Yay! When I saw my name in the start of the first chapter I thought, "I want the one to get Remus" and now I see that I got my wish! This Nicole sounds so much like me she even looks like me! To top it all off, I am related to Sirius! This is the best fiction ever!
Author's Response: Oh really? That\'s cool. Yeah, I like the name Nicole. =D Wow, I want a fanfic character like me! ;D Thanks!
Aww, Lily should have had the courage to tell James! I really hope that she finds it in time and that James doesn't do something stupid like get a girlfriend or something. I really hate rebound girlfriends/boyfriends.
Author's Response: Lily really needs to find her inner Gryffindor! Well, James tends to be really dense.
Grr, James Potter! I don't like rebound dates! Hopefully this Hogsmeade trip will do something to change that. I felt like crying when I read that James was crying too. Sirius should have gone and yelled at Lily so maybe that'll happen too.
Author's Response: I was tempted to make him go yell, but I figured that I\'d let her of easy for now. I mean, she had just figured out 7 years of pent of up feelings, after all. Haha. =D
Ooo! Take that James, rebound dates always turn out to be evil! Now all yo uhave to do is kiss the girl that is standing next to you under an invisibility cloak!
Author's Response: Exactly! I didn\'t like Julie even though she\'s my character. Evil, evil girl.
If Snape does ANYTHING to Lily I will... I will... I will not be very happy! I don't understand why James got involved with that Julie girl anyway. Rebound dates are a waste of time and quite frankly, tend to make everything worse!
Author's Response: Grr, I don\'t like Snape either! Yes well, what is a romance fanfiction without a little heart break , right? ;D Thanks!
Snape is too twisted to even be at school. If he does anything to Lily I will be very mad at him! Also, where is Julie in all of this?
Author's Response: He is twisted. Julie was supposed to be hiding out. She\'s quite the coward.
Aww, this can't happen! I don't want this to happen! Remus and Sirius will get out of this! When Remus said same to Nicole, my stomach did flips even though that really isn't me. :( I love Remus Lupin! He's my favorite Marauder!
Author's Response: That will be yet to be discovered. I have plans for them yet. I have a habit of pretending my name is in the place of the real character in the story. Or at least at the happy parts. ;D I\'m more of a James girl myself, but I do love Remus! Thanks again!
Yay girls for figuring it out! I really hope that they don't die though, because we all know that neither Sirius or Remus had a love in the original books but we can change that, right?
Author's Response: ... it can be changed. It might not get changed. But it can be! =D Thanks for review.
Lily has a little way to go on the hole of hers and I hope she doesn't go mental before she gets there. . .
Author's Response: You\'d be surprised at how strong Lily cuold be. Or weak I guess, too. Ahaha, I guess you\'ll just have to wait and see.
Oooh I hate that girl! That stupid Lavendar Brown! Urgh, Ron better not fall for any of her tricks! And Harry should tell Ron what he is thinking that Lavendar is doing.
Author's Response: Me too!
Oooh, that hurts. Really, really, really, really, really bad timing. How sad! When I think about Ron's reaction. And I was just about to consider this a really happy story. But just the odds when Ron is involved...
Author's Response: I know - the timing is so awful, isn\'t it? After everything - just when they all thought they were finally safe, that things could still turn out as well as they possibly could. I\'m so glad that Ron and Hermione got their happy ending for real though.
Yay! I really hope that you do write an epiloge. It would be really sweet to know how Gracie grew up, if Ron and Hermione had any more children, if Harry and Ginny had children and who Draco finally ended up with (because we all know that Draco needs some love!)
My favorite little passage was the one where Remus wanted to make whatever Tonks put in that Prophet 10 times worse! That was too funny! They are two of my favorite characters!
I guess it is a good thing that I haven't seen An Ideal Husband or else all the fun might be ruined for me. This is already starting to look really funny, I just hope that another war doesn't start in Harry's house with all those people who need him; Ginny, Draco, Ron, Hermione...
“If, in fact, Mr. Weasley holds true to your word and does not allow the Cannon’s to loose on Saturday, I will give you the letter to dispose of as you please."
This is good then right? Ron won't let his team lose then Harry gets the letter. This is what they wanted to happen all along right? Somehow the whole bet seems stupid because this should be the obvious choice...
Phew! For a second there it looked like she was going to say yes! She just needs to dump him and snog Harry senseless, that always works for these kinds of situations!
Yes! And the Malfoy finally admits it! Maybe Tabby will realize that what Decimus said was right on the money and then she can get over it! I really like Decimus even if his father is a no good prat. The only thing I am worried about is what Darren and Trent would do to him. Or even Krystal, she is sort of scary. I really like the chemistry between Tabby and Decimus so please make them come together soon! Update as soon as you can, please!
Author's Response: Thank you! Finally a long review . . . Chapter 14 is written, so once I get it to my beta I should be ready to update.
I really like the first chapter. I'm glad Tonks told Harry to cause trouble. I love Tonks for that reason!
Yay, I love Fred and George just as much as Tonks! And Lupin of course, he is another favorite. Great story, I like the way this is going.
Ooh, I love the chemistry between Lupin and Tonks, are they going to get together? I really hope so!