter 5: The Aftermath

Thank you so much for a wonderful story. I enjoyed it a lot. I liked how you did not sugarcoat the torture; it is what it is. I like the self-sacrifice, sometimes one must die so that many can live. I like how Merona stands up to her jailers and fears, how she keeps her cool head in the face of fire and tells Dumbledore what happened. I love the smooth transition into death, and the acceptance of death. Thank you!

Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 09/01/07 Title: Chapter 5: The Aftermath

This was an excellent story! I like your description of torture: no gory, unnecessary detail, but no sugarcoat, either. I like Merona and how you portray her; way too many characters are described as fearless heroes, and the heroism of conquering one's fear, or doing something in spite of it is lost. I really liked the smooth transition from life to death, and the fact that she had to forgive the tormentor of her childhood to move on was very well done. I like how she accepts her mortality and that allows her to be released from ghost state. I give you 150%!

Dream Walking by Roxy Black

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry has been waiting for over a week to leave the world of the muggles once more. Dumbledore is about to arrive and new adventures are bound to begin. This story runs directly aside HBP, think of it as missing scenes. What mysteries are held within the moments JK missed? How about these...

Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 08/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: I can trust these two with anything...

I really liked that! I like the resemblance between this and "King's Cross". I also enjoy how you worked the fact that Harry' conscience talks in Hermione's voice into the story. Thumbs up!

A Flash of Scarlet by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a retelling of Harry's second Quidditch game from a very different point of view.
The manoeuvre that had sent this broom a few feet to the left would have put his old one into a wild loop -- in gaining manageability, Cleansweep had lost all the pepper. That loop would have made him hard to hit and given him a good view of the whole field. Knowing he couldn't do it now made him feel horribly vulnerable out here, and he doubted again whether he shouldn't have stayed in the stands -- or, better yet, indoors.
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 08/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: -----

Very good story, although it's hard to picture Snape playing Quidditch. He is more bookish. Still, thumbs up!

The Dark Side by lmageous

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When you read a story, you always read it from the hero's point of view. You read how much pain they're in as they try to stop their enemy. But what did the bad guy think? What was in Lord Voldemort's head from the time he first made a Horcrux to the time he met his final match? Well, finally we know. We know what the Lord Voldemort thinks, and we can read the stories from his point of view. Chapter 9, "Battle on the Rock," is up, please review. Chapter 10, "Armageddon," the final chapter in this story, is ready and finally in the queue. Unfortunately my computer is broken again, and I may not be able to write another story in a while, but I'm thinking about doing one like this from Dumbledore's POV. Anyway, please, tell me what you think of this, and thank you for reading.
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 10/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: The First Horcrux

Beautiful, absolutely amazing! I love the little details - Hermione said Egyptian wizards were amazing, and there was an Imhotep in Ancient Egypt. He was the Renneisanse man of his age - planned the first pyramid, founded Egyptian medicine. He later became a god, equivalent to the Greek Asclepius. Kudos!!!

Your Destiny Lies Before You by SomberBallad

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Narcissa doubts whether she will ever amount to anything in a life when everything is dictated for her, her classes, her friends, and even her husband.

(A Narcissa character story and a Lucius/Narcissa beginning.)
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Your Destiny Lies Before You

This was a great story. I am glad not to see the confidently-evil-Narcissa cliche. I liked your Lucius too - great characterization job.

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review, I\'m glad you liked it!

A Present To Die For by whatapotter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Some people say that you can find anything imaginable in Knockturn Alley. In the dark recesses of one shop, a piece of jewelry, which has haunted history for eons, lies hidden. It is a beautiful piece; striking and elegant in every way. Truly, it is a gift any woman would die for.

Winner of the 'Borgin and Burkes' one-shot challenge.
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 11/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely beautiful story that sent many shivers down my spine. Your descriptions and setting of the scene are truly chilliing - fantastic! The monotonous "click" at the beginning was masterful. It is a true thriller screenplay.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I\'m glad you enjoyed it! x

Marie-Antoinette by Tinn Tam

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Runner-up for the QuickSilver Quills Award, categ. Best Alternate Universe

“No matter the time or place, people should never call their child Marie-Antoinette. There is no happiness in this world for a girl called Marie-Antoinette.”

1983. In a world where Voldemort has won the First War, where hope has fled from an Earth moaning under the Dark Lord's iron hand, marriages are broken and others are arranged in order to preserve the sacred purity of blood. James Potter loses his wife; now they have to find another for him.

Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: The Chambermaid

I am so glad you are updating again! This story is one of the most magnificent fanfics I've ever read. Some details that I've caught:
-Harry is still imprisoned at a Number 4 - gotta love it!
-Marie was right to be wary of Lily in her house, wasn't she?!
Please keep writing, this is an excellent work!!!

Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 07/25/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Two Elves

I absolutely love your story! I loved the Dumas reference-well, everything! Keep writing PLEASE!!!

The Lady and the Snake by Houlestar

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The snake was there, in the garden, intwined around the rosebush. Aurelia jumped, she hadn't seen it there before.
"It's more afraid of you than you are of it," said a soft voice from behind her.
She turned around, she hadn't seen Salazar there before.
"Is it true?" she asked.
"Is what true?" he snapped.
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 10/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Lady

So sorry, I accidentally submitted an empty review! Anyways...

Your story is very good and original. A look from the sidelines is always good. However, I have a question: Why did Aurora know nothing about Basilisks? Her mother was a witch, so, shouldn't she have heard something about the King of Serpents? Otherwise, it's very good!

Voldemort's Day Off by KitKat517

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Have you ever wondered what Voldemort does when he isn't planning a new way to kill Harry?
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 07/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Voldemort's Day Off

Ohhh... that's really good! Makes you wonder what he really does in spare time. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Exactly! I mean, he obviously doesn\'t have many options. He can\'t spend all his time coming up with evil schemes! Ha ha! ~Catherine

The Third War by dumbledorefluertwins

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry's twins are starting Hogwarts this year and he will do anything he can to prevent them from going through the horrors that he had to endure.

This proves difficult as they are cast into the middle of another war, one which the Death Eaters have been planning for years...

Warnings are for later chapters although there are mentions of violence and character death from the start. All ships are canon.

**Gasp** Over two-hundred people have put my story in their favorites and I have nearly three hundred reviews!

All reviews WILL be answered.
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16, The Potion

OH MY GOSH! This is very much like Bella! And they can't talk to any spirits, so nobody can help them. YOU ARE SO CLEVER!

Author's Response: That\'s debateable! Thanx! ~Evie

Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 07/03/07 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23, Utter Darkness

OOOH... you better update soon! I LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Thnx. ~Evie

Portrait of A Love Lost by Gmariam

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny find a portrait tucked away in the Room of Requirement. It is a painting of a beautiful witch with chocolate brown hair and grey eyes, standing next to a very familiar wizard with long auburn hair and twinkling blue eyes. It is a painting of a couple who were once in love, and who were married at Hogwarts many years past. But fate intervened, and a tragic loss separated them. This is their story, a portrait of love lost – and found.

This story was written for the August Monthly Challenge - Weddings and was awarded first place.
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 08/17/08 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

This is a beauiful piece, on so many levels and for so many reasons! Your use and significance of Fawkes and Grey Lady almost brought me to tears. Wonderful way to integrate the Muggle and wizarding perspective of both global warfare and Hiter/Grindelwald specifically - I salute you!!!

Author's Response: This is such a wonderful review, why didn't I reply sooner?? Thank you so much!! I am so glad you enjoyed how Fawkes and the Grey Lady played such an important part. I know the Grey Lady turned out to have a completely different identity in DH but I enjoyed writing this story for her and Dumbledore. It was really fascinating researching WWII and trying to align wizarding history along side of it. Thank you for appreciating that aspect of it! And thank you again for the review! ~Gina :)

The Diary by annie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After many long years, Tom Riddle's diary is finally found. Written from Tom's PoV.
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 07/16/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Diary

A good story. You have written an admirable Voldemort. The first paragraph is a great characterization snippet; he is rambling, just like in the graveyard. I can see him pacing, as he speaks, and so he would, if he had a body. My only slight issue with this piece is a whiff of softening toward Ginny in the middle. The "Ho cute" and the remark "shame that she will die" give a bit of the wrong idea. I think you are letting your own affection influence this. Otherwise, Great Work!!

Preparations by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: On the night before her wedding, Lily has second thoughts.
Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 08/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Of Tea and Brandy

This is incredibly touching. As a Severus Sympathiser (shouldn't there be a club?), I almost cried. Thank you, this is beautiful, brandy and all.

The Dark Lord's Blog by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: What does Lord Voldemort do in his spare time? Well, that's an excellent question. Who would have known that the Dark Lord has a blog? (He also has a loyal following of readers, most of whom are Death Eaters and who post their comments.) Voldemort dispenses advice on everything from murder methods to germ protection to Power Rangers to shoes, and gives an account of the life of an evil overlord. But is he posting too much personal information online? And will Harry read it and find out more about the Dark Lord than Voldemort ever intended? Read and see.

WARNING: Extremely OOC behaviour from almost all.

RUNNER-UP in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Humour fic! Also nominated like 21 times, because apparently my readers are as insane as I am!

Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Don't Try This At Home

My word! This is GREAT! I absolutely love this story! Please keep writing, you've found your Grail! I...FEEL.....HAPPY!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! *Sings in stupid voice* You can write, you can blog, spoof the Dark Lord whole-hog! And get loads of e-mail, find your grail, FIND YOUR GRAAAIL!

Love Leads to Grief by Ginny Potter101

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater for many years. He has been trained not to show his emotions. Yet, when his wife and son are brutally murdered by Lord Voldemort, Lucius' barrier breaks down. This is the touching story of Lucius Malfoy's love for his family. Written Pre-DH. One Shot. Lucius/Narcissa

(Part of Lucius' monologue is directed at Draco)


Reviewer: TheBlackSister Signed
Date: 08/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: A New Day

This is really good! I like how you show Lucius's feelings and how the family is finally united. Great Work!

Author's Response: I\'m glad that you like it. I\'ve always thought that the boooks portray Lucius as a man who is always conerned first and foremost about himself, I\'m glad that you are able to appreciate what I\'ve tried to do with this fic, to portray Lucius as a trapped man who is concerned about his family as well as himself.