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One Blue Line by blondebouncingferret
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 148]

Summary: Fred, George and Ron find a Muggle pregnancy test in the bin... and Ginny's been ill for the past few days... any connection? One Shot fic.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 2287 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/19/04 Updated: 11/19/04


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 07/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Blue Line

Phew! You had me holding my breath the whole time, it was so relieving at the end! Great story!

-harry_victoria

 

Harry Loves Ginny by kjpzak
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 43]

Summary: Ginny's been waiting years to tell Harry she loves him. When it slips out unplanned, Harry has to figure out if he should push her away or pull her closer. A continuation of The Deal

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3968 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/17/05 Updated: 02/17/05


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 10/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: None

Aww, so sweet! Keep up the awesome work! xxvictoria

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Summary: *One-Shot* Lily Potter is in her last year of Hogwarts. She has 5 brothers and sisters. Her mum Ginny, and her father...the ever famous, Harry Potter. But what happens when all she wants is one more dance?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2578 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/08/05 Updated: 05/15/05


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: To Dance Again

*sigh*! I really enjoyed that! It was nicely written, definitley something that James would do for Lily *gets dreamy-eyed*. Awesome job!!
-harry_victoria

 

Barbie Girl by CraftySlytherin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 244]

Summary: It's just your average, boring Summer day on Privet Drive. Or is it? Harry is stuck doing another one of his many thankless chores, when he hears something VERY interesting coming from Dudley's room and goes to investigate.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1780 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/31/05 Updated: 05/31/05


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Haha!!! Hmm, Big D and Barbie, sounds like a good match! That was so hilarious! Kept me laughing!

-harry_victoria

 

The Battle Within by annie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 65]

Summary: Months after the second war has ended, Harry Potter has become lost in himself. Every evening is the same routine for him: wake up, wander the streets until the sun sets, sit in a pub and drink the night away, then return to wandering the streets. Then, one evening, he goes to visit Ginny.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Substance Abuse

Word count: 2969 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/16/05 Updated: 08/16/05


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 06/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Battle Within

Annie... you are bloody brilliant! This fic brought me to tears. You captured their emotions perfectly. I am a H/G shipper myself and love writing about them, and this was just the most amazing fic ever. I loved the part when Harry said, 'You know what the saddest thing in the world is? To love someone who used to love you.' You are amazing!! Keep up the awesome work!

-harry_victoria :)

 

Only In My Memory by rita_skeeter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: One day you'll love me as I love you. One day you'll think of me as I think of you. One day you'll cry for me as I cry for you. One day you'll want me, but I won't want you.

If only he'd taken his chance, if only he hadn't tried to protect her...would Ginny be in his arms now? A one-shot reflecting on Harry's heartbreaking choice.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1081 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/17/05 Updated: 10/17/05


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 03/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: In My Memory, In My Heart

I reviewed this a while ago, maybe when I first came on the site, and it was silly, pointless and so I deleted it, because you deserve a much better review than that one. *cracks knuckles* Here we go...

I love how you started this off with the song lyrics. The song ties in really nicely to the story, and it's perfect.

His arm ached and there was an odd pounding in his head. Harry slipped from consciousness and his head fell unceremoniously onto the Thestral’s neck.
That was a very powerful line. I could just see how Harry fainted.

The dialouge between Remus and Harry was very nice. Your characterization of Remus was spot-on, and very believable.

"One day you'll love me as I love you. One day you'll think of me as I think of you. One day you'll cry for me as I cry for you. One day you'll want me, but I won't want you." This was such a heartbreaking line, and it made me cry. After they kissed, I was so convinced that they were going to get back together, but the ending you had was so much more original.

Great job, Sarah. *squish*

 

Wait for Me by AstroFire
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 37]

Summary: Something terrible has happened to Harry in the Last Battle. Memories flow through his mind, as he searches for help. Will he find the strength in the past he needs to do what is required of him? At what price? Please review :D

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 24922 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/23/05 Updated: 02/13/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 4: Conclusion

You made me cry. I personally think the first chapter was the best; it would've been even better as a oneshot in my opinion. Great job!

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: Hi harry_victoria! Well, I'm glad you liked the first chapter the most. To be honest, I don't feel completely confident about it because I always think of all the things I could improve. But your words give me hope and encouragement :). I also hope that the rest chapters were okay for you :D ~Astro

 

Going Insane by Ely_Baby
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: Story written in response to the Winter Snow Holiday Challenge; challenge number one "Redemption".

[One-Shot] The scream that came from upstairs, made Crookshanks jump down from Hermione’s lap to the soft carpet. Hermione closed her eyes and for a moment she prayed that she had just imagined it.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Self Injury

Word count: 2528 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/07/05 Updated: 12/07/05


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Going Insane

:O Oh my god. That was so sad. I love stories like that, it makes me get all tingly! You are really an amazing author, great job!

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: Yeah, I love sad stories too.. Hmm, I love to write them, actually, not to read them... but nevermind.. Thanks a lot for the compliments *blushes*. Your reviews really made my day!

 

Promises by KneazleWeazl
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 189]

Summary: After taking a year off from Hogwarts, Harry, Ron, and Hermione have returned with the completed task of destroying all horcrux's, but sadly Voldemort is still alive. And also sadly, Harry and Ginny are still split up. What will it take to get those two back together? And what will be the consequences of a kiss gone too far? R rating for the first chapter... so far.

Please do not leave spam reviews! I do not want to get my story deleted!

Chapter 5 'All's Well That Ends Well... Or Maybe Not' is up!
Thanks to whoever fixed my word count!.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 15060 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/06 Updated: 02/12/07


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 07/17/07 Title: Chapter 5: All's Well that Ends Well... Or Maybe Not

That was beautiful, amazing, original, I could go on and on! I would be so excited if you made a new chapter... keep up the awesome work!

-harry_victoria :)

Author's Response: thanks for the review! I won\'t be making any new chapters for this story however I do have the sequel/companion story in the queue. It\'s called What Makes Her and will be in the Dark/Angsty section once published.

 

Saying Goodbye by Gryffindor Girl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: This is a recount of Hermione's last hours of life, as she says goodbye to those that she leaves behind: family and friends, and the love of her life.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 2496 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/31/06 Updated: 01/31/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 04/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Saying Goodbye

Oh lord, this was very well done. You captured the emotions beautifully in this, and you kept the characters IC the whole time.

One nitpick would be your use of the fanon nickname 'Gin'. which isn't used in the books and the story could have used without.

I myself wrote a story based on Harry getting cancer, which is still in progress, so I know what you were trying to get at in the story. That being said, I would have liked to hear a bit more about the cancer and how she relapsed and came to be dying. A flashback would have been nice, but it's still nice without it.

Wonderfully done. I hope you continue writing because you have a talent. :)

--Victoria

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review; it means a lot.

 

Jezebel by Black Pearl
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 455]

Summary: One mistake caused her years of abuse and neglect, until she finally finds something to hold on to. A promise, a soul, a “guilty pleasure”. But when she’s found out, will she receive the title Jezebel? Will anyone ever know what goes on behind closed doors? A story of pain, healing, and a forbidden love. Rated ‘R’.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Violence, Non-Consensual Sex, Self Injury, Sexual Situations

Word count: 13319 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/04/06 Updated: 07/12/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/24/07 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Wow! I really, really enjoyed that story. So much detail was put into it, and I just loved every last bit of it! Great job, definitley on my favourite list!

-harry_victoria

 
Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/24/07 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Wow! I really, really enjoyed that story. So much detail was put into it, and I just loved every last bit of it! Great job, definitley on my favourite list!

-harry_victoria

 

Goodbye My Lover by Ely_Baby
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: [One-Shot] [Songfic] Lily stepped towards him, and Remus climbed down from the branch. When they found themselves a couple of feet away, Remus seemed to find his voice. “You are beautiful,” he murmured.

Categories: Various Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2215 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/17/06 Updated: 02/17/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye My Lover

I really love this song, and I think it was perfect for this story. It was really great, and even though I ship J/L, this was so sweet and thorough. Great job!

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: A J/L shipper? Okay, nobody is perfect.. *winks* just joking, don\'t worry! Thanks a lot for reviewing! ps--I love this song too! ^_^

 

As the Dusk Grows by AstroFire
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: Halloween night... this is the night that changed it all. As the dusk grew darker, and all hope seemed lost, two persons faced the most feared wizard of all times. In the middle of darkness, they shed light upon the world. Please review!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2572 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/04/06 Updated: 04/04/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 06/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: As the Dusk Grows

Amazing, once again AstroFire. Are you sure you're not J.K Rowling herself :P LOL. Great fic, keep it up!

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: Okay, so I'm answering to this about two years late, but hey, it's better late than never right? Thank you harry_victoria :)

 

Everybody Does It by Grimmrook
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 108]

Summary: *Runner Up in the 2006 Annual Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Dark/Angsty*



It's the one thing everyone must do. You can't avoid it, you can't bargain with it, you just do it. It hurts sometimes, hell, it hurts most of the time, but it's also the most natural thing in the world. One of those rare things that makes us human.







This story is included in the Epilogues story arc, however it is a side story that can be read at just about any time. it is most favorable, however, to wait until reading Epilogues Part I for certain thematic reasons.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 5552 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/06/06 Updated: 05/10/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Everybody Does It

I'm going to cry. That reminds me so much of when my Aunt died... it's so moving. I can so see why it was voted for A QSQ Award. Great job!!

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much, I truly appreciate it. Yeah, I was very happy to have been picked as the runner up for the QSQ. A very big honor.

 

by
Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: None

Good story. However, you spelt Floo Powder 'Flu Powder'. Maybe you should go back and correct that :).

-harry_victoria

 

Adventures in Courtship by SunDevil05
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 996]

Summary: The war is over. Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley finally have the chance for the happiness they've been craving. But, with Harry recovering from the war and Ginny back in school, can they finally have the relationship they've always wanted?





******Higher rating just to be safe.




Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 156330 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/04/06 Updated: 05/10/07


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue - A New Adventure Begins

Great! I loved every bit of this story... keep up the awesome work! xxvictoria

 

Longing... by AstroFire
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: A little poem Ron wrote in one of his History of Magic classes while Professor Beans recited with monotone voice. To who it was addressed? To Hermione, of course!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 340 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/06/06 Updated: 06/07/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 06/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Longing...

Hey Astrofire its harry_victoria again...

I just wanted to say it is a great poem.. But just one thing... I can't really see Ron writing a poem that beautiful.. he doesn't even hardly do his homework! Beautiful work, but maybe it would be better if Ginny was writing something like that to Harry.... sorry! You're still my favourite fan fiction writer! :)

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: Hi Harry_Victoria,

(I'm using some codes, I hope I didn't type them wrong) Thank you very much for your review, and specially for being honest :) Now I know you really care for my writing :P Thanks very much.

Although I understand what you say (and your probably right) the reason why I made this a R/Hr poem (and even worst, wrote by Ron, heh) is because I've always felt that even Ron is kind of shallow sometimes, I also imagine him also as the kind of guy that has this small but significant moments in which he's really profound about himself. For instance, he keeps things that have a special value for him, he sometimes closes up and turns inward, etc.
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I know that these are maybe not enough reasons to say he'd write a poem, and honestly I took a risk with it, but that gap of lack of facts is filled with my imagination, heh.

Rigt now I cannot change it because I'm kind of against about doing major changes to a story after uploaded, but I'll keep in my mind closely when doing my next poem/story. Thank you very much , harry_victoria. Believe me when I say that reviews like yours are always very valued!

~Astro

 

And the Sun Always Returns by the_evenstar
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: As Parvati finds that her whole world has changed, will she find comfort on foreign shores?

First place entry in the May Monthly Challenge One: Pilgrimage.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 2094 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/09/06 Updated: 06/11/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 08/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: Parvati's Pilgrimage

Brandi! *Attacks in huggles* Wow, that was so beautiful, I love it so much (like always!). Great job!

-harry_victoria

Author's Response: Hehe *returns the hug-attack* We\'re violent friends, you know that? :P Well, goodness, I\'m so glad you enjoyed this story - and for leaving it a nice review! It was looking pretty lonely with only a few little reviews on it! :D

 

Halloween, 1981 by PuppetPal
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: This is the story of the fateful night that decided Harry's position and fame in the wizarding world. But what REALLY happened that night?

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 1646 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/10/06 Updated: 06/11/06


Reviewer: harry_victoria Signed
Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween, 1981

Great job! I noticed one little nitpicky thing here (being a beta and everything...)

“There is no reason for you for you to die. Yet. Just let me take your son, and I will let you live a little longer.” You wrote 'for you' twice.

xxvictoria

 
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