So, when are you going to finish this, already?
This is fantastic! I'm waiting anxiously for your next installment (now I know how kids felt in the '30s and '40s waiting for the next installment of Buck Rodgers or somesuch)! I really like the way this is going, and what you had Dudley see, especially. Your characters are developing nicely, and I think the JK would appreciate seeing your work. That said, hurry up and update already! : )
Author's Response: thanks for the review! sorry it took so long, but chapter 8 is in the queue!