You really must be the funniest fanfic writer ever
If you were a gay guy, I'd ask you to marry me
Lol...this was really funny.
Can't wait entil the last chapter.
This fic so funny it almost killed me.
I think you shuld have won. Yeah but second place is not so bad.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I don\'t think it deserved to win, but I\'m glad you thought so!
Great story, can't wait to read more of it.
Great job, really good fanfic.
This chapter was a litle boring caus I think it was to simular to harry's first trip to hogwarts. But thats just me. Can't wait to find out wich house you put him in. see yeh ;-)
Author's Response: That\'s okay - it\'s your opinion! :) I can understand why, and I will remember that in the future. ;) ~Evie
Really great with a dursley fanfic :-).
I think you've really captured the souls and personality of them.
Just two misstakes, they have elevators at the ministry(so Hestia and Dedalus probably knew what it was) and Dudley knew dumbledore( he visited in book six)
update soon, this fic is really good.
srry for poor spelling, I'm not english.
Author's Response: Hi John, Thanks! I wrote that under the assumption that the elevators at the ministry were more \"magical\" and you didn\'t need to press a button to get them to come. I didn\'t think Dudley would remember Dumbledore by name a year later either. Your spelling is fine, by the way! ~Kristen : )
Ok even though I love this story very much
I kind of get annoyd by the fact that Dedalus know so litle about the muggle world. I mean even if he don't know any muggles he would have been out in the muggleworld sometime.
Besides that this is very good and I like the fact that Dudley don't know if he shuld like or dislike wizards.
If you have done any other hp fanfics for other sites I'd very much like to know.
Oh and the Chudley Cannon's wouldn't have a chance even if Krum was their seeker.
Sorry for poor spelling and grammar.
But I'm not English
Author's Response: Thanks for the Review! I agree about the Chudley Cannons thing (but Dedalus doesn\'t!) And this is my first fanfic, but I\'m happy to know you were interested in others!
Wow this story is great. Going right to my favoriets list.
Since I started to read this today I will do a review on whole story.
This, is like children and grandchildren to old nazis in Germany. They propbably also have to take quite much crap because of what their family did.
Oh, naming the toad Dolores was true genius.
A litle canon error though, The boy named Creevy I guess have to be the son of Dennis Creevy. But he wasn't in the same year as Ginny and Luna.
I just hope Scourpius new letter reach the malfoys before they send their letters.
Ok update soon please
Author's Response: Eek! You\'re right. I\'ll add that to the list of things to fix when I get a chance. For now, I\'ll try to plough on ahead. Thanks for the review! :)
Hi Manu! :)
It was about time this got accepted. I just love the poetic kind of way that you write in.
Even though we don't see much of it in the prologue, I think you're really good at describing small detatails.
And yes choclate frogs are very tasteful.
I know I'm bad at reviews. Sorry Manu. I'd just wanna say keep the good work up.
Since I've already read the next part, I already knows that it's good too.
(: Johan ;)
Author's Response: I am sooo glad to see a DD pop up here, Jev XD. Ah yeah, you know what\'s coming, and thanks for reviewing, fellow DD. The DL is infinitely pleased. LOL. *hugs*
Author's Response: EDIT: I meant LEL, I swear!!!! *hides face* IT WAS A TYPO!!
ROTFL, That was so funny. You should write more humor.
Neville seem to have discovered the great joy of streaking.
Keep up the good work.(I know you will.)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As a matter of fact, I do have another humor story planned, but it\'s a bit far down on the priority list at the moment. Still, be on the lookout because you never know when a short story is just going to pop out in the middle of something else.\r\n\r\nThanks again for the review! Now, I must go for my daily nude run around the neighborhood.
Hi Steph! This was a wonderful story.
I especially liked the Alice POV, it was really deep and well described. The story was very touching, when I read Alice’s memory I couldn’t help, but to feel disgust and sad, like it was something that had really happened. The way you wrote Bellatrix, was pure brilliance. You manage to keep her perfectly IC and really show us why people think of her as the most evil of the dark Lord’s servants. I haven’t been as good as you and read all the submissions, unfortunately, but I really think this have a big chance to win.
I can’t find anything that I don’t like about this story. (Maybe the fact that Neville also named his daughter after his parent, but that is only a matter of taste.)
Good luck ;)
Author's Response: Thanks Johan! Great to have your opinion, especially since I think your story is great too! The \'Claws are rocking the Challenge so far. Oh, and about the name thing, I agree. You see, I would never personally name a kid after a parent. But Neville seemed the kind of guy who would do that. Thanks again! ~Fauna
This story wasn't about what I thought it was about when I clicked the banner. But I liked it anyway. Great work Helen. I'll be coming back for more.
Author's Response: Yeah I found it hard to make a banner for this story. I'm glad you liked it anyway! Thanks for the nice review.
James as you know I really like what you did with your prombt, and it's a very cute story. I know you said you liked this pairing so you should definatly write more about them.
I was a bit confused bout where the Dementors came from and why they attacked the wedding. That could have been more explained I think.
Really enjoyed reading this again and I'm glad you got it accepted.
Author's Response: The only problem to the reason as to why the Dementors attacked is that I had a short amount of time to write this and I couldn't think of anything.