Penname: Miss Melody
Real name: Brooke
Fav. HP Book: Goblet Of Fire
Fav. HP Characters: Hermione, Snape, and Draco
Fav. HP Quote:"I will only truly have left this school when none here are loyal to me... Help will always be given at Hogwarts to those who ask for it." -Albus Dumbledore
Fav. HP Ships: Hermione/Snape, Hermione/Draco, Hermione/Lucius, Harry/Ginny, Ginny/Draco, and Snape/Lily
I like to write. I like to read. I like Harry Potter. So wouldn't it make sense that I like to read and write Harry Potter fanfictions? Just a thought
I am very open to constructive criticism. Although, I hate when someone just leaves a "criticism" saying they hate the pairing. [i.e. Snape/Hermione]
I get a lot of writing ideas from songs. And I plan on writing a couple song fics. But this doesn't mean the plots aren't mine because they are. I just get the ball rolling with songs sometimes.
In The Hands Of A Death Eater
To Come [Maybe]
Rumors & Affairs [Hermione/Snape&Snape/Lily]
The Rise And Fall [Hermione/Draco]
He'll Never Change [Hermione/Draco]
Dreaming Of Our Dates [Hermione/Ron]
The Sudden Breakup [Hermione/Ron]
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I really like this set up for the story. It gets you really wanting to read on in his struggle. Great job.
Summary: For once in her life, Hermione is faced with a problem she does not know how to solve...
Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Snape kissed her?! Eeekk!!
I'm really loving your story. It's high up on my list of "favorite fan fictions," even if it's not finished. I can't wait to read more. Keep it coming! =]
Author's Response: thank you! i\'m flattered! and i have every intention of keeping it coming :D
I love the last line. =]
Amazing writing. Just like every other chapter. I like how you keep Snape in the character that J.K. wrote and don't make him go all soft. [Or at least not yet] I love your story.
Author's Response: I\'m so happy to hear that you think Snape is IC (that\'s my biggest fear is slipping up with his character). thanks for reading!
Summary: All her life Ginny has tried to live up to the expectations set by those around her, and more importantly herself. When Harry breaks up with her Ginny thinks she realises what she must do to acheive this perfection but this soon turns into an obsession she can't escape.
Warning: The main focus of this Story is on the effects of an eating disorder, if you get easily upset by such issues I suggest you dont read.
Disclaimer: All characters and plots ect recognised as belonging to JK Rowling do belong to her and I give her full credit.
*Chapters 1 and 2 have been edited*
I think Ginny was a great choice of character. She's the youngest child of several. (I don't feel like counting) She is, most likely, influenced by the media like many other girls. She doesn't receive a lot of attention because she has so many siblings and George and Fred do because they're trouble makers, Harry does because he's Harry Potter, and the older boys were great in school.
Anyway, great writing. I really loved it and am now hooked on. I can't wait to read more to the story.
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad my reasoning made sense to someone else. The next chapter is in queue but it keeps getting rejected... bit rude but I\'m hoping it will be accepted this time. Thanks for reading.
Wow. I really liked this chapter. Especially the ending. I like that someone actually notices Ginny isn't right.
Update soon. =]