So, when are you going to finish this, already?
This is fantastic! I'm waiting anxiously for your next installment (now I know how kids felt in the '30s and '40s waiting for the next installment of Buck Rodgers or somesuch)! I really like the way this is going, and what you had Dudley see, especially. Your characters are developing nicely, and I think the JK would appreciate seeing your work. That said, hurry up and update already! : )
Author's Response: thanks for the review! sorry it took so long, but chapter 8 is in the queue!
Neville Longbottom is about to be measured for his first set of Hogwarts' robes when Gregory Goyle's father makes the mistake of insulting him. And in front of his grandmother, too ...
NOTE: Contains one (mild) sexual reference only.
Wonderful! Well thought out, and you have the characters perfectly portrayed. Thank you!