That was so sweet! It seemed real too, I love that kind of story.
I want to know Ron's story! Then again, maybe I don't...
10.) I lost track of the very ugly, suspicious looking bug… --- I really don't like bugs and if I find one, someone has to get it or it will be trapped under something clear to where I can see if it has escaped or not until someone does get it. I had a roach in my bedroom for almost 10 hours yesterday because I was home alone. It was under a plastic container with all of my Harry Potter books on it (save Deathly Hallows because I would never put it anywhere close to a bug) so it couldn't escape. I am happy to say it is gone.
So, now I'm confused. Did her really kiss her and this is not the end or did he not really kiss her and this is the end?
Michael Jackson and Snape giggling was too much! That was really good, you should write more.
To make things even more hilarious, when he hit the table he sent a plate of cookies flying, one of which hit Harry in the head. I went into a laughing fit. --- You should write a story and title it "Cookies thrown at Harry". I don't know what it would be about but it would definatley get people's attention!
3.) Bewitch a herd of llamas to follow her around all day (wow, that was random…)
4.) Hex her quill so that it sings show tunes whenever she writes
5.) Haha…..llamas….. --- Llamas are pretty cool! There is a song about llamas, you know. It's called the llama song. There is a duck in it too!
3.) Ron has, once again, done something to disfigure Mrs. Norris. It’s not that I like Mrs. Norris, it’s just that this is becoming somewhat of a nasty habit… --- Mrs. Norris is just in the wrong place at the wrong time. At least this time we know how she was transfigured...
10.) There is a suspicious cluster of chickens wandering around the hall, and though no one has been able to provide a reason for their existence, I BLAME PARVATI! --- That is pretty cool. Once we found a chicken a our football field at school. I don't know it got there but it was over by the equipment shed pecking at the ground. The janitor caught it and brought it to the petting zoo down the road. Anyway, cool story.
At one point, he randomly jumped up onto a table and started to sing this odd little song:
**Here's a llama! There's a llama! And another little llama! Fuzzy llama! Funny llama! Llama llama DUCK!** (thank you krazycase!) --- This is the same llama song I refered to in the last review! (Or at least I remember putting it in a review, I don't remember if it was actually the last review or not...)
13.) We’d settle things with a DANCE OFF --- I've always wondered what a story titled "The Gryffindor Girls Dance Off"...
The minute I caught sight of Ron I laughed. And then I helped him out. (He wasn’t too thrilled by the laughing.) --- I would have laughed too. That is the bad part of me. My friend accidently stated that she liked this guy too loudly, someone heard her, made up a stupid rumour, it got around, came back to us and I laughed out loud when I heard it. She wasn't too happy with me...
I can't remember what I copied here because the page refreshed when the power surged and when I pressed control+v, it didn't do anything and I don't particularly want to go back and read it again, but I know I thought something was funny I just don't remember what, maybe I should go to bed, it is 1:21 in the moring... I'll finish reading later. But I know that this is getting really amusing. OH! Now I remember! It was when Harry asked Ron & Hermione to leave when it was their booth to begin with! Haha! ok, I should go sleep now...
I can already tell that all the brothers are going to guess that it is Hermione and tell him the same things! I love how Ron is so predictable!
There are a lot of extra exclaimation points. A few are nice but they are being used in almost an overly sort of way. Great story though!
Yes! So far my first prediction is coming true. All of Ron's brothers have guessed it was Hermione and are giving him advice that he thinks will never work. Ron has to find out what to do on his own.
So far, Ron is not having any luck with his brothers but he forgot that one of his siblings was in fact, a girl. Let us see what Ginny has to say.
Aww, I love the whole close friendship between Ginny, Hermione, Ron and Harry. Finally, Ron got some good advice!
The line that separates the dream world and reality disappears, leaving them lost in their reflections, unaware they have been selected as the lucky chosen few in the realm of love…
Part 1 of MY GUARDIAN ANGEL series:
1.My Guardian Angel 2.When I See Only You 3.The Boy Next Door
Aww, that wasn't the right spot! :(
Over 10,000 reads so far! Thank you everyone!
***CHAPTER 10 is up...last chapter!
So, in this story, Harry didn't smash the mirror, or did he repair it or something because in the book, he smashed it in the bottom of his trunk.