Penname: fawkeshermione221 [Contact]
Real name: Vivian Tompkins
Member Since: 05/05/07
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So I'm finally filling in this bio - it's only taken me about a year... :P :)

Among my favorites are Harry Potter, poetry, writing, anything equine (that is, having to do with horses), mac and cheese, books, music, the violin, the Ron/Hermione ship (along with Harry/Ginny and Lily/James), rainy days, and chocolate. I got hooked on HP when I stole the first book out of my brother's room when I was 5 years old. I have too many favorite characters to count. I found MNFF while clicking around Mugglenet one day and have been addicted ever since.

When God gave out brains, I thought he said trains, so I asked for a slow, small one :)



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Emerald Green by polka spots
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 67]

Summary: A series of fluffy and completely romantic one shots about that particular romantic moment in 70s Hogwarts... *Completed as soon as part 4 is posted!*

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7318 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/08/05 Updated: 01/17/05


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Snapshots

I think that is my favorite line ever... "The chances of me going out with you are about as great as Sirius being sent to Azkaban for helping Voldemort.” :)
Great job, I'm off to read the next couple of chapters!

 
Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: The Battle With Hate

Awww...so cute! Really great job, especially the ending.

 

A Complete Life by Dan_D_Lion
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 59]

Summary: ~One shot~
On the night of December, a young lady wakes up to a strange feeling. Having the house to herself, she finds out some big news that will surely change her life. She's holding a life within her.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1091 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/08/05 Updated: 10/25/05


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Complete Life

Ha! This was really sweet, and it made me laugh alot, too. Great job! This is one of my favorite fan fics. I especially loved the ending. Keep writing!

 

A Budding Lily by marrianna
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Lily begins to worry about her sanity when she realizes that she might have feelings for James Potter.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 878 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/16/05 Updated: 10/16/05


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 05/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Budding Lily

Very good story! I especially like the line, "Ugh. Boys were so complicated." Loved it!

 
Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 05/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Budding Lily

Very good story! I especially like the line, "Ugh. Boys were so complicated." Loved it!

 

Summary: Consumed by her thoughts, Lily pours them out to a friend, only to find the wrong person hear them. Or is it the right one? One-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1027 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/05/05 Updated: 02/26/06


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 05/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Pigeon and the Phoenix

WOW! Spectacular! I didn't really understand the beginning, but I loved the part when Lily was admitting her fears and feelings. I alos loved the whole pigeon/pheonix thing. Great job!!!

 

Make It Right by LiliacFleur
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 67]

Summary: What will it take to open Lily’s eyes and show her that James Potter is no longer the cocky, annoying little boy she sees him as, and make it right? A little trouble with Professor McGonagall, a detention and a list, it seems.
When Lily is forced to write a list of the positive attributes of James Potter, she finds her task less difficult and much more enlightening than she could ever have thought.

A one-shot fic that somehow managed to make itself into a two-part fic, featuring one of the Potterverse’s most beloved couples.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4989 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/23/06 Updated: 04/22/06


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Detentions Can Be Interesting

Wow! This has got to be one of the best Lily/James fics I've ever read. It was really original, and I loved what they had to do for detention. James really sounded like James, and the same for Lily and Professor McGonagall. It was well written, it made me laugh, and I just loved the entire thing. Keep writing.

 

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat does Lord Voldemort do in his spare time? Well, that's an excellent question. Who would have known that the Dark Lord has a blog? (He also has a loyal following of readers, most of whom are Death Eaters and who post their comments.) Voldemort dispenses advice on everything from murder methods to germ protection to Power Rangers to shoes, and gives an account of the life of an evil overlord. But is he posting too much personal information online? And will Harry read it and find out more about the Dark Lord than Voldemort ever intended? Read and see.


WARNING: Extremely OOC behaviour from almost all.


RUNNER-UP in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Humour fic! Also nominated like 21 times, because apparently my readers are as insane as I am!



Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 12002 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/23/06 Updated: 12/04/06


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 07/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Don't Try This At Home

This fic was hilarious to the point where I was laughing so hard my brother came over to see what I was reading. Not only was it hilarious, it was creative and (very) unique.
I was reading some of the reviews below and saw that you said it was, and I quote, "a stupid story" :o But I don't think it's stupid! Ridiculous, maybe, but in a good way. :)
I loved how you included so many random pop-culture references. I adore Pirates of the Caribbean, The Princess Bride, and Monty Python especially (What is the air speed velocity of an unladen swallow?)
Also, Bellatrix's comments made me laugh out loud!!!!111!!!!11?!!!
If you get the chance, could you tell Smolderin' Volders from me that I really quite enjoyed his blog? Thanks!
~Vivian

Author's Response: Oh, wow! I am so pleeezed that you like it! And yes, I think it's stupid, but stupid in a 'delightfully, entertainingly stupid' kind of way. Then again, I DID write it my freshman year, so I'm glad that someone other than me thinks it's funny! And it's great that I'm not the only human being in the world who likes POTC, Princess Bride, and Monty Python!

Voldemort says that he feels unclean and dishonoured that anyone whose username contains the names of both the mascot of the Order of the Phoenix and Harry Potter's Mudblood sidekick would read his blog, and he's going to go scrub himself in Lysol. That's his way of saying 'thanks!'

 

I'd Give You the Moon by Padfoot101
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: This is a story that takes you from the end of their seventh year to the fateful day that changed the wizarding world.

this is my first fic ever, so reviews on what i did right and wrong would be much appreciated!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 898 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/07 Updated: 01/21/07


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 05/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

...*sniff*...still crying...I love this story. Wow. I can't even think of anything to improve on.
I'm adding it to my favorites right now.

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 05/23/07 Title: None

Keep writing please!!!! I loved it.

Author's Response: I\'ve got eleven chapters written so far and saved on to my computer, it\'s only the editing and validating part that keeps me from posting all of what I have so far up here.

 

Love-Hate Rants by stareyed_in_LA
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Lily, angry at the immaturity of James Potter, pens a poem to express her frustration towards him. Yet, when she is almost done, she realizes something she almost didn't expect.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 122 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/27/07 Updated: 06/29/07


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Love-Hate Rants

The first part made me laugh, but it went from hate to love kind of quickly.

 
Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Love-Hate Rants

The first part made me laugh, but it went from hate to love kind of quickly.

 

Singularly in his Heart by Prongs92
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Just a poem I wrote about the Boy who Lived. Please read and review.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 226 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/11/07 Updated: 07/14/07


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 07/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Singularly in his Heart

Excellent job! I loved this poem - especially the begining and the last few lines. I also loved the part about Lily. Nice title, too. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The part about Lily is one of my favorites too.

 

Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes by Prongs92
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: A poem I wrote about the famous joke shop founded by Fred and George Weasley. Like every author says, please read and review!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 208 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/17/07 Updated: 07/19/07


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 07/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes

This poem made me laugh! Great job with the rhyming. I think you got every one of their products into this poem. Good job!

Author's Response: Actually, there were a few products I left out like the Patented Daydream Charm, Fever Fudge, and Puking Pastilles. But oh well. I\'m glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

 

Summary: Harry’s PoV, Post- DH

Harry Potter is the happiest man alive. He lives his days in bliss and joy, for he has one thing, just one thing, that completely makes up for and outweighs his Voldemort-driven childhood…


Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 881 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/01/07 Updated: 08/02/07


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Mirror of Erised

I absolutley love this poem, especially the part about Lily - that made me laugh. I really liked reading Harry's thoughts, which were really well written, and seemed like exactly what Harry would have felt and thought about his family. Good job!

Author's Response: AHH! Thank you my first reviewer!! :-). I absolutely loved WRITING this poem, as well, it\'s great to see our Harry finally happy and rejoicng his family, eh? I liked adding the spice to the poem with Harry\'s thoughts, I just think it gave it more of a real feelng. I am ecstatic you liked it, fawkeshermione, thank you very, very much!

 
Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Mirror of Erised

I absolutley love this poem, especially the part about Lily - that made me laugh. I really liked reading Harry's thoughts, which were really well written, and seemed like exactly what Harry would have felt and thought about his family. Good job!

Author's Response: see below :-)

 

My One Regret by slytherins_queen2
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: There's only one thing Lily ever regretted...

No DH Spoilers!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 200 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/02/07 Updated: 08/03/07


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I almost cried when I read this! You did a really great job with this poem. There was only one line that was a little too long ( I didn't get to see your first day at school or embarrass you by beggining to cry), but I actually really liked that line anyways. I can imagine that this is how Lily feels, watching her son grow up without her.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! Yeah, that particular line was shorter, but I guess I added more when I wrote it out on the computer. Lol. Thank you so very much again for the compliments and reading!

 
Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I almost cried when I read this! You did a really great job with this poem. There was only one line that was a little too long ( I didn't get to see your first day at school or embarrass you by beggining to cry), but I actually really liked that line anyways. I can imagine that this is how Lily feels, watching her son grow up without her.

Author's Response: Double Post xPP

 

As I Lie There by ernie_the_leprechaun
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: When we die, it is said that our life flashes before our eyes. What would our falling favourites have seen, as they fell into the icy grip of death?

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1909 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
08/03/07 Updated: 09/04/07


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: James: As I Lie There

Great job! I really loved this poem - even though it did make me incredibly sad - you did a great job writing it, and you did a superb job with ryhming. My favorite part was probably the ending. I loved what you wrote for James' tombstone.
Keep writing! This poem is going on my favorites.

-fawkeshermione

 

In Loving Memory by PadfootBaby
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary: What I hope is an appropriate send-off for the loved ones we lost in Deathly Hallows. Hope you like it.
Nominated for the 2007 Quicksilver Quills!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 282 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/04/07 Updated: 08/06/07


Reviewer: fawkeshermione221 Signed
Date: 08/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: In Loving Memory

Wow. (I'm still trying not to cry). This poem is absolutley amazing. There are so many things I love about it, especially the ending. You really captured the way so many of us felt when we read about a characters death - I had to go back and re-read because I couldn't believe they were dead. I think this is my favorite part:
Because of them,
The end could begin;
Thanks to their love, the
Dark Lord couldn’t win.
That was just really powerful. I thought the entire poem was powerful. I also loved the part about Fred, that was well written. Great job. This poem is going to my favorites.
Keep writing!


Author's Response: The Fred verse was probably the best because his death affected me the most. I just honestly couldn\'t believe Jo had done this to me (the twins were two of my favorite characters). I was just so sad, I knew I had to do something for them - and this was the result. Thank you for the review; I\'m glad you liked it! (even if I did almost make you cry :))

 
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