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A Black Rose and a White Lily
Update on August 9, '12- I have yet to start writing the fifth chapter. So that'll take some time. Okay, so, let's just admit this fic has been abandoned for now.

A Silent Change
Update on August 9 '12 - Chapter 4 was apparently with my betas. Chapters 5 and 6 were all written but I don't have any of these now. So, again, fic has been abandoned for now.

Eventual Embrace
Update on August 9, '12- A sequel to my other James/Lily one shot: Beneath the Shell. A follow up one shot will be coming whenever. Okay, probably never.

I haven't written Harry Potter fanfiction in an age. I highly doubt I'll be writing any more any time soon and continuing these which I wrote forever ago? Don't think that's happening. Enjoy the one shots though. :)
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Cinderella Was a Redhead by NeLLyRaE
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 67]

Summary: Lily Evans has problems. She sleepwalks, (and always ends up in strange places) she is disorganised, flunking Arithmancy, and, to her dismay, was made Head Girl. There is also the problem of James Potter, who refuses to stop asking her out. Will she ever pull herself together enough to give him a chance?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 12347 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
01/04/08 Updated: 07/20/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 07/30/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow. I love this fic. =D gREat chapter! =]

 

Turning Tables by x_lily_evans_x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 44]

Summary: Lily Evans, Head Girl, has never been reckless. She has been reliable and careful, thinking through everything before making decisions. But when she recklessly takes on a challenge by Amelia Lance to see who can make James Potter fall for her by the Easter holidays, her life goes from orderly to complicated. However, Lily thinks she's got it under control. After all, this is James Potter, the boy who, at least, used to like her and ask her out. Winning this challenge should be child’s play, right?

It's amazing how wrong a girl can be...

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5411 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/04/08 Updated: 06/22/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

absolutely wonderful! can't wait to read the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

absolutely wonderful! can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you want to read the next chapter. Thank you for your review! :D

 

Snape Speed-Dating by Bethywoo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 87]

Summary: After losing a bet, Professor Severus Snape is forced to accompany Professor Filius Flitwick on a speed-dating event. Will he manage to survive the witless witches and the maddening MC? Or will he leaved with more than he bargained for?

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6249 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/04/08 Updated: 07/21/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 05/27/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this made me laugh so hard, i was practically shaking! LMAO. great job! (Y)

Author's Response: LOL! Thanx ;)

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my Godric! I've fallen in love with this fic. I love ALL the sarcastic comments by Snape. You really know what he'd say at what times. Your characterisation is perfect.

“Oh joy. This looks promising,” Snape muttered to himself as a witch with uncontrollably frizzy white hair walked towards him.
You don't know how much this first line cracked me up. =D

“Do you like Pinm1;a Coladas ?”
I'm assuming that it's 'Pina'.

“Too bad. I always liked the dark, greasy type,” the blonde sighed, as she tickled Snape’s chin with her false fingernails.
Ookkay, now that's weird. lol.

“Glad you’re having a good time! I’m off to my date. She’s three-foot five and she is hot, hot, hot!”
LOL. I can well imagine Flitwick saying that. =D

I sirius-ly can't wait for the next chapter. And please, please write longer chapters, yeah? =) Then they'd make me laugh more! lol.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for catching that error! I guess it didn\'t translate from Word. Ah well :)\r\nGlad you\'re enjoying it. And thanks so much for your compliments! Snape is definitely my favorite to write *evilgrin*

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*is laughing loudly* *clapms hand on mouth* siriusly, i need to stop laughing or else everyone will wake up. lmao! H.I.L.L.A.R.I.O.U.S. =D
lOved this one...
“My hero,” said Snape bitingly, sizing up little Flitwick.
tehe. hopefully the queue will start working normally and this will get updated. *adds story to favourtes*

Author's Response: lol. Thanks so much. All of you guys are so great to leave feedback :)

 

Finding Someone New by LilyGinnyWrites92
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 35]

Summary: It's the Marauders' Seventh Year, and Remus, Peter, and Sirius are getting tired of James mooning over Lily. Their solution? Write an anonymous love letter, and leave it a classroom!

I'm sorry, but this fic is going on semi-permanent hiatus. I ran out of ideas

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2307 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/08/08 Updated: 02/12/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/13/08 Title: Chapter 2: Reactions

cool fic. it's a really nice idea. =)

 

Love Is Just Hate With A Smile by jenny b
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary:

‘Love and hate are quite similar when you think about it,’ James said thoughtfully.

‘What do you mean?’ Lily asked.

‘You can’t hate someone for no reason without loving them a little,’ he said.

Lily rolled her eyes. ‘That’s stupid,’ she said.

‘No it’s not. Why do you think guys tease girls they like? Most people use hate to hide the fact that they really love someone.’

Lily didn’t say anything, so James continued. ‘After all, love is really just hate with a smile.’

Lily Evans hated James Potter. She always had, and thought she always would. But people change. Opinions change. Sometimes the line between right and wrong blurs … as well as the line between love and hate.

ON INDEFINITE HIATUS. Check out my bio for more details.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 5759 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/14/08 Updated: 07/21/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Friends and Foes

lovely start. can't wait to read more. =)

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

Fuzzy Elfin Dilemmas by KritchMis
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: “Hell -- Oomph! Ouch. Sorry, Sirius decided it’d be fun to trip me.”

“I did not!”

“Oh don’t deny it Sirius, I saw you too. Hello there! You’re here to read, aren’t you? Isn’t that great Remus? Remus?”

“Wha – Oh yes, lovely… So sorry, love, but what are you talking about?”

“You’d think being a werewolf, you could hear twice as good as the normal wizard.”

“Anna! Keep it down!”

“But why, Remus? Everyone’s going to find out once they read Fuzzy Elfin Dilemmas, and then, why would you care?”

“You three are completely ignoring the company. How rude. Don’t mind them, they’ve got the manners of a teaspoon, I tell you.”

The other three sigh as one at Sirius.

“You’ll really like this story. It’s better than my daddy’s, but shhhh, don’t tell him I said that.”

“It’s about a werewolf community, us four and Time-Turners.”

“That hardly says anything at all, you two!”

“We’re sent on a mission of spying on a community I already knew well. Yes, I am a werewolf –“

“Harmless though, I tell you!”

“Those two have a project through the Department of Mysteries –“

“It’s great fun working there.”

“Nat, enough. We’re supposed to figure out how to finish the Time-Turners. Unofficially of course.”

“We’ve got to go…Happy reading!”

“NAT!”

This is a story written by Mistletoe (Kat) and myself using our OC's (Natalie Carmen and Anna Boothe), Remus and Sirius. These four are an unlikely group for a mission, but that's indeed what happens. Sent on a whirlwind journey by the Order of the Phoenix and uncomfortable with each other, they're a little lost in the forests of Wales. Where exactly do werewolves and Time-Turners come into the mix? It involves mystery and intrigue, some adventure and fears, a smidgen of flirting and quite a bit of silliness.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5132 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
01/21/08 Updated: 02/27/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Fanciful For Floo

great job! oh, and i totally love remus' last dialogue. =D

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Serious for Strawberries

great one! *goes to add the story to her favourites*

Author's Response: Thanks. :] Make sure you check out Kat\'s other stories or mine by clicking on the banners. They\'re just as good. lol.

 

From Inside the Wardrobe by anath
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Sirius Black comes back to his flat to look for a forgotten object and witnesses the most traumatic event in his life: Lily Evans' bridal shower! Oh, did I mention that he witnesses it from inside the wardrobe?

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations

Word count: 2572 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/23/08 Updated: 02/18/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg! i can't stop lauging. hehe. nice! =)

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you find the story amusing.

 

Summary: Andromeda Tonks thought she had finally got her favourite cousin back.
So when he is taken from her once again by the person she least expects, it is enough to break her.

Post-OoTP one-shot.



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 2125 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/05/08 Updated: 02/06/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Black With Her Sanity Intact

i just loved it!

Author's Response: I\'m glad.

 

Always In Red by Weasleyboyfreak
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: We all know that growing up isn't as easy as it always seems. Well, what happens when you mix that with a twisted love life, an overzealous mother, and a group of Marauding boys? That's right, chaos! Follow Roseanna Marie Parker in her adventure in her sixth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry and how she learn more about herself and the world around her. Rio Parker is no average girl, struggling with her strict mother and her urge to rebel. It is bound to be an eventful year at Hogwarts with the four Marauders and their accomplices!

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 4853 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
03/18/08 Updated: 05/12/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Skirts, Manners, and A Night Out With the Boys

Lovely chapter! I can't believe that I never got a chance to read it until now.

Ah... Rio's so damned lucky. :p Mes wantings tos spends somes times withs Sirius toos! *begs* lol. Sorry. *blushes*

Oh, and I don't know how I forgot to mention this in the previous review, but I'll say it now. I love Lummer! He's so sweet. I read all the drabbles you wrote in the birthday challenge thing in the Common room. Lummer was always so sweet! *hugs Lummer* But, you better not make James wait for long.  

Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter. =)

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/16/08 Title: Chapter 1: They Call Me Parker

It's wonderful! Sirius-ly. =D I have to point out some typos though. =)

From the Story Notes. lol. Yeah, I read those carefully too. =p
I would also like to thank my friends, Jen and Jess, for supporting me through his writing process! My story would

not be the same if you three hadn't helped me!

I'm assuming that it's supposed to be 'this'.

Now, from the chapter.
“Bye, Mum;, and yes, I will write you,”
Two punctuation marks? Maybe you can delete any one of them?

The next thing the brunette knew, she as forced into the red cushioned seats of the Hogwarts Express.
Was, is it?

The brunette chirped a short ’goodbye’ before she was forced around the corner.
Check out the inverted comma's, the first one i.e.

“Well…erm…they looked at me like I was a raging Flubberworm,”
It's misspelled, it should be Flobberworm.

No, the name Rio suits you well, but now we just have to get the boys to stop calling you ’Parker’
The same inverted comma thing.

Maybe it would benefit her future and possible love life to let some of her mother’s ’Roseanna’ kick in
Same here.

Okay, so there was a lot of stuff which I had written, but thanks to this absolutely fantastic net connection ^o) the whole thing got lost.=@ It's five thirty in the morning here and I just can't write everything all over again. But, I had to leave a review 'cause this seems as a fantastic story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. =)

 

And You Were There by Mem_Marie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: You’re here. Of course you’re here. No matter what I do, no matter what I say, you are there. Always.

Because there comes a time when we look over our shoulder and - whether we want it or expect it - see the one that will never leave.

[James x Lily]

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1085 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/19/08 Updated: 04/21/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sweet.

One error though:

I look at you and I take in your smart suit that is so completely muggle I am a bit shocked, as well the fact that it looks like you tried to tame your hair.

The 'Muggle' should have a capital M. Otherwise, it was perfect! 

 

A Different Kind of Love by Nymphea
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 58]

Summary: James gives Lily a letter on the last day of sixth year:
I’m going to be perfectly honest with you—I’m not that good with feelings. I usually just ask Remus; he’s pretty good with that sort of thing. But I can’t ask Remus to write this letter for me, so you’re just going to have to bear with me while I set the record straight before the school year ends and I forget how to describe my feelings about things between us. [2000 reads! thanks guys!]

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1136 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/30/08 Updated: 04/21/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind of Love

Wow. That was amazing! Great Job!

Author's Response: thanks!

 

Summary: A companion piece to the Potter's Pentagon trilogy... it's better if you've read the Potter's Pentagon trilogy, but you don't necessarily have to.

It's five years after Emma Weasley and her chums graduated from Hogwarts. Ted and Ivy are married, Haley is working at Madame Puddifoot's while trying desperately to break into show business, Jordan's doing whatever it is he does, and Emma is an Auror trainee working as a guard at the Chudley Cannons' stadium. The Cannons have actually been doing much better lately, due to their new star Beater, Tyrone Thomas. Unfortunately, Tyrone is Emma's ex-boyfriend. OH, THE AWKWARDNESS.

Follow Emma through her awkward adventures told in her usual insane way, as she experiences angst, hilarity, obnoxiously strange people, misadventures involving a deceptively dashing cad, Haley's wedding, the birth of Ted and Ivy's baby, and her own eventual descent into LURRRVE.

Written for the marvellous Vindictus Viridian's Pride and Prejudice NEWTs class on the Fanfiction Beta Boards, based on Jane Austen's fantastic novel, "Pride and Prejudice.".

Nominated in the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Non-Canon Romance Story! And its lovely (haha) heroine, Emma Weasley, received two nominations for Best Female Original Character, while Haley Potter and Ivy Potter each received one! Thanks so much, guys!

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 122124 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/30/08 Updated: 06/04/11


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Me, Me, and Also Meeee

It's absolutely lovely, and flawless. :D One gotta love Emma.

Author's Response: Afifa! I saw your lovely comments on my thread on the forums. I\'m really glad you like this story so far and that you like Emma so far!

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Abandoning Pregnant Wives-- A Fun Lupin Family Tradition

Hillarious! I loved the chapter title, it made me LOL. =D

Emma was sorta mean with Ivy... it's not always a good thing to speak out loud what you think.  I feel sorry for Ivy though.

I loved the whole part. The Patrick scene, the dance part, and especially the summary. It made me laugh like crazy. My mum came up to me to ask whether I was okay or not. Lol.

Oh, and I looove long chapters, and had a lot of fun reading this one. =] 



Author's Response: Thank you so miuch! Yeah, I had to use that title, even though I disregarded DH for everything else... Emma was so mean, and I felt terrible writing it. She does a lot of jerk things. I guess if she didn't put her foot in her mouth every two seconds, she wouldn't be Emma, but still, EESH! Have you ever heard the song "Just The Girl?" The one that starts "She's cold and she's cruel but she knows what she's doin'" or whatever? Because that song always makes me think of Tyrone singing about Emma. I'm so glad you liked this... Chapter Six was rejected, so it may be awhile before this story's updated, but I'll try to fix it!

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/15/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: He Followed Me Home, But I Don't Want To Keep Him

Wow! Another fantastic chapter! =D

“Don’t worry,” chirped Haley, as though reading my mind. “Wolfgang’s adorable, but he’s not my type. He looks like a girl. I like a man who looks more like one.”

I stared her. “Haley, you don’t have a ‘type.’ You like everything with a y-chromosome.”

LOL. This made me laugh so hard, I had to clasp my hand on my mouth! LOl.

“What about that vampire that tried to kill me in the alleyway last year?”

“HE WAS SPARKLY!”

“No, that was your diseased imagination, Haley. Bloodstained, maybe.”

“HE WAS SPARKLY!”

Do I catch a Twilight reference here? =p I still haven't read it though. =O

Still, it’s an undeniable fact that he’s carrying on the proud tradition of socially inept Potter boys.

Poor James, he'd be so disappointed, yeah?

I wonder if Tyrone remembered that his pets were, in fact, toads.

I wondered that too. I mean, really! You don't go on about water temperature and all about toads! =O 

Oh, and the summary was absolutely hilarious! =D



Author's Response: Thanks so much! The funny thing is, I know so many people like Haley, who really do like random boys simply because they're boys and no other reason. That was definitely a Twilight reference-- I strongly dislike Twilight, so I sometimes like to make fun of it, beause my friends and my sister are so obsessed. James might be disappointed with Jordan, but Jonathan (while a bit dreamy and out of it) certainly gets into a sufficient amount of trouble to make James proud!

One reason why I made Tyrone so obsessed with taking care of his toads is because it's part of indirectly showing that he's a really affectionate person! Because later, we see how well he takes care of his sister, but I just wanted to play up that aspect of his character.

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/21/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Werewolves And Wolfgangs Of London

LOL. P&P's summary was hilarious! I love Mr. Darcy though, but it's okay. You can make him as bad as you like. As Emma likes, I mean. lol.
I love this, I sirius-ly do.
I feel cool that I know the outline of the story =p lol.
Oh, and I loved the term, 'facial topography'. LOL. I will use it!! =D lol.
Talk about hyper. Sorry.
Anyways, I LOVED the chapter, =D
You're awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I actually like Mr. Darcy, too. But Emma has to think he\'s a jerk at the beginning of reading the book because she\'s essentially Elizabath. ^_^ I\'m so happy that you liked this!

 
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