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"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/16/07 Title: Chapter 60: Moving On

What was your favorite quote in L/J: Their Story of Love? (GO DIGGING!)

“James, let me go. You too Sirius. I want to kill her. You stupid fourth year. Your hair is ugly and I heard you’re a slut!!!” Halle yelled down the hall.

Who was your favorite JKR created character? (ex. Sirius, Lily, James, Remus)

Who was your favorite OC? (ex. Katy, Halle)
Katy...I loved her feisty attitude!

Which villain did you hate the most? (ex. Venus, Cole, Voldemort, Peter?)

What was your favorite part and/or chapter in this fic? (GO DIGGING!)
Chapter 42: Gossip...lots of emotions!

What do you wish to see in the next fic?
Lily and James getting married

Who was your favorite couple?

Is there anything you didn’t like story-related?
nope [= It was a great story, my favorite (followed really closely with Potter's Charm).


Too Far Gone by Gemmika
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 1174]

Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations

Word count: 58398 Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
11/13/04 Updated: 01/27/05

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 5: Lily's Pain

Rape is horrible, but I can definitely see why you wrote it. This isn't the first time I've read this story (it is since you edited it), and I think people should realize that even if they don't see how it is important now, it is SO important later. Your story wouldn't make sense unless something like that happened. I think you wrote about it as good as anyone...not too much detail, but enough. (Sorry for the long review...all the people complaining about this chapter were really getting to me!)

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 24: Changes

Amazing story, I've read it twice. The last two lines really sum up everything. You have true talent, you should be really proud to have touched so many readers (including yours truly)!



All's fair in love and war

Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 93408 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
11/18/04 Updated: 04/26/05

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 50: Good Riddance

1) Who was your favorite JKR created character in this fic? (ex. James, Lily, Sirius, Remus..etc.)
Sirius. Definitely Sirius.

2) Who was your favorite OC? (ex. Addison, Maimee, Mac?)
I think Addison was the best. You really made her come to life.

3) What was your favorite chapter?
41. Naked

4) What was your favorite quote from this story? (GO DIGGING PEOPLE!)
“Why don’t you go and find him, Lily. Go find Voldemort. Prove yourself worthy. I guarantee you won’t escape alive. Not many have. You wanted to fight him alone? You would have died. I couldn’t let that happen,” James said.

5) Who was your favorite couple? (L/J, S/A, R/M)

6) Anything you’d like to see in the prequel?
More stupid Sirius

7) Is there anything you didn’t like story related?
Um, not really!

8) What was the craziest thing Sirius did in this fic?
Three words: Jumping Jack Jamboree!

9) Have you read my other stories? If not, do go read them.
Yup, all of them. You're a great author! There's a really good reason you are in The Tens.


Summary: Voldemort is after Harry Potter, a boy "...born to those who thrice defied him...". But ever wonder what Lily and James did to defy him thus? This is a story about passion, both love and hatred. Follow James and Lily through their 7th year as they unite as Head Boy and Girl, ultimatly fall in love, and deal with the rising Dark Forces and the feared Dark Lord. Final chapter up!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 27559 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
11/20/04 Updated: 12/14/04

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 10/22/07 Title: Chapter 2: Needing to Talk

I know this fic is already finished but anyways...
I think that you write really well...your descriptions are amazing! I can't wait to read Chapter 3...


Summary: After an exciting night, Lily returns to the Heads Dorm for a night of remembrance. There is an important note for all my readers in my Author's Page!!

James laughed heartily. "Oh Lils..."

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 13013 Chapters: 11 Completed: No
02/26/05 Updated: 01/01/06

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 11/01/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ The Memories Continue

Aww its so sweet! I love it so far! (I know the story is done already, but I'll review anyway!) You do have a few grammar errors though..."to" instead of "too" and little things...but still a great story so far!


Penname: callmehermione
Originally for a challenge...

"It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all."
As her husband battles Voldemort, a concerned mother tells her young son the story of her relationship with his father. She hopes that he'll understand, someday, her story, which she tells him while talking to him for the last time.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1656 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
02/23/06 Updated: 02/23/06

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A great sad they had to die! I really loved the ending "The door opened." Sad, but unmistakably true. I loved it!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed the last line. Thank you for reading!


My Deliverance by TwinSuns
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 426]

Summary: Past Featured StoryVoldemort's rising reign of terror, NEWTs, death attempts, a Headship, a tangled affair with James Potter, hilarity, grief, love, secrecy, maddness... it's almost hard to believe that I've survived to graduate. I am Lily Evans, and this is my 7th year.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 93594 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
07/09/06 Updated: 10/29/09

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 01/02/08 Title: Chapter 13: Interlude VI

Wow. You have such talent as a writer! The scenery you depict and the vocabulary you use in the story are amazing. Update soon!


The Wedding Ring by KASK
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 75]

Summary: Lily and James Potter were always happy and in love. In a way, they never had to try to make it work. But, going through a rough time, their relationship is pushed to its limits.

Written for the February One-Shot Challenge by Kask of Slytherin.

Winner of the February One-Shot Challenge.
Winner of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Canon Romance.
Thank you everyone :)

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4645 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
02/22/07 Updated: 02/23/07

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 11/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Ring

That was definitely one of the best James/Lily fics I've ever read! I can definitely see why it won! Congrats

Author's Response: Thank you! I can\'t believe it won! (:


I Love You This Much by MagEd
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 162]

Summary: This is the story of a boy and a girl. And a boy. This is the story of love returned and unreturned, of friendship gone dry, and of the things people will do for love. This is the story of James Potter and Lily Evans and Severus Snape. *two-shot*

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14077 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
08/06/07 Updated: 09/02/07

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was amazing. Oh god, what fluff! But I loved it. Good L/J stories seem to be getting harder to find...I agree with what someone else called a shipper war between Lily/Snape and Lily/James. You wrote this really really showed everyone how it is supposed to be!

Author's Response: I agree that it\'s hard to find good L/J, and I\'m glad you think of mine as one of them! Thanks for the review!


Stupid Parties by Hansolohpfrk
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 53]

Summary: Stupid parties. At least, that’s what Lily Evans thought. After being kicked out of her own dorm, and having to find a suitable place to sleep, she’s fed up. Now, to make her night worse, if she wants a place to stay the night, she has to share a bed with James Potter. Oh joy.


Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 1368 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
08/19/07 Updated: 09/01/07

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Stupid Parties

So cute! I liked it.


Teddy by dumbledorefluertwins
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 297]

Summary: It's Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. As an orphan, he has bounced backwards and forwards between his grandmother and his godfather. Follow him on a journey where he discovers the values of friendship, family and love, along with fighting the prejudices against his father, and getting through Defense Against the Dark Arts, with a teacher who just seems to hate him for no reason...

*DH spoilers, obviously*

NOTE: I am sorry, but I have left this site, due to lack of time and personal issues concerning RL and the site. This story is discontinued here, but may well be posted elsewhere in the future.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 22111 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
09/09/07 Updated: 11/03/08

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 11/21/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Sorting Ceremony

I love this story, I really do. Update soon! I love it when they talk about Harry. You're a great writer!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 12/18/07 Title: Chapter 5: Professor Dermot

Professor Dermot...not sure what to think of him! Reminds me a bit of Umbridge, ha! You're doing a great job with this story, update soon!

Author's Response: No, he\'s a bit more scary than Umbridge... well, I\'m not sure, but he\'s a different type of scary. ;)

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 10/20/07 Title: Chapter 3: The Hogwarts Express

I love this story! You write it very well from little Teddy's perspective. I'm so excited for the next chapter! (Hi, Kevin!)

Author's Response: Kevin: Hello! Thank you for writing on me! :D Evie: Thanks for reviewing, glad you like the story! ~Evie

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/25/07 Title: Chapter 2: With Love, Hugs and Warnings.

Definitely interesting...I like it! I can't wait to see where it goes!


Diatribe by Lily of the US
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: In the dictionary, “diatribe” is defined as “a bitter, abusive attack or criticism.” In other words, a sharp blow. And living around self-centred James Potter brings one blow after another. Unfortunately for Lily Evans, it’s his annoying, egotistical attitude that she finds most attractive.

Rated 6th-7th years for language and some sexuality.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 2052 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
12/20/07 Updated: 12/31/07

Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Hate How I Love You

I really like this story! I was laughing through most of it. Write more! Update soon! I'm so excited for future chapters.

Author's Response: *sighs* Unfortunately, the humor isn\'t mine... most of it comes from my friends at school. I\'m so unoriginal that I have to steal it. ;-] But thanks! I\'ll try to update soon! ~megan~

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