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05/05/07




Padfoot and Potions: finished...review review review!!!!

Stay Beautiful: oneshot is up. Review!

Nobody's Home: songfic to Avril Lavigne's song Nobody's Home. Review please!

Must Be: Chapters 1-4 are in. Chapter 5 is in the queue...keep on reviewing guys!


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Too Far Gone by Gemmika

Rated: Professors • 1176 Reviews
Summary: *How far would you go for love?* "If you touch her again, I'll kill you." "Go ahead for I'll come to her again and again." *Is it worth it?* "James leave her alone, she's no good for you." "Don't say a word against Lily!" *Will it last?* "It's forever, I've known it sice the day I met you." "Forever is a long time." "Not if you love someone..." I am finally re-editing this story, please take a look and see all the new stuff!
Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 5: Lily's Pain

Rape is horrible, but I can definitely see why you wrote it. This isn't the first time I've read this story (it is since you edited it), and I think people should realize that even if they don't see how it is important now, it is SO important later. Your story wouldn't make sense unless something like that happened. I think you wrote about it as good as anyone...not too much detail, but enough. (Sorry for the long review...all the people complaining about this chapter were really getting to me!)



Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 24: Changes

Amazing story, I've read it twice. The last two lines really sum up everything. You have true talent, you should be really proud to have touched so many readers (including yours truly)!



Who Thrice Defies by TwinSuns

Rated:152 Reviews
Summary: Voldemort is after Harry Potter, a boy "...born to those who thrice defied him...". But ever wonder what Lily and James did to defy him thus? This is a story about passion, both love and hatred. Follow James and Lily through their 7th year as they unite as Head Boy and Girl, ultimatly fall in love, and deal with the rising Dark Forces and the feared Dark Lord. Final chapter up!
Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 10/22/07 Title: Chapter 2: Needing to Talk

I know this fic is already finished but anyways...
I think that you write really well...your descriptions are amazing! I can't wait to read Chapter 3...



303 Lilies and 1 White Rose by CassandraTrelawney

Rated:299 Reviews
Summary: After an exciting night, Lily returns to the Heads Dorm for a night of remembrance. There is an important note for all my readers in my Author's Page!!

James laughed heartily. "Oh Lils..."



Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 11/01/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ The Memories Continue

Aww its so sweet! I love it so far! (I know the story is done already, but I'll review anyway!) You do have a few grammar errors though..."to" instead of "too" and little things...but still a great story so far!



Apology of a Completed Soul by callmehermione

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 33 Reviews
Summary:
Penname: callmehermione
House:Ravenclaw
Originally for a challenge...
"It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all."
-Tennyson
*~*
As her husband battles Voldemort, a concerned mother tells her young son the story of her relationship with his father. She hopes that he'll understand, someday, her story, which she tells him while talking to him for the last time.
Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A great story...so sad they had to die! I really loved the ending "The door opened." Sad, but unmistakably true. I loved it!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed the last line. Thank you for reading!



My Deliverance by TwinSuns

Rated: Professors • 426 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Voldemort's rising reign of terror, NEWTs, death attempts, a Headship, a tangled affair with James Potter, hilarity, grief, love, secrecy, maddness... it's almost hard to believe that I've survived to graduate. I am Lily Evans, and this is my 7th year.
Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 01/02/08 Title: Chapter 13: Interlude VI

Wow. You have such talent as a writer! The scenery you depict and the vocabulary you use in the story are amazing. Update soon!



The Wedding Ring by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 75 Reviews
Summary: Lily and James Potter were always happy and in love. In a way, they never had to try to make it work. But, going through a rough time, their relationship is pushed to its limits.



Written for the February One-Shot Challenge by Kask of Slytherin.


Winner of the February One-Shot Challenge.
Winner of the 2007 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Canon Romance.
Thank you everyone :)



Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 11/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Wedding Ring

That was definitely one of the best James/Lily fics I've ever read! I can definitely see why it won! Congrats

Author's Response: Thank you! I can\'t believe it won! (:



I Love You This Much by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 162 Reviews
Summary: This is the story of a boy and a girl. And a boy. This is the story of love returned and unreturned, of friendship gone dry, and of the things people will do for love. This is the story of James Potter and Lily Evans and Severus Snape. *two-shot*
Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was amazing. Oh god, what fluff! But I loved it. Good L/J stories seem to be getting harder to find...I agree with what someone else called a shipper war between Lily/Snape and Lily/James. You wrote this really well...you really showed everyone how it is supposed to be!

Author's Response: I agree that it\'s hard to find good L/J, and I\'m glad you think of mine as one of them! Thanks for the review!



Stupid Parties by Hansolohpfrk

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 53 Reviews
Summary: Stupid parties. At least, that’s what Lily Evans thought. After being kicked out of her own dorm, and having to find a suitable place to sleep, she’s fed up. Now, to make her night worse, if she wants a place to stay the night, she has to share a bed with James Potter. Oh joy.



One-shot
Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Stupid Parties

So cute! I liked it.



Teddy by dumbledorefluertwins

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 297 Reviews
Summary: It's Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. As an orphan, he has bounced backwards and forwards between his grandmother and his godfather. Follow him on a journey where he discovers the values of friendship, family and love, along with fighting the prejudices against his father, and getting through Defense Against the Dark Arts, with a teacher who just seems to hate him for no reason...




*DH spoilers, obviously*

NOTE: I am sorry, but I have left this site, due to lack of time and personal issues concerning RL and the site. This story is discontinued here, but may well be posted elsewhere in the future.
Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 11/21/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Sorting Ceremony

I love this story, I really do. Update soon! I love it when they talk about Harry. You're a great writer!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)



Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 12/18/07 Title: Chapter 5: Professor Dermot

Professor Dermot...not sure what to think of him! Reminds me a bit of Umbridge, ha! You're doing a great job with this story, update soon!

Author's Response: No, he\'s a bit more scary than Umbridge... well, I\'m not sure, but he\'s a different type of scary. ;)



Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 10/20/07 Title: Chapter 3: The Hogwarts Express

I love this story! You write it very well from little Teddy's perspective. I'm so excited for the next chapter! (Hi, Kevin!)

Author's Response: Kevin: Hello! Thank you for writing on me! :D Evie: Thanks for reviewing, glad you like the story! ~Evie



Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 09/25/07 Title: Chapter 2: With Love, Hugs and Warnings.

Definitely interesting...I like it! I can't wait to see where it goes!



Diatribe by Lily of the US

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 20 Reviews
Summary: In the dictionary, “diatribe” is defined as “a bitter, abusive attack or criticism.” In other words, a sharp blow. And living around self-centred James Potter brings one blow after another. Unfortunately for Lily Evans, it’s his annoying, egotistical attitude that she finds most attractive.

Rated 6th-7th years for language and some sexuality.
Reviewer: Privet Desperation Signed
Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Hate How I Love You

I really like this story! I was laughing through most of it. Write more! Update soon! I'm so excited for future chapters.

Author's Response: *sighs* Unfortunately, the humor isn\'t mine... most of it comes from my friends at school. I\'m so unoriginal that I have to steal it. ;-] But thanks! I\'ll try to update soon! ~megan~