I'm a student who wants to be an author when I grow up. I love soccer, basketball, drawing, acting, writing (of course), Lord of the Rings, Eragon, X-men, Pirates of the Caribbean, Star Wars (Hayden Christensen is so hot in III), anything with a dragon (or any other magical creature in it), and I love my family.
I have to name my friends because they are so WON-DER-FUL!
They are Picklebug, shout2muggles, Professer Bookworm, hpsmartone32, and malfoysgrlfriend83.
You guys rock!*
Wow, It may just be letters but it really hits you. How could Pertunia be so evil. I mean really, how can someone hate the person they grew up with. Please write more, I'm adding your story to my favorites list.
Whoops! I spelled Petunia wrong! So sorry (And I want to an Author?! I'd never live without spellcheckers). Please continue writing. Love your story.
I'm not a fan of poems (because I can't write them very well), but this was so wonderfull. It was sad, but happy at the same time. I am printing it out and sharing it with my friends!
I love stories with songs mixed in them! And your story is one of the best I've read!
I really like this story. But I haven't been able to read it. Every time I go on mugglenet I look to see if you've updated. PLEASE update soon!
This story is very good! I like it. The way you write their love problems is so funny. But there is one thing that made me grab the fifth book. You said that Ginny was still on crutches but in the book it said the Ginny's ankle was completly healed. Oh-well, it makes no difference, really. Great story, keep writing!
Author's Response: Ah yes - well about that I'm fairly sure that I put in that Ginny only needed the crutches for additional support, I think I did mention that she was healed! Um can't remember that far back! Anyway I'm glad to see you've resurfaced - I thought you'd gone underground!! ;)
OMG, you setting up the tension in this story just perfect! I love Lily! She is so real! And James is too! Harry seems just like my little cousin. I feel so horrible that Lily, James, and Sirius suspect Remus. It's so sad. There are two things that you need to do to make this story perfect. We need to see some of Peter (I know you're going to need him for secret-keeper but we need to see alot of him) and we need to see Remus. Also, Voldemort seems a little bit animated, if you know what I mean? Other than that, keep up the good work and please update.
Author's Response: We'll be seeing a touch of Remus in the next chapter, but it's brief. I'm planning to make him more prominent in companion shots that I'm currently constructing, so stay tuned. :) And, no, I don't know what you mean by animated... I certainly hope you don't mean frisky, because that would just be gross. *Shudders* lol Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it. :)
What I meant was that Voldemort seemed like he was from a cartoon. He needs to be a little more frightening. Yeah and your right about the frisky part. That would be gross! Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bye
Author's Response: lol Well thanks for thinking about that. Voldemort's difficult to write without reducing him to a puddle of cliches. :)
I loved this!! Sometimes short stories are better then long things. I loved the way you put in the poem! I also give you full marks!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. :)
I like this story. You see a whole new side of Slytherin! I like that because no one is all evil (except maybe Voldemort). Speaking of which, since Lily is going to help with the war, maybe Draco and the other Slytherins will help to (monkey see, monkey do). I like the direction this story is going in!
P.S. Not quite the Lily I imagined, but cool all the same.
Author's Response: Yes, Lily will be a big influence on Slytherin. Sorry I didn't reply before. I've been having trouble with logging in.
I love it! The fake James in the fire was totally original! This is still my favorite fic on Mugglenet! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: AGGH!!! THANK YOU!!! *blushes hysterically*
This is the first time I've reviewed. Aren't you lucky. This is my favorite story on mugglenet. You write really good. Can't wait for Chapter 10!!!
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing DragonGirl!! I love reading new reviews! i really appreciate it. i honestly do :)
Waaaa! I'm having a bad day! My story is still not up AND you didn't update! I need some chocolate! P.S. Please update!
Author's Response: ohhh dragon we're going through the same thing i think. because of the funky server thing of 2 days ago, the mods are probably having a tough time of it with all the barrage of stories. we'll be rewarded in the end i know it!!!!
Absolutly loved it! I had totally forgotten about your story for a while (I must go iron my fingers) but when I remembered I jumped to this site as fast as I could (technically as fast as the computer could). I loved it! Sirius in the cold was so funny! Anywho, update soon! P.S. I'm a little confused, when Lily and James got to Remus house they immediatly left for Loch Ness, right? Where was James when Lily saved Sirius? My guess is that he was after the deatheaters. Am I right? P.S.S Is Lily going to be pregnant soon *wink*? Gotta study for exams, Bye!
Author's Response: i'll try to update soon, but, like you apparantely, i have exams the next 3 days.im a bit of a busy bee, though i DID begin 14 (am on pg 3 now).. all that happened with lily and james will be explained in the enxt chapter, i promise (i wrote that part), and yes, lily is going to be pregnant VERY soon muahahahaaa. good luck on the exams!!!!
I was reading your other reviews and I saw you talking about the new Star Wars movie. What did you think of it? I personally loved it. The best part was any part with Annakin in it (he is so hot!). To bad he went bad. To bad he went from hot to literally hot! Well gotta go! Sorry for wasting your time! ^_^
Author's Response: "too bad he went from hot to literally hot" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!! that is stupendous!!! you are NOT wasting my time! as a matter of fact, you are keeping me from studying, which is EXACTLY what i want! to be honest about the star wars movie...i had to see it 3 times to actually like it, but remember: i am a diehard fan of the original trilogy, so the entire prequel trilogy has been hard to swallow pour moi. this one was by far the best of the prequels. the script was seriously (bah) lacking. but overall it was pretty good. anakin is not my favorite actor (especially after that disaster that was episode 2) but i must say he impressed me in this one. his acting was much better, save a few parts where i wanted to laugh (not funny parts either). i guess for me there were just too many things that didn't connect w/ the original trilogy (like leia remembering her "Real mother" and all. all in all, it was an enjoyable movie, but doesn't hold a candle to the original.
I'm reviewing again!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. I'm glad I decided to stop in on mugglenet after seeing my friends internet site. Please keep going!! I look forward to reading a new chapter every week. Byebye
Author's Response: im really glad you did tooo!!! (and let's hope a new chapter comes every week ;) ) I'm on easter break, though (which is 6 days long!!!!!!!!!) so i'm hoping to maybe get some done in advance :)
THAT WAS SO GOOD! I had been waiting for forever, but it was worth the wait. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Hey erikthephantom, I'm guessing that you're having trouble with the queue being down too. I saw in the responses to your other reviews that you said the chapter was coming. I submitted my story last Friday and it still hasn't come up. Oh-well. P.S.- It struck me yesterday that the review I sent last time sounded a little rude. So sorry. I was having a bad day. We were cleaning the inside AND the outside of the house. I did get my chocolate, though. Bye!
(ha ha) I saw that you put a response to my last review. I bet that makes me look like a true genuis author. It's like jumping into a lake before you check to see if the water is cold (or is filled with man-eating leeches). Oh-well, I'm going to some more chocolate (thank god I've got a lot of that)!
Yeah- I recently saw four, five, and six. They are way better than the first three. *Do you remember your mom* totally did not fit. I mean, she was like 5 minutes old! I can't really remember things that I did when I was 4, much less when I was born! I still think Christensen did a good job in three. He had a really good Frodo look (yes I am a diehard LOTR fan, too). I loved the fight scene at the end. I felt so sorry for Obi-Wan (THAT IS THE PROBLEM WITH FICTION! YOU GET SO CAUGHT UP WITH THE STORY THAT YOU FORGET ITS NOT REAL!). Any way, I still love your story and I am really looking forward toward your next chapter. Once HP&HBP comes out, I'm going to write more stories (I have two not very special one-shots). Talk to ya later (update soon please). P.S. Glad you liked my joke. I have a very dry sense of humor and not many people get me (even I have trouble understanding myself!). Bye.