Clever and cute and the WORLD'S GR8EST HP FAN!!!
A Memory Restoring Potion-- Couldn't it be used on the Longbottoms?
Author's Response: Possibly. Lockhart too. But it\'s not approved by the Ministry yet, and who knows how long that will take? Hermione just happened to smuggle a dose of it out for Harry (although she conveniently left out that little detail when she was talking to him).
Heyyy! I love this!!! :D Update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I finally submitted chapter 7 just last night, so watch for it soon. ;-)
Its cute enough, but Hermione better stop being a 'pompous bitch'and u better update quick!
Author's Response: She was awful in this chapter, wasn\'t she? I really want to get an update out -- I\'m really trying, I swear! I have an outline for the story, I know where I want it to go and exactly what I want to happen -- I\'m just having trouble writing it out! Thanks for the review.
As long as it doesnt go too far... if u know wat i mean. harry oughta come on out quickly... ginny x harry 4 eva!
This probably calls for a repetition... coz its the most confusing fic I've ever read... I kinda like it though.. :S
So... beautiful... So... sweet!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I worked very hard on it; I\'m glad you like it! :D
Ohhh this rocked!
Pls dont leave me in suspense!!! There'll be another chapter won't there???
Author's Response: I\'m soooooo sorry! :o That\'s where the story ends! It crushed me to end it there, too, but it was the best place, wasn\'t it? If I\'d given you a conclusion, there would have been a few tears perhaps (if I was lucky), but then the story (being a one-shot) would have been eventually forgotten. Hopefully, this way, the story will stick in your mind for a few weeks instead of a few days. Read \"The Lady, or the Tiger?\" if you liked this story so much, because that is what I based it off of.
Ohh.... my god. :)
NO FRIKKIN' WAY!!!!!!!! WHAT IS WITH THE CLIFFHANGER????? SO NOT FAIR!!!!!
No seriously, IS THE WIZENGAMOT FRIGGIN NUTS???? You guys are arguing the case all wrong!!! You should say the Lupins were MEANT to be back here, and that this IS history, and that nothing is changed 'coz this IS how everything is meant to be. Cos that's how it is!!!!!! SO UNFAIR!!!! Tell that @#$%^&*#%# Aloysius Sproule that if they are sent BACK, it will be a perversion of history!!!!!
Hey... the story line rocks so far... but i think ur going a but rigid with the language n stuff... if u get wt i mean.... use more contractions and don't make everything so FORMAL... otherwise.. its good =)
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback - I\'ll keep that under advisement as I move forward :)
It's beautiful... n that's all i can say!
Winner of the 2008 Quick Silver Quills Award for Best General Story.
The first book in the Alexandra Quick series.
The war against Voldemort never reached America, but all is not well there. When 11-year-old Alexandra Quick learns she is a witch, she is plunged into a world of prejudices, intrigue, and danger. Who wants Alexandra dead, and why?
This story is canon-compliant with the Harry Potter universe, but the characters and settings are all original. I've put a lot of work into envisioning a world as detailed as the original series; I hope you enjoy it.
Your version of the magical world is appropriately Ameriican, and different enough to avoid embarassing parallels to Harry Potter & Hogwarts. Awesome writing and Alexandra seems to be a very complex & layered personality!
This made for great reading... :)
Seventh grader Alexandra Quick returns to Charmbridge Academy. This year she faces bullies from another wizarding school, a secret Dark Arts club, and the machinations of her father, but her greatest trial yet awaits her in the dangerous Lands Below.
This is the second book in the Alexandra Quick series.
hey!!! another awesome story.... maximilian was my favourite character so it took me a coupla moments to register that he wasn't coming back... in fact, i'd probably have felt the way i did after sirius black died in hp 5 if i hadn't caught myself in time... as of now, mourning dead fictional characters is firmly on my Don't list... hope it stays that way... i miss max :)
"James Sirius Potter, it is the judgment of the Wizengamot that you have been found guilty. You knowingly, in possession of sound mind and body, used the Cruciatus Curse and the Killing Curse in the intentional torture and murder of one Gregory Goyle the Third."
James Potter was going to Azkaban for the rest of his natural life, and his whole family was in shambles. His wife and child have fled the country, his sister was missing, and his parents were a wreck. However, James knew that he had larger problems: his guilt was coming more and more in question.
Though he knew that James was withholding information about the circumstances of the murder of which he had been found guilty, Harry had secrets of his own; however, even he could not handle this torrent of trouble alone. Can Harry trust his darkest confidences to anyone? Even family?¬†
How will the Potter clan stop the downward spiral into pain and disaster, and can they recover what they've lost?
This fic was nominated for a 2010 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Next-Generation Story.
Lol... gripping storyline, and gripping storytelling. But yes, I guessed this one. Kudos for narration tho. :)
Well, bonus to you for knowing what happened before you got there. However, there are plenty of twists and turns that await you as you get further into the story. So, no worries about guessing the whole story, because there is so much going on, it would be close to impossible.
Thanks for reviewing and happy reading.
Beautiful and awesome writing style... only one word to describe it... GRIPPING!!! I heart it!!! :)
Thank you so much for letting me know what you think!
I loved writing this story, and even though you're only about 1/3 the way through it and there is plenty of action to come, I'm glad that you've enjoyed what you've read to this point.
Take care and happy reading!
Hey!!! I'm finally done with your story... and I really love it!!!! Great work!!!!
Congrats on getting all the way through it, and I'm so glad you liked it.
Keep an eye out in the Most Recent page, since the Epilogue is in there and just waiting to be pushed through. I hope you enjoy that, as well. Take care and happy reading!