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Ashes by coppercurls
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Spring Challenge #4, by coppercurls of Hufflepuff house.

“There is one who has failed me, and in doing so he has betrayed us all. He is a traitor and he deserves to die.”

“Tell me but who and I will carry it out willingly, master,” he said, excitement creeping into his voice. “If he has betrayed you he has betrayed us all and is not worthy of life.”

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2743 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
04/17/06 Updated: 04/19/06

Reviewer: Mizu No Fukushuu Signed
Date: 05/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Ashes

Very nice. I lked the ending. But, in the letter from Hermione you used 'currant' instead of 'current'. Ja, that's it.

Author's Response: Whoops, I should go fix that, thanks so much for pointing int out. Anyway, I\'m glad that (other than the my typo) you liked the story!


Summary: Harry is growing up and into his own. With new friends and old by his side, he battles against the dark forces, and embarks on a mission to know the power the Dark Lord knows not. Meet new characters and creatures and wander down new twists in this alternative version of Harry's sixth year at Hogwarts.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 103008 Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes
08/22/06 Updated: 10/22/06

Reviewer: Mizu No Fukushuu Signed
Date: 05/13/07 Title: Chapter 5: Secrets

Yeah, umm for this line:
'''Important business to intend to,” said Moody gruffly.' the word 'intend' should probably be 'tend'. Ja, that's it.

Author's Response: Actually, it\'s meant to be \'attend\'.

Reviewer: Mizu No Fukushuu Signed
Date: 05/13/07 Title: Chapter 9: Grounded

Err... yeah, me again. 'Nonexistent' instead of 'nonexistant', a few lines from the bottom.

Author's Response: While I do appreciate a good spell check now and again, I would appreciate a bit more meat to your reviews. What did you like, or didn\'t you like? What struck you? What sounded off?

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