Born in a gopher hole in the Weasley's back yard. Have only be caught and forcefully de-gnomed three times. Enjoy reclining in my hammock, tied between two rose bushes, and sipping on poppy-aide.
Very nice writing. I hope there's some deep, dark, nasty reasons why they broke up...
Nice, but I'm really thinking you might have an odd attraction to good ol' Bellatrix...heh heh. Well written.
Author's Response: Thanks (I think)
I'm really liking this view of the story - its twisted, but cool. Can you go into more detail about where the Dark Lord is and what he's doing?
Heh...that was damn funny. It paints a very vivid picture. Will there be a gross eating challenge?
Author's Response: of course!
Nice personal story. No need to re-introduce us to all the Weasley's though. I'll definitely read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! =D. The next chapter is going ggggreat, haha. The Weasley thing was sort of like Harry thinking, but instead of writing his exact words I wrote it out in my words and his thoughts.
Nice writing. You certainly are a dedicated Neville fan. That's cool. Any thoughts on him being the half-blood prince?
Author's Response: ^^ I love my Neville. Well, I really would love for him to be the half blood prince, but I haven't seen any mention of him anywhere being a half blood. But it would be great if he was, because that would mean that the next book would have a LOT more of Neville in it! *gets excited* but for some reason, I always thought it was Hagrid. Don't kill me if Jo has already said this wouldn't happen, but I don't remember reading anything about it. I always thought that his mum was somehow a giant Queen or something, making Hagrid the half blood prince. But who knows, maybe it'll be a new character. Well, anyway, before I start ranting even more, I better stop. Thanks for reviewing!
Cool imagery. I could just about smell Azkaban. It looks like a nice setup for a long story. Tell us more about the main character so we can get a sympathetic relationship with him.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, GG. I'll reveal a little more about the main character in each chapter. The trick is going to be for readers to figure out what is truth about his background, and what he's just fabricating to fit in with his new "friends".
Very nice and wickedly original.
I think your chapter is interesting and a cool set up for a long story. I really liked the idea of house elves being used by the students in the "old days". Heh - I wonder if they were banned for some reason? The dialogue between Tom and Elise is too adult-sounding. They're just teenagers and ought to sound like it. Make them more flirty and naughty. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: okay i will make them more flirty :-) thank you!!
Very cool opening chapter. You've got me hooked.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. Subsequent chapters will be slow in appearing, but rest assured I have twelve so far. Waiting for chapter two to be validated!
Very slick...opens lost of doors to possibilties.
Very Nice....Its hard to think of a wizard going back and working in the muggle world...that's very interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I thought Hermione would find it too hard to live in the Wizarding world anymore after what happened. But things might change by the end of the story!
Nice...Lupin is a cool character to get into the head of. In a lot of ways he's probably the only one that really understands Harry.
What an interesting character to connect with on a first-person point of view. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like doing first-person point of view so much better than third-person. It is hard though, when I\'m just a teenaged girl, trying to type the mind of a twenty-two (Or around this age, at least)year old werewolf.
Hey...where's the rest? I think its a good start and a good idea....