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04/26/07




A Black Rose and a White Lily
Update on August 9, '12- I have yet to start writing the fifth chapter. So that'll take some time. Okay, so, let's just admit this fic has been abandoned for now.

A Silent Change
Update on August 9 '12 - Chapter 4 was apparently with my betas. Chapters 5 and 6 were all written but I don't have any of these now. So, again, fic has been abandoned for now.

Eventual Embrace
Update on August 9, '12- A sequel to my other James/Lily one shot: Beneath the Shell. A follow up one shot will be coming whenever. Okay, probably never.

I haven't written Harry Potter fanfiction in an age. I highly doubt I'll be writing any more any time soon and continuing these which I wrote forever ago? Don't think that's happening. Enjoy the one shots though. :)


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The Soul of a Player by Werewolf_sympathiser

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 261 Reviews
Summary: Sirius Black, Marauder, heart throb and good friend, is in his last year at Hogwarts. Follow his journey through friendship, pranks and that special someone. Chapter Thirty One is here at last! I realise I have left this for nearly 3 years, but I am finally back! I am very grateful to the readers who have stuck by me during my extended hiatus. Thanks a lot guys :)
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/13/07 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four

i like this chapter a lot. And the fact that you finished the Qudditch match soon, cause the neverending matches tend to get boring and leads to the reader losing interest. anyways, loved the ending!
try to update soon will you?

Author's Response: Thanks! I will try and post soon :)



Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/28/07 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Eight

omg that was so cool!
update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'ll try :)



Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 10/27/07 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven

good.
and yeah, sorry for the short review but now it aint exactly short, is it? lol. okay, that was lame.
update asap.

Author's Response: Thanks :)



Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 10/14/08 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty

Oooh... finally they're together! =D

Great chapter, though it was a bit too... err... undescriptive? But it was fun anyway. =]



Author's Response: Sorry about that! I really struggle with description :S Glad you liked it anyway :)



An Apple A Day by StepUpTimneh

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 22 Reviews
Summary: One shot- It’s a regular day for Paravati: gossipping with Lavender, lusting after hot guys, and listening to her friend’s endless stories about everyone else. She picks the wrong guy to flirt with today, though, and Ginny’s not happy. When her spell causes Parvati to fall in love with an apple, how far will Parvati have to embarrass herself before Ginny’s satisfied that she’s learned her lesson?
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: An Apple A Day

Ah... nice. =)



Lily and James, A Love Unfolding by lupinslover

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 45 Reviews
Summary: This is just to people to let you know, I changed the title of my story from Lily and James an Undying Love to Lily and James, A Love Unfolding. yeah after a year the title looked cheezy...so I changed it!

This story starts when Lily Evans first moves to a new neighbourhood. One that just happens to have James Potter, and his three unruly friends. Lily is invited to James' 11th birthday, where (little does she know it) she does magic. From then on, she is carried away in to the world of magic, and learning about things that could have only existed in her wildest imagination.
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 07/17/07 Title: Chapter 8: Surprises and Disappearances

ah, that was a good job i must say!

Author's Response: Thanks!



The Art of the Quill by Pussycat123

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 118 Reviews
Summary: *One shot* It is Lily and James's fifth year, and they have to endure many extremely dull classes. To pass the time, they swap notes. This is a collection of most of those notes ... and the madness that inevitably ensues.
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Art of the Quill

Excellent plot! loved it. =D
and, congratulations for the 100th review!! =D

Author's Response: Cod, I know. On a little one-shot, too! What\'s that all about? Not that I\'m not gratefull. But boy did I not expect that. Thanks so much!



A Sirius Dilemma by ElspethBates

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 123 Reviews
Summary:

At sixteen, Sirius looked forward to summer holiday until he was banished to Scotland. Unable to use magic, he’s faced with a dilemma. How to impress a pretty villager? With a little help from his friends. . . SBOC


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue

That was really wonderful!

Author's Response: I\'m really glad you think so! I\'ve just submitted the first chapter of a new story using the same characters. This one will focus more on Reggie but you\'ll see plenty of Sirius too! It\'s called \"R.A.B.\"



Sirius: The Black Knight by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 378 Reviews
Summary: Sirius was killed by Bellatrix. When he lands headlong at his dead best friend’s feet, he is a little perplexed. All is soon explained, however. He has reached Heaven, and James is here to welcome him. Before he can begin to get used to life in Heaven, he must first “watch his life” on the large screen in front of him, because it will help him understand things better. And so, that’s what he does. From the very beginning, to the very end. You too, can follow him through the ups and downs. Follow him through the highs and the lows. Follow him through the laughter, the pain, and the romance. Follow him through the story of his life. This fic is a tribute to Sirius Black. It is not all marauder-era, although a bulk of it is, and that is why it’s in this category.
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 12/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: The End

i siriusly did leave a review here as well!! what the heck's happening!! all my reviews are disappearing! anyways, i read this one ages back... and it's really good. i just love anything about sirius. =D

Author's Response: Well ... don\'t we all? Maybe your review just got lost with some of the others ... I\'m sure it\'s there somewhere. =)



Finality by Eilime

Rated: Professors • 176 Reviews
Summary: One-shot

He tore, bit, sucked, breathed, scratched at her as her flailing arms and legs won no victory.

She stood in silence for a while, knowing but not caring that he still stood behind her. She heard him mutter something and warmth surrounded her. A figment of imagination. An unreal cover.

Euphemism.

Though she was warm, it didn’t reach her body, her mind, her soul. She was freezing.

A hand came to rest on her arm.

This time, she let him.

At that moment, Hell froze over.

Warning: Contains mention of rape. Nothing graphic.

2nd story in a series of Hermione/Draco one-shots (Check out my author page for more information)

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Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/31/09 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Wow. So when I first read the summary, I thought that it would be Draco raping Hermione out of anger or something, and that later he falls for her, etc. because it’s a Dramione and all. But, whoa. I completely did not expect this. I can clearly say that I’ve never read anything like this, and that I never dreamt this would be possible.

I find it ironic that it is Harry who forces himself on Hermione and that Draco ends up bringing her back to life. The childhood best friend and the childhood sworn enemy. You have them in completely different positions and yet Draco is in character, it’s only the circumstances which are strange. He cannot help but be with Hermione at this time. He’s human and Harry’s not.



A random thing I noticed is that during the flashbacks you use words which we generally see for Draco and not Harry. Like there’s ‘sneered’ and ‘smirked’. And that was one of the reasons why I thought it was Draco because you never mention his name throughout the fic and by then it isn’t exactly too obvious... or maybe I’m just too thick. >.> But it makes a good effect, the ‘he’ and not name calling. It’s also sweet how Draco shifts from ‘Granger’ to ‘Hermione’ later.



It’s natural for Draco to ask Hermione who did that to her. And when she first says Harry’s name... I’m just... That hit me hard. It seemed impossible but then it was supposed to be unexpected so I guess that works. But I’ve read it quite a few times now and I can’t help but shudder every time I read it. Even Draco has trouble thinking it true since Harry’s supposed to be the perfect hero. But he does believe it in the end.



This one shot is amazing, really. The way you’ve written this is just awesome. And when you end it with Draco and Hermione hugging, and the title word finality, I fell in love with this one shot.



- Afifa



Author's Response: Afifa, thank you so much for that wonderful review. It always wonderful when a reader notices all the "little" things that to the author aren't small and insignificant but which to others may seem like coincidental extras. I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and thanks again for letting me know what you thought. Much appreciated! ~ Eilime



Dear Mrs. Potter... by DaisyMaeEvans

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 202 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Professor Granger deals with a pair of students who have inherited a knack for trouble...
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 07/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

that was fab-bloody-ulous!!



Stronger Together by Pevensies_Pensieve

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 60 Reviews
Summary: Lily never thought she'd end up with James. James didn't realize just how much he cared for Lily. As they grow closer together, they realize just how much they need each other as times grow hard under the rise of Lord Voldemort





Just one more chapter guys! It's nearly finished, I just have to get in the last chapter after this next one (ch 9) is approved before the cut-off date for Deathly Hallows. Hope everyone has enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 07/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Rainy Nights

ah... its finally completed, hmm...
a pretty good job overall. this chapter was pretty cute.



Is it Pride or Prejudice? by Stormbringer

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 339 Reviews
Summary: Lily Evans is confident yet unsure of her future. Who needs a boyfriend anyway when you've got awesome friends? But when James Potter finds a way into her mind and heart, slowly but surely, Lily finds what she missed in life. Love, loathing, friendships, and hardships are all components of this epic tale.
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/21/07 Title: Chapter 20: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

loved it! please do not end it... pleassseee...



A Hogwarts Survival Guide by Pussycat123

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 90 Reviews
Summary: During her fifth year, Lily Evans decides to write a guide to life at Hogwarts, and how to survive it. She covers all aspects of life, and gives helpful advice on how to deal with certain scenarios. For example, would you know what to do if you realised there was a kleptomaniac in your Dorm? What if you lost your beloved teddy bear, Mr Muffles? And do you know how to push, without any force? Read on, and find out the best way of living and surviving at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry ...
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 12/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Hogwarts Survival Guide

unique but nice. =)

Author's Response: Thanks! For all the reviews of the other fics, too. =)



Indistinguishable by SnorkackCatcher

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 19 Reviews
Summary: Successful young entrepreneurs Fred and George Weasley -- whose products sometimes seem almost magical! -- are interviewed by the 'Sunday Times Magazine'.


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 12/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Story Text

cool! nice plot. it's really funny and very well written. =)

Author's Response: Thank you!



Some Coincidences are Meant to Happen by SummerRain

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 85 Reviews
Summary: We all know James and Lily's relationship ended on a Halloween night with two bright green flashes, but how did it begin?


Were they introduced by friends? Did their eyes meet across a crowded room? Did it perhaps start with a small hello? Did they just lay eyes on each other and immediately hate one another?


Or maybe it began with a perfectly timed, destined chance encounter ... a coincidence, as some would say.

Join James and Lily in their Seventh year at Hogwarts as they recollect the times throughout their Hogwarts years that brought them together.




Teensiest bit of AU included, nothing major.
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 11: Dare to Dream

another wondeful chapter!
you totally rock!
update asap. please. =)

Author's Response: thanks so much!! ill get the next one up as soon as i can!



Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 10/20/07 Title: Chapter 12: Through It All

excellent job! iv totally fallen for james and sirius!



Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Smelly Hippogriff Chip

that was totally awesome!!
and i just totally looved these dialogues...

“Late for a bath, aren’t you, Snape?” James answered.

"She loves me. She just doesn’t know it yet. But you, on the other hand. You need a bath, and everyone knows it,” James said.


haha! update soonn please.

Author's Response: =D thanks so much for reviewing! ill get the next chapter up as soon as i can.



Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 08/05/07 Title: Chapter 9: Hiding

cool chapter!
upate soon... please..



Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 07/15/07 Title: Chapter 8: Forever

that was wonderful!