i need a person 2 look over my chapter of angels fall first...i have it written just having a bit of a problem gettin it accepted
there's only one word...wow. ...wow in a good way not bad... i kinda wished you hadn't put Oblivisci on the front of the summary cuz with that i kinda knew what was going to happen but all in all it was pretty good..im assuming sirus dosent know about the voldemort part yet..good story
this is was about the corniest cheesiesest fluffiest story i have evr read..........and i loved it.
i thought it was faboously written however sad it was ..... the ending was really quite depressing....i truly believed that somehow he would use the time turner to save hermione.....aa..o well... it was very good anyway.....i just thought the 17 year old tom riddle was the teensiest bit corny when he was in love....but otherwise you wrote his emotions very well especially when he cried when he knew that she was gone....
alright.. enough of my ramblings fab story hun
i understand how she can say how she loves him, but i fail to see how she can think about sucide after only three months...i liked your fic but for me it lacked depth. i think you should do a fic that follows the three months they were dating because three months just wasnt working for me ..maybe three years...well anyway good work. i hope you give a thought to writing about their three months beforehand....:)
This is a SB/GW story. I know it's a major age difference, but if written right, this pairing is beautiful.
AU for SB/GW relationship. - R rating in later chapters.
*sobs* this is soo sad ....great story though.....wow...it makes me cry:(....keep up the good work hun...:)
i dont know if I ever wrote you a review..( disregard this one if you already recieved one from me...) but this story is really really good...it was soo sad at the end with ron dead..i actually thought he was ill...but anyway i adored it and i hope you keep up the good work with whatever you write
yay!!!!....i love this story soo much already ..u have done a fab job on it hun:)...i cant wait till the next up date...hurry up :)..lol....:)
beautiful one shot on how they got married..:)..loved it
omg .....this is the only fic ive had 2 cry at....waaaa..how sad..it is really really really well written....wow ure a fab writer ....i especially liked the last part...."
What a lovely family portrait, they thought
what a good ending.....u have a lot of talent writing sob fics...im going to go and look for any more of ur stories..:)
lovely ... ithought it was fab...this is an amzing one shot....love how u portrayed lily..it was great
i love this story ...and this chapter was sooo short...oh well .....fab story hun keep it up w/ the fast updates and amzing riting
WOW..im adding this story to my favorites...love it ..usually I don't go for these kind of stories*slash*..but wow ...kk hurry up and update plz plz plz:)
oh wow what a great installment.. I kinda forget what exactly this story was about and i had to re-read since its been so long since you updated, but once again i remembered why i subscribed to this amazing story:) Please update sooner because I love your work
Author's Response: Why, thank you! I certainly shall. :) Things are just always so busy--constant battle with the clock that I continually lose. *laughs* Working on the next installment, promise it won't be much longer coming. :)
wow...i don't usually like teacher/ romance....maybe cuz all my teacher s are ugly and are obssessed w/ what they teach.lol....but i love it..great job hun:) hurry up and write another chapter....plz plz plz plz ;)
Author's Response: Ha ha! Very true about most professors, well said. :) I\'m glad that you\'re enjoying it. Next chapter is done and in the queue! :) Thanks for the review!
i was afraid that you wouldnt write another chapter... i usually dont get involved in a story that has many chapters but i have to say it was worth every chapter....this chapter is as good (maybe even better) than the rest of your story...(good luck with the new book you have started:)
Author's Response: Ah, I am so glad you like the story so much. :) I do promise not to be so long between chapters this time, and I am happy to hear that you liked this particular chapter... I wrote it in one sitting one day and didn't even bother to read over it before submitting, which could have been disastrous. Ha! Thanks for the review and the wishes! -KMM
I have to say this is a fab story ... i seemed to like the the first lines and last lines the best.....
Tom watched the waves below him. From the dominant position over the sea, he could see very far into the horizon, where the ocean and the black-pitched sky kissed and gave birth to the stars and the moon high above him; a paradise and its mirror.
.. It just has so much descripition just showing were he was and I thought that it somehow showed tom in this story....showing how he was going to change into something different..a mirror like image except something that was blurred and a different color..sorry now im just ramlbing :)...anyway i also liked the last line.....
The boy, Tom Marvolo Riddle, had died under the silent dance of the waves. Lord Voldemort was born from the ashes of the sea.
i love how poetic and sad this is ....it almost makes me feel bad 4 voldy ...lol.. so thatz a 1st...any way loved ur story hun keep up the fab work:)
Author's Response: I deserve being hung up for taking so long to answer this. As you can imagine, I stoped writing for a couple of years, but I'm back now. Thanks for stoping by :)! I loved how you put it: "he was going to change into something different... a mirror/ like image except something that was blurred and a different color..." I can say it wasn't meant that way intentionaly, but maybe, knowing what was going to happen, that was the scenario formed in my mind. Thank you very much for cheering me up :) I'll most certainly try to start writing again!
AWWW i love this this story so very much and im so happy you finally updated and didnt abandon this story.... thank you for making this new chapter and i loook forward to a new one :)
oooo...i love this story ... i know u just put out this chapter but i already want more so hurry up and get a new update :)..lol.... any way i just wanted to say I loved that line when lily mentioned that she wanted to be the wind....i loved how it described how she felt and how the wind was moving around james... i loved it..well anyway fab story keep it up hun...:)
woot woot! you have finally updated. I'm so proud, it's so easy to give up on a story, but brownie points to you for writing yet another chapter. keep up the amazing work :Dhope to read more soon
Author's Response: Hahaha, too true! Well, I'm glad I managed to update also; thanks for not giving up on me!
OMYGEE i love love love love this story... i actually finished the entire thing in a day which took forever... But please please please don't give up the story... I absolutely adore it.. Hermione and Snape is my fav. fan fic and i lurvee this storyy... Thankkk you for writing this friggin awesome story and pls pls pls update soon ... thank u love:)
Author's Response: wooooow -- you read the whole thing in a day? that's a lot of reading xD thanks so much for your kind words! i'm glad you're enjoying it!