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Padfoot Prohibited by Liveley

Rated:831 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Giving high school essays a Marauder twist, this fiction is centered around the idea that some seniors in high school are require to write a letter to incoming freshman before they graduate. At Hogwarts, Seventh Years are given an assignment to write such a letter for the new First Years. Sirius decides to actually take an assignment, well seriously...sort of. He decides to look back on his entire Hogwarts years and write down his list of things not to do at Hogwarts.
Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 06/28/07 Title: Chapter 7: Quidditch, Marauder Style

I really love your story so far, but this is really bugging me. James is a Seeker, not a Chaser. Don't get me wrong--This is definately one of my favorite stories

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 07/27/07 Title: Chapter 6: Prongs' Potion

I am now reading kyour story for the fifth time! I absolutely love it!

Who Thrice Defies by TwinSuns

Rated:152 Reviews
Summary: Voldemort is after Harry Potter, a boy "...born to those who thrice defied him...". But ever wonder what Lily and James did to defy him thus? This is a story about passion, both love and hatred. Follow James and Lily through their 7th year as they unite as Head Boy and Girl, ultimatly fall in love, and deal with the rising Dark Forces and the feared Dark Lord. Final chapter up!
Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 06/29/07 Title: Chapter 10: Things Could Be Worse

I really like your story but if you're going to take the time to write fanfics,learn how to spell the characters' names:Pomfrey, Lucius, Moony. I really do love your story, though.

I love...who? by Hermiones_Revenge

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 985 Reviews
Summary: Harry writes a love note to one person...but someone else recieves it and gets the wrong idea. From here, confusion and chaos come about. Who is really sending the notes? Who really likes who? What is going on?!

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 07/01/07 Title: Chapter 8: I can see clearly now (sort of)

I absolutely love it! I laughed so hard when Malfoy told the entire class that Harry is gay. It's wonderful, just like all your other stories.

Truth Be Told by CraftySlytherin

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 355 Reviews
Summary: What happens when Fred and George Weasley, Hogwarts' reknowned kings of pranks, decide to spike a shipment of pumpkin juice bound for Hogwarts with truth potion? A day filled with true confessions of Hogwarts students!!!!!
Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 02/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Not even funny. It's rather pathetic.

The Problem With Polyjuice by Duck the Duck

Rated:77 Reviews
Summary: Sirius Black thinks he’s got the perfect plan to get his best friend James Potter together with Lily Evans. But when the plan doesn’t go accordingly, chaos, confusion and mixed messages reign the halls of Hogwarts. Has Sirius ruined James’ chances with the girl of his dreams?
Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 06/24/07 Title: Chapter 6: And It All Hits The Fan

I really liked your story! It was one of the more origonal Lily/James fanfics! I think you did an excellent job.

Letters by Sarah Kavanagh

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 408 Reviews
Summary: Lily thought she was in for a boring summer... but James Potter had other ideas. Love Letters, with a rather bizarre twist.
Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 07/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Firbeglass, a fun torture device

Have you given up on this, because I see you haven't written anything more since last year. Please update. I'll give you a cookie!

Promise of a Spring Moon by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 562 Reviews

April showers bring May...hassles? Bridesmaid blues and big trouble from small favours complicate Tonks' life when all she wants is to bring her love for Remus into full bloom.

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 08/25/07 Title: Chapter 2: Spring Forward

Oh, yeah, I missed Evan. I was wondering when he'd turn up.

Author's Response: Thank you for missing Evan! I\'m missing him in the HBP story and wondering how I can give him a cameo. :D

Friendship, Love, and Pranks: The Story of the Marauders by Padfoot is MINE

Rated: Professors • 1181 Reviews
Summary: Chapter Thirty-Eight in Queue!

They say someday your life will flash before your eyes...

The Marauders. The name alone strikes fear into the hearts of teachers and makes girls swoon. Watch as Sirius, who has always kept his emotions locked up in a box, finally finds the girl that has its key; as James masterminds everything, except how to win over the girl of his dreams; as Remus finds love, but learns it's just as hard to keep it going, and as Peter tries to prove he's just as good as the other four, no matter what he has to do. They're unstoppable, and it's safe to say that once they're gone, Hogwarts will never be the same again.

...let's make ours worth watching.
Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 10/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Making History

OMG! Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better. I love the re-write.

Author's Response: YAY! I\'m so glad this one\'s getting good feedback. I kine it much better, as well!

Author's Response: What is a \'kine,\' I wonder? I meant \'like.\' Heh.

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 06/25/07 Title: Chapter 4: Exploding Things and Ceiling Adhesion

Okay. Good story. I really want to see some james-Lily hate, but seeing as you're already done, I'll have to wait and see. I really like sugar cookies, so . . . .

Author's Response: There will definitely be some soon...

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 06/25/07 Title: Chapter 9: Neglecting Your Friends is Good For Them...Sometimes

I am getting a kick out of your story -- and your author's notes. You really are a hilarious author.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m glad they make you laugh!

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 06/25/07 Title: Chapter 14: Stage 2: Anger (Why Lily and Amnesia Don't Mix)

I'm still waiting for my cookie from the last time I reviewed. I am so not reviewing anymore. At least not until you give me a cookie.

Author's Response: No, they\'re my cookies!

Okay, fine. *gives you one*

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 06/25/07 Title: Chapter 18: Introducing: The 'Stop Hitting Yourself!' Hex

iosdhfioashdgfoipshgderoisrjghtuf Now I click the button. You're right. FUN!

Author's Response: Told you so!

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 06/25/07 Title: Chapter 25: It’s Not Called a ‘Ride-On-Me-and-I-Won’t-Hurt-You-at-All,’ Ray!

WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!!!!!! I cannot wait until you write more. Do you think you could e-mail me when you do? hucklebarry@scbglobal.net. I am still waiting for the cookies.

Author's Response: My cookies! You can find out when I write more if you put me/my stories on your favorites list, and you\'ll get a email whenever there\'s a new chapter.

Of Cauldrons and Comrades by LuthAn

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 71 Reviews
Summary: "Albus Dumbledore aimed his wand at the Pensieve’s liquid depths and twitched his arm upwards. Ten ghostly figures slowly emerged from the liquid, their bodies spun out of the translucent matter. The Gryffindor Class of 1978..."

We all know how this tale ends, but how does it begin? Did Lily hate James from Day One? Did James fall head over heels the moment he first laid eyes on Lily? How did Remus feel about the whole thing? Who let Peter slip through the cracks? And what exactly happens when Sirius gets hold of some Time-Release Dungbombs?

The Marauders' years at Hogwarts were marked by internal demons, external tensions, and whispers from the shadows growing steadily louder. By intertwining lives in the midst of danger. By powerful love and a whole lot of laughter. This is their story, a tale of cauldrons and comrades.

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 01/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow. Impressive. Great job with the beginning. I am already hooked

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy the rest of it as much... :)

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 01/29/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Class Acts

You make lily sound like she isn't even smart, just has smart friends! I'm offended!

Author's Response: Don\'t worry: I think Lily is *plenty* smart. I just wanted to get across a little bit of insecurity at the beginning of her time at Hogwarts, especially when compared to very outgoing people like Gwendolyn and Sirius. Give her some time to really become herself, and I promise you won\'t be disappointed!

Thanks for the review! :)

Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 1665 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)


“I’ll always protect you.”
Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26: Comfortably Numb, part 2

You little turkey! I officially hate your cliffies! Now I'm going to be up all night wondering what happens, and I'll fail my Math test tomorrow! Not cool, Miss MagEd. Not cool. Other than that, great story, as always.

Author's Response: It was a rather awful cliffhanger, wasn't it? But I warned you! I do hope you don't fail your math test, though! I'll try and update quickly; thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 12/03/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Comfortably Numb, part 1

Hurry and update! I love it!

Author's Response: I'm about to submit it right now! ;)

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 11/27/07 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Mr. Masselli

Okay, it has been three months since you've updated, and all of your adoring fans are getting impatient. Please, I am begging you, gives us more Lily and James! (and Emma, Sirius, and whoever else you please)

Author's Response: It\'s been three months since Mr. Masselli? Are you sure? I know I\'ve been pretty busy lately and updates have been fewer and farther in between, but three months? Hmm, I better get moving. . . .

Reviewer: Holly218 Signed
Date: 07/07/09 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29: This Is Really Happening

It was really good, but I wish you would write the next chapter faster!

Author's Response: I know it took forever, but it was in the queue forever -- at least two months! The next chapter is already written and I will be submitting it to the queue (hopefully it won't take MONTHS this time) within the next few days. Thanks for the review!