i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv HarryPotter
dat woz kool, it wasn't dat funny tho, i think da next chapter wil be beta
Author's Response: well ur only on chappie three...keep reading!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i think that it is amazing, i definitely wanna read more! that thing that hermione wan't to tell harry and ron was v. imaginative(in a good way)! i love it and it's only the first chapter!
OMG!! Egg-cellent (lil' easter joke, geddit?) i can sooooooooooooooo relate 2 him! plese rite more sweet storys in futur.
Author's Response: Yeh i might, but I cant really think of anymore sweet/chocolate poem ideas without it getting repetetive.
Claire that was crap (don't worri ppl, I know her so I can insult her) Noway near as good as your usual excellency, I am awaiting a piece of work that is actually decent, or I will refuse to ever read your stuff again. I am evil.
Author's Response: We know you are evil okay? And insane. Mwahhahahaha. And remember, I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!!!!
This si good, I didnt really understand the last line ut that's probs not ure fault, it's becos i'm quite slow. :)
Author's Response: I admire your honesty about the last line. I've never written a sonnet before so I don't expect my first try to be perfect. Thanks for reviewing!
i'm bored so i'm reviewing my own poem, i also feel sorry for myself coz i got no reviews, ples review. thanx
i dont get this, but it is quite good. it is rather weird so ill give it a 4............... no only kidding, it's not that good.
Author's Response: U spaz.