i need a person 2 look over my chapter of angels fall first...i have it written just having a bit of a problem gettin it accepted
wow you're at the ninth chapter and this still is a good story...even though i dont like to watch people suffer this was well written not put in a harsh or mean way...good work.. i look foward to your next chapter :)
Author's Response: I don\'t like making people suffer. Unfortunately I seem to be good at depressing stories. It\'s easier to describe trauma than it is happiness.
Thanks for reading. emma x
wow...this was surpringhly good... I usually go for ginny/malfoy but this was fab...u better be a fast writer cuz I absolutly love this story...keep up the good work hun
Author's Response: Thanks! i think you\'ll be happy to know then that i\'ve finished the whole story :) I wont upload it all at the same time but hang in there, it\'ll all be up before Deathly Hallows is released XD
lol..the ending surpried me...amzing is the word
Author's Response: Why, thank you! Thanks for reviewing, too. =)
that i so beatiful....i love the song it goes sooo well w/ this story..i love hermoine/draco....u should write more on it....fab work hun...keep it up -krystal
wow...i would have neverknown it was hermione..but thatz ok cuz this story is amzing...it waz soo sadd but good...sorry im not very good when i write a review cuz i never tell people what theyre good at..but i rarely write a review so whenever i write one the whole story is just fab..keep up the amzing work hun
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! That really makes me feel special that you liked it so much! *huggles first reviewer* ~Lindsey :)
i love it....:).....i love bella and Rodolphus 2 gether and u made it fab...itz great ..keep up the good work hun.......(first reviewer!!)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I\'m glad you enjoyed the story.
beautiful 2nd chapter
Author's Response: I\'m glad to hear that you enjoyed the second chapter as well :)
I am addicted to this story already ..i cant wait till ur next chapter..itz absolutely fab...:).anyway keep up the good work hun
Author's Response: Thank you for for your awesome comments and for leaving a review!
*sobs hard and loud*.... aww..how sad...it makes me cry..:(...great story but sad..fab job hun
Author's Response: Aww I\'m sorry to make you cry. :/ Lol see this is why I never write angst. =P I\'m glad you like the story though. Though it is an angst story I think the *sadness* gets a little better from here on in. Thank so much for your review!!! ~GG
aww... how sad....i love the song though ..im gonna have to listen 2 it sometime...anyway i loved the story ..the song was perfect for it....keep up the fab work hun
wow.. this is very sad but very well written....i love the second to last line
“Goodbye, Harry,” she whispered one last time, her voice blending with the wind.
It gives me such a sad mental picture....i can almost see her with the flower.....
well any way enough of my ramblings ..i loved ur story hun ..it waz beatiful....
Author's Response: Yes, I wanted to do a sad story, to express how I think Harry would die if he does. But I really don\'t want him to. That line was one of my favorites in the story... I\'m happy that you read it, and enjoyed it!
wow... i have to say that i loved this story ...my favorite line was
And that was how the young man felt: He felt like he wanted to forget (or remember, he was not quite sure), and so he entered this room, falling into the nearby wing-backed chair.
i loved how u said that he wanted to forgot (or remember)... it sets off the moood of the story...it ws just great hun:)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so very much, amzing. I\'m thrilled to hear that you enjoyed it.
And that was your favourite line, you say? I liked that one too; it portrayed the confusion I needed the young Black to feel.
this is a fab start ...i love it already... =]...hurry up and put up the next update....:)..lol
wow...this is a great story of the maureders (..i think i spelled that wrong..im a horible speller..) and how they got together..it was fab..:)
how sad....i love how you portay both draco and ginny.. how very sad...ure writing is amzing though....im adding this one to my favorites
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
i love this story so much....its amzingly well written and it soo sad especially the line...
Funny. he thought, watching it drift to the floor, pulling at another petal, how easy it can fall apart once hurt.
it really describes how draco is feeling that moment... overall i would give it a five out of five =]....
ps ..its going on my favorites ..:)
Author's Response: Ah! Finally! Validation!! Thank you so much for your review, I\'m glad you liked it!
I really liked this chapter...I reread the other chapters and I felt lik eyou just didnt catch James character quite enough...this chapter was fascinatingly(i think thats a word...lol) good i hope you get updates 4 both of your stories because I love them both...:)
Author's Response: I was hoping to catch James\' character better in this chapter. I\'ll be updating soon!
yay...thank you for making another chapter..i only feel sad there's going to be only two more chapters posted:(
Author's Response: Thank you! I know how you feel but I think it's a good ending!
i loved it.!!! i thought his letters were hilarious too...any way just one thing...it would be fun to see snapes letters..you re the the author...any way im adding it to my favorites cuz i loved it sooo much...update soon
Author's Response: Yes, I\'m putting up his replies!
[Peter Pettigrew, Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder, and the logic of fives. Dark, some disturbing imagery. One shot.]
this is quite a well written story... i once saw a movie about this guy called monk...(if you havent seen it you should go and rent it cuz it really is an amzing movie(monk)...and he acted almost like you displayed peter to act in this story... idont know where you you got this perspective but i thought it was fabously done...i especially liked the ending....There were supposed to be five captives in the room at Malfoy Manor. Harry, that Weasley boy, the pale girl, the old man, and the black boy. There were supposed to be five.
But there are two, only two, and Peter knows his safety net is gone.
Panic sets in.
what a way to end a story...i love how you got everything to fit in the story...how did you figure that one out??...any way...i lovd it....even though it was kinda dark