uuh sounds interesting:)
the body hermione has found may belong to a blonde bouncing ferret ?
Ooh I look so much forward to reading the next chapters! sounds brilliant!
Aawh what a sweet chapter:) Draco can sure be a jerk, but I guess kissing is way of saying that he's sorry haha. It was a good idea for Draco to use the word Mudblood again, it kinda made me not forget that Draco is indeed an arrogant spoiled pureblood. its good that he accepts hermione because he has got to know her, not that he has finally realised that muggles can be just as smart etc. that would seem unrealistic, since he was brought up to despise them. thanks again very much for a brilliant chapter! I hope to find out what Pansy's devilish plan is, hermione and draco are not going to have peace just yet;)
and btw I love the kissing-in-the-rain part. that was lovely:) that page pansy gave harry and ron.. is that the page form the book hermione and draco were looking for ? the page, that somehow will explain how to get the love-knot off ? I am dying to know the answer!!!
Sparx, youre the best :D !!
Amazing chapter. I really enjoyed it. especially Hermione's letter to Ginny. haha.. how typical of her to try to read her way to a logical answer to her seemingly weird emotions. thank you so much Sparx! you make my world rock and you lighten up my rainy day.
What a sad chapter. but it was almost necessary. and I think I have figured it out: the love-knot will release its "prisoners" if they are either intensely loving or hating eachother. I can't wait for the next chapter! good job
I'm normally not very much into same-sex pairings, but this was really - sexy:)
keep up the good work, and thanx very much for this story!
This has been one of my favorite fics for a long time, and I've only recently reread it, and I was glad to once again discover the reasons for why I loved - and still love it so much. It's not perfect, some chapters are stronger than others, sometimes it seems that you've either hurried too much with finishing them, or forgotten to pay real attention to your characters, their surroundings and details. But the thing is, the chapters you've succeeded in, they're not just half-good, they're heartbreaking. Especially at the times when you give an extra thought to the emotions evolving around Hermione or Draco, it becomes a really intense experience to read.
I could have wished that you've made them older, I know it would have meant for you to change some of the characters past lives, but I think it would have made it more realistic all together. I've got to say though, as cliché as your story may be, it works and that I think, is almost an even greater accomplishment than if you had decided to come up with some entirely unseen and different. As your clever mirror says, clichés are there for a reason, they must work if repeated so often, and I think your fic is a proof of that. A tearjerker indeed. And one that makes my heart melt and crumble with grief and glee for every word I read.
HAHA! amazing, I really enjoyed your brilliant story, with quit a different plot!
awh that was really sad. snape's only pet - dead. I'll bet it was bellatrix who decided to put an end to the pet-having-a-pet problem. Malfoy is really moody - I can't figure him out. sometimes he's close to nice and then he turns and punish little Severus with the cruciatus curse - cos that was what he did, right ? Anyway, good chapter!
I never quite imagined that snape would turn out to be a seeker, but people surprise you:) WHAT is wrong with James? he's just scared that stupid Sirius is gonna taunt him about being nice to Severus. Siriously, Sirius should just stop behaving like a complete prat. I like how Great you are at describing normal days, days without action at all, but still make them interesting by a conversation or a simple impression.
I'm glad that James is behaving somewhat properly towards Severus and I love the idea that Lily and snape were to become friends. That would make sense. the slytherins are nasty though, but I guess they were never the big heroes of goodness anyway. it's entertaining that Bellatrix is a bossy slytherin queen, not even lucius dare anger her:) great chapter!
I always wondered how Snape and Sirius/James(/Remus/Peter) started to hate eachother. It's sad, really. But the way you let Severus and Sirius have a fallout when they'd almost only met eachother was perfect. But how sad is it, really. Snape, the outsider in the muggle world AND the wizard world. no wonder he seems so bitter. Argh, you totally forget that this isn't part of the book! great job:)
Hmm. This was a really interesting chapter. The sorting was really something, I liked it. And dear old Lucius Malfoy. I couldn't have pictured him clearer than you did, thanks for that. I think what I liked best was when Lucius introduced the interesting people of Slytherin House to Severus, in a way, that just said so much more about Slytherin House than a thorough description would have. I dont know why though, it was just excellent. The house is a mystery, I'm really annoyed that it's nothing more than the house of evil people in the HP books (no offence JK,) and I firmly believe that there is so much more to it, I mean, Andromeda, Sirius' favourite cousin resides in Slytherin so it can't be that bad. So therefore, I hope that you can give it some glamour in this story. I look forward to read and find out! for the first time, I think someone should kick Sirius' ass, please give Snape that one pleasure:)!
This piece is a seventh year, One-shot concerning Hermione and Draco that will either puzzle you, or intrigue you. I might warn you of slight AU, it depends on your take on this piece. We already know that this couple wouldn't exist in canon anyway, so please bare with. This was my very first HG/DM pairing and I did my best to avoid any...cliche's with this complex couple. And really, let my know your opinions. Criticism, flames, well hopefully not, or kind words are deeply appreciated.
oh I loved it! you really have talent, I look forward to more coming from you!:)
That has to be the cutest thing I've ever read! At first I was a little sceptical, since Sirius/Peter seemed unlikely, but I'm glad that you gave some sort of meaning to Peter, made him cute and huggable. I am so tired of reading fics in which peter plays no other role than the dump future betrayer, that follows the cool Real marauders around the castle.
Thanks very much
There is nothing for it but to sit on the bed and begin, and hope that the sentence finds its own ending. “Once upon a time…”
“I’ve heard that one.”
Interrupting little monkey. “There was once an old…”
“I’ve heard that one too.”
HAHA! A really nice entertaining story, I enjoyed every sentence. you seem very keen on telling storys with topics far from what people might expect authors to write about. but I like that you often choose to tell about the small things in the everyday life. great job
I keep returning to this one-shot, to re-read it. Perfect length, not too ooc in any way, good dialogue and nice ending. A good ending is always somewhat open to interpretation...
You make the romance work as well, I never could believe Draco as a chocolate and flowers sort of type, it had to be a little more complicated than that.
All in all, such a great job. I think I read this the first time when I was about 15 or 16, I'm 21 now, and it's as alive as ever to me.
I have now reached the conclusion that this pair is very very cute! Lucius is very.. romantic in this chapter, but it never turns the story into some sappy happy-ending fic. you picture Molly excactly as I imagined her being at that age, if I ever imagined her as young. great job, I look forward to read the next chapters.