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I'm a 22 year old girl from England. I've got a horse, who lent his name for this and have recently completed a degree in Chemistry at university.

I first read the Philosopher's Stone about 4 years ago, and I read books 2 and 3 on my birthday about 3 weeks later. I read all the remaining books on the day they came out.

So far, I've written, or in the process of writing, five fics on here - 2 oneshots, 1 shorter fic and 2 longer fics. Please let me know your opinions on them, I read every comment I get and add a response. If you've got any questions/suggestions/plot ideas etc. feel free to contact me and I'll do my best to answer asap.

Also, I do know a little Latin so if anyone wants a bit of a hand with translating spells from English into Latin, feel free to email me and I'll do my best to help. Also, I'm more than happy to beta read stories, if anyone wants me to - just email me and I'll write back as soon as I can.

Thanks a lot to all you guys who have taken the time to review my stories - it is very much appreciated.

All I say to my fellow fic writers and friends though is:

Draco Dormiens Nunquam Titillandus.


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Practically Brothers by ReeraTheRed

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: After the events in Order of the Phoenix, Lupin and Snape talk, and a tentative friendship begins. Hurt/comfort, but not slash.
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 04/13/05 Title: Chapter 4: Status Quo

Brilliant. I loved it. Well done.


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 05/22/05 Title: None

I am seriously impressed with this story - it's easily one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Fantastic and I hope that you don't mean the story's completed and there's more coming...

The Necromancer's Curse by Garden Gnome

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 50 Reviews
Summary: For the first time in centuries, a necromancer - a practician death magic - has applied for and been accepted to Hogwarts. His decision is not popular and bad things begin happening... Some Chapters rated 'R' for nudity and sexual content FINAL CHAPTER SUBMITTED

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 04/26/05 Title: Chapter 8: Dark Clues

Very good - I can't wait to see what happens. I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 04/09/05 Title: None

Fantastic! It's really nice to see a different style of writing. I hope the second chapter gets okayed by the mods! :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. It's really great that you review my stuff. Yeah, I hope the 2nd Chapter gets okayed, too.

Great Plans by LariLee

Rated:217 Reviews
Summary: During a Seventh Year Potions class, Severus Snape begins thinking on and making plans for his future.
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/21/05 Title: Chapter 8: The Waiting Is Over

I've just read all the chapters in one go and I love your style of writing. You make everything believable without rubbing it in the readers face. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Stormy! I am so happy to hear it you enjoyed it!

Harry Potter and the Curse of the Damned by Melindaleo

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 659 Reviews
Summary: Seventh year sequel to Power of Emotion. Harry is recovering from his captivity, but heís hiding how much itís effecting him. With his powers increasing, and Voldemort now aware of the prophecy, can Harry find the secret to destroying him before Voldemort learns of the existence of these ancient texts? Would this be HP fanfiction if it were that easy?
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/11/05 Title: Chapter 26: The Winds of Change

You have an unbelievable talent for writing - I will honestly say that brought me to tears. You manage to write everytning in such a peaceful, calm tone that made it all seem personal to the reader. I know other writers often steer clear of Dumbledore dying but you held onto the atmsphere brilliantly. Well done; undisputedly 10.

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/14/05 Title: Chapter 29: Curse of the Damned

What's with the deep breath?! That was amazing! JK is going to have her work cut out to do better than that - it was absolutely stunning! Without wanting to sound morbid, I like the way everyone was hurt - purely because that is what would happen in a real battle. You're definitely on a level with JKR herself, well done and a 10 isn't high enough to give this story justice.

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/13/05 Title: Chapter 28: Back in the Chamber

Absolutely stunning - I really hope you can update the last chapters quickly!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 04/27/05 Title: None

Great job so far - I can't wait to see what comes next. My only comment though, and it is only minor, is that you jump between tenses a bit, eg: "My eyes met Ginny's again. I can feel her reaching deep inside me..." You jumped from the past to the present there. As I said before, it is an incredibly minor error so please don't let it spoil your future chapters; I know I'm being really picky!. Writing in the 1st person is damn near impossible and you're doing a great job. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Stormy, for the review! And, thank you for pointing out the area where you thought I switched between tenses. Trust me, as I proof read this chapter (and the others) before I submitted it, I caught myself doing it a few times. I guess I didnít manage to get them all though. Thanks for pointing it out. Yes, I think writing in first person is a little harder than third person. But, itís something that can set my story apart from some of the others out there, so I thought I would give it a try. Thanks for leaving my review.

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 05/05/05 Title: None

You're going from strength to strength with this fic. Really, really well done - you've manged to get all the characters to appear human, rather than superheros. I can't wait for the next chapter - You've got me hooked on this fic. I haven't read another 1st person fic which is a patch on this one, and well done for sorting out the tenses. I really hope you can update soon, ~ Stormy

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Stormy. Iím really happy to hear you like it so much. Iíve just submitted an update. Itís floating around in the queue someplace. So, hopefully in the next couple of days there will be a new chapter to write. Thanks again for staying with this fic!

Innocent Until Proven Guilty by DragonGirl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 6 Reviews
Summary: For one glorious minute, Sirius thought he was in his old flat. But reality came rushing back to him. A bitter cold caught in his chest and horrible thoughts flickered across his mind. A strangled cry escaped the man's lips. He gripped his dirty, mangled hair and shuddered violently. This is my first fanfic. Sorry it's so short. There will be more, I promise. Please R&R! Hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 04/07/05 Title: Chapter 1: Innocent Until Proven Guilty

Well done - one of the best sirius fics I've ever read! Keep up the good work! Looking forward to your next fic. :) PS:It's spelt Marauder :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will keep up the good work, but my next story is having some problems. I can't find time to write! I've got soccer and schoolwork! Life is difficult, but I'll keep working on. Thanks for the correction (I still can't spell)!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 05/19/05 Title: None

Hi! I've just started reading your story and I'm really impressed! You've managed to get a really original slant on the story; I'm not usually in to marauder fics but this one's excellent! Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can please!

Ps: I could be your beta if you want - you're more than welcome to read my fics if you want to know what my writing's like. Feel free to email me if you're interested... :)

Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm glad that I've swayed you on Marauder fics, because they can be really great when they are true to JKR ( I like to think that mine is!) But wait....there is more to come....this will evolve into Harry's 7th year. Chapter 4 in queue, so hopefully it wont be too long now.....although it's been in there 13 days so far which is rather unnatural. Thankyou for offering to be my Beta, but I already have an excellent one. Prongs Proncess Lexi xxxxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: None

YAY! AT LAST!!! Well done for getting it accepted - lol, took long enough didn't it... Good luck with getting chappie 5 up, I thought it was fantastic when I beta'd it. Well done again, and keep the chappies coming!

Author's Response: Thanlkyou honey; and for all your help. You were excellent.

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/08/05 Title: None

hiya! I know you said that you weren't particularly fond of this chapter but I like it - especially because Sirius chose his friends over the older Lupin. You've done a great job so far and well done for getting the chapter accepted! Lol, at least it wasn't as difficult to get up as chapter 4 :P Once again, well done and chapter 6 is fantastic!

Author's Response: Thankyou honey! Yay and thankyou for being a SUPERB BETA!!!!!!!! My heart goes out.......so to speak. Anyway.....yeah, i really hope that the next one will be accepted straight away, but you and I both know that it's a bit more lengthy. I have sent chappie 8 to you for Betaing, so give it a read! (and a Beta, of course....not that there are too many errors I hope.....). Once again, thankyou! (read email for longer comment)

Scar Tissue by Sirius Intent

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 26 Reviews
Summary: Midway through the summer after the ill-fated journey to the Department of Mysteries, one boy learns that some wounds don't ever heal.
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 04/28/05 Title: Chapter 1: How not to feel

Way to go! A good start; keep it up! Please update soon, it looks like you know exactly where you're going with this fic and I'm looking forward to seeing how it unfolds.

Author's Response: Nice one! Glad you like it. I got sidetracked on another story in the meantime. Its a mammoth one and I'm still unsure as to where its going... Anyway the next chapter for Scar Tissue is submitted..awaiting approval, so you should see it here soon! Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it.

Christmas with Severus Scrooge by Colin Creevey

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 8 Reviews
Summary: Severus=Scroogeī. This is a Scrooge-like tale. Dennis's life is threatened, Harry, Ron and Colin try in vain to convince Snape, but Snape refuses.
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Twas the Night Before Christmas

I like the way you've started this fic, the story itself is very original and certainly could get interesting. Well done! But I have to say there were a few errors in the chapter. You said in your last review you wanted to be told what they were so...

"All they could do is Nurse Dennis, but their efforts were in vein." should be "All they could do was nurse Dennis, but their efforts were in vain."

I also noticed that Snape and Dumbledore particularly seemed OOC. I can't really see Dumbledore saying 'stuff' and I've always seen Snape as the quieter, more threatening type - he's not really likely to start yelling for no real reason. He's more likely to sneer, or threaten quietly...

As a suggestion, you could possibly get a BETA? Anyway, well done so far and I like the story itself so far but it could be improved if the charachters became a little less OOC. You've done well with the Creevy brothers though.

Author's Response: Ah the present tense mistake. Snape might not yell but when it comes to christmas...he can yell, he can scream, he can threaten to kill Dumbledore for all I care. And...oh...another Creevey lover I see? Me too. I dont have much time for BETA but I will if I can and remember. Pardon me for asking, but what does OOC mean. As for the story being original, yeah, its supposed to be like that. Sorry chapter 2 is taking so long, having a bit of trouble getting it through.

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/19/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Twas the Night Before Christmas

OOC means 'Out of Character'. And I'm not a huge Creevy brothers fan but you might change that :) I hope chapter 2 is up soon!

Author's Response: I resubmitted chapter 2. Hopefully, it will be up by tomorrow or the day after if there are no errors. Sometimes, even in my other story, there might be OOC.

Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 08/28/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: James Potter

Good chapter, especially with the reasoning behind why Snape hated christmas. I thought it was still a little OOC at different points and the story could be improved with a little extra detail. I'll definitely check out the next chapter - you've certainly got some great ideas, just pad them out with a little bit more detail.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. They do go a bit OOC don't they? Still, there is slow submission at this time, I don't when the next chapter will come up.


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/11/05 Title: None

Oooh, good cliffy! The person at the end,Snape maybe? The whole 'Potter' thing just sounds like him... Anyway, great start so far and I look forward to what's coming. My only comment is that you did get a little bit carried away with commas at the start of the chapter. Other than that though, well done! *9*

Author's Response: Thank you for ur review!!!Yes, i have a certain thing with commas;) I've submitted the next chapter so it should be up soon!!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: Stormy Signed
Date: 06/01/05 Title: None

I am stunned by this fic - I never usually like the suicide fics but that was brilliant! You captured so well how Harry could feel after defeating Voldemort and the photo Colin took, and the results of it, are spot on with what could happen in the real world. Well done, and I hope you have more fics coming soon!

Author's Response: Wow, that's quite a compliment! I based Colin taking the photo off of all of the private moments that get exploited on the news every day.