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A Black Rose and a White Lily
Update on August 9, '12- I have yet to start writing the fifth chapter. So that'll take some time. Okay, so, let's just admit this fic has been abandoned for now.

A Silent Change
Update on August 9 '12 - Chapter 4 was apparently with my betas. Chapters 5 and 6 were all written but I don't have any of these now. So, again, fic has been abandoned for now.

Eventual Embrace
Update on August 9, '12- A sequel to my other James/Lily one shot: Beneath the Shell. A follow up one shot will be coming whenever. Okay, probably never.

I haven't written Harry Potter fanfiction in an age. I highly doubt I'll be writing any more any time soon and continuing these which I wrote forever ago? Don't think that's happening. Enjoy the one shots though. :)
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Unrequited by R_Ravenclaw
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 82]

Summary: Everyone assumes Sirius Black has never truly cared for a girl. They're wrong. It's just that he can't do anything about it.

Sirius/Lily? Read to find out.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15603 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
09/04/07 Updated: 03/28/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 03/31/08 Title: Chapter 8: Barrier

I feel so frigging sorry for poor Sirius. You're actually making me love Sirius/Lily more than James/Lily, and that's saying something. In fact, that's saying a lot! I felt really bad when I was reading the letter. Sirius is a bit mature with Lily in this fic, and that's quite a refreshing change, as other writers tend to make him a 'womaniser', and that, i hate. Anyways, the chapter was very well written. Loved it. Can't wait to read the next one. =)

Author's Response: I know, I feel terrible for Sirius too. It seems like I\'m converted a lot of Lily/James shippers—I would really love to see more Sirius/Lily stories out there, so I hope this might convince someone to write one! I\'m glad you like Sirius, since by now I\'m struggling with not making him seem too mature, but since the reader only sees him around Lily, that\'s pretty difficult. Anyway, next chapter is about half-way written, and I\'m glad you left such a lovely review! :D

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/30/07 Title: Chapter 6: Identity

wow! sirius is so goddam sweet! and in love. lol. cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I know. I love Sirius too. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 10/23/07 Title: Chapter 4: Aftermath

Yeah, you are right.
Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/27/07 Title: Chapter 5: Mudblood

That was absolutely wonderful! Update soon, please.

Author's Response: Thanks! And the next chapter is in queue!

 

7 Ways to Win Her Heart by x_lily_evans_x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 200]

Summary: COMPLETED

Ah, Christmas. The season of joy and love. And Head Boy James Potter fully intends to use the loving atmosphere to his advantage by coming up with plans and using them to capture the heart of Lily Evans.

But since when do plans transfer beautifully from parchment to life?

Six plans become five, five become four, four become three, three become two, two become one, and then there are none.

Then his friends come to the rescue.

But of course.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 26155 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/14/07 Updated: 12/07/07


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter V

omg! i can't stop laughing. =D absolutely loved this chapter!

oh, and a few typing mistakes...
“No, sir,” he said quickly.
(it should be professor cause it was mc gonagall who asked the question, not slughorn or flitwick.)

The crown broke into applause... (It should be 'crowd')

waiting desperately for the next chapter. *grins*



Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out those mistakes! I\'ve corrected them already :D Haha, I\'m glad you loved this chapter. I\'ll send the next chapter into the queue quite soon... A week, tops. I hope you continue reading this fanfic! Thanks for the review. (:

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 12/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter VII

aww... sho shweet!! man! the ending was just great! like finally they are together! =D =D
now i can't even write 'update soon, please' hehe.

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, this fic is finally completed. I\'m going to miss writing it. I\'m glad you thought the finale was good! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/22/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter VI

omg! that was so sweet!! =D loved this one too!!
please make it happen in real... iv started to feel really bad for james now.

Author's Response: I\'m sure James will totally appreciate your sympathy. (:

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter IV

totally awesome!
and i laughed like hell at this part...=D
“Oh, she hates it when boys whip out contraceptives when she’s kissing them,” Gemma said brightly. When she saw James’ horrified expression, she laughed. “I was just kidding, James, just kidding– oh, for Merlin’s sake, I can’t believe he actually went catatonic! You guys, help me get him down to the Hospital Wing!”

update soon, will ya?

Author's Response: Yay, you saw the humor in that part! :D I hope the moderators validate the next chapter. Thanks for the review! (:

 

A Day at the Spa by Nevilles Girl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 84]

Summary:
Dear Mister Snape,
We are very pleased to present you with this once in a lifetime offer: A free day at Deena’s Magical Day Spa! Just Apparate to the address below and present this coupon to redeem your prize! We hope to see you there!
Sincerely,
Deena’s Magical Day Spa


Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1143 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/18/07 Updated: 09/26/07


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Day at the Spa

that was totally HILARIOUS!
loved the ending especially. Snape and good looks don't sound good together, yeah?

Author's Response: Yeah. Thanks for your review!

 

Just a Game? by R_Ravenclaw
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: While in Charms class one day, Lily feels James’ eyes on her. After her first glance back at him, she starts to think. It’s just a game to him, right? And is all really fair in love and war?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1258 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/08/07 Updated: 10/17/07


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just a Game?

omg! i loved it! like totally! good job! (Y)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

 

Summary: James Sirius Potter is a mischievous little six-year-old and is rather like his grandfather, James Potter, and also his namesake, Sirius Black. When he has an idea, he is determined to fulfil it to the best of his ability. He drags his siblings Albus and Lily as well as his cousins Hugo and Rose Weasley into his plan while a twelve-year-old Teddy Remus Lupin watches on, amused.







Written for the September Challenge by FlightofthePhoenix of Hufflepuff



Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1730 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/17/07 Updated: 10/22/07


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: James Potter = Mischievous

aww... so cute.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. Maybe i should write more stories with the little kiddies! They attract a lot of attention! Glad you liked it :) ~Nicole

 

The Moon and the Sun by Love_is_4ever
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary:

You and I, that’s like talking about the sun and the moon: even though they share the skies, they can’t be together at the same time...


What happens when your most precious possession is taken from you? This is the story of the life of Rowena Ravenclaw, one of the cleverest witches of her time. But she has a secret, and a past she can’t forget...


Written for the Full Moon One Shot Challenge, I am Hopeful_song, of Hufflepuff House.

This Story Won Third Place in the Full Moon One Shot Challenge!


Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3572 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/24/07 Updated: 12/05/07


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

first of all, CONGRATULATIONS! =D
wow! that was amazing, emotional and moving! i envy you though, english is my second tongue too but you're really good at it! a lot better than me. anyways, may i give a suggestion please? write more fics, will you??


Author's Response: Thanks! And I\'ll do my best to write for my fics soon.. *giggles*

Author's Response: Er.. I meant to say \"And I\'ll do my best to wrie more fics soon...\" I don\'t know what happened there... =)

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

first of all, CONGRATULATIONS! =D
wow! that was amazing, emotional and moving! i envy you though, english is my second tongue too but you're really good at it! a lot better than me. anyways, may i give a suggestion please? write more fics, will you??


Author's Response: Double, double, toil and trouble! =)

 

Dear Man-Journal... by wewillmissyou
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: Dear Diary….



No, only girls keep diaries. Sirius and James would murder me if they found out.



Journal?



Nah, that's rubbish, too.



Man-diary?



Don't be such a pansy, Peter. Man-diary? You must want to be mocked out of this century.



Man-journal, then?



Well, that's not so bad. It could be a temporary title, anyway.



Peter Pettigrew's mother wants him to let out his feelings in a "diary". Here is the first (and last) entry of his man-journal.



Many thanks goes to ix3thehpseries and Mistletoe for being faboulous and helpful betas!

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 887 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/07 Updated: 11/13/07


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: December 4

that was amazing! no siriusly!
although i can just imagine peter boiling whilst watching james and lily kissing... hehe!


Author's Response: Thank you! Love the Sirius pun, btw. :)

 

Only Him by R_Ravenclaw
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: I could see it every time I looked into her eyes.

At first I thought her eyes were beautiful. They were black and strong; she obviously wanted nothing more than to follow the one she loved.

It wasn’t me she loved.

And I don’t know when I found out.


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1005 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/20/07 Updated: 11/20/07


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 11/30/07 Title: Chapter 1: Only Him

the only thing that comes to mind right now is- poor rodolphus!
and yeah, i liked the way you've written this one-shot, with no mentions of names or anything. beautiful job! =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Apparently the pity for Rodolphus is pretty much universal. ^.~

 

Sirius's Riddle by R_Ravenclaw
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: What happens when a Ravenclaw catches Sirius Black's attention? He has a riddle to solve, to find out.

All you have to do is read this story.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3184 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/03/08 Updated: 01/08/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 10/31/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sirius's Riddle

Hi, Alison!

Great starting =] I liked how you showed Sirius being all bored, remarking on it, and the girl sitting next to him passing a sarcastic comment. It catches Sirius off attention since he isn't used to girls responding to him in that manner.

She was very ordinary.
A very straight forward sentence, but I like it for quite a few reasons.

First, the herione of the story doesn't always have to all beautiful. Lily's beautiful, Ginny's considered attractive too, but Sirius' love is just ordinary. Good.

It also shows how Sirius used to think about Victoria in the beginning. It portrays his thoughts about her when he just sees her and doesn't know her. It makes them ending up together more believable, that good looks aren't all that

important. It's the personality that mainly counts.

It's nice that Sirius is interested in her and starts asking her random questions after every few days break. And even though in the beginning she's sort of cold [and maybe wary?], she starts warming up to him, and they become friends. Kind of. And how Sirius is on denial until the whole scene at Hogsmeade.

The riddle was very appropriate, by the way. I think I should check out that site sooner or later. Anyway, I myself couldn't guess the answer until the clue about it being a four letter word was given. Then it was obvious-- love. Lol. But I still wanted to confirm, and when I reread the riddle, it made perfect sense.

The ending was perfect! How both of them realise their love for each other and end up kissing.

In short, it was a very well written one shot. I really liked it! =]

- Afifa

 

Cinderella Was a Redhead by NeLLyRaE
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 67]

Summary: Lily Evans has problems. She sleepwalks, (and always ends up in strange places) she is disorganised, flunking Arithmancy, and, to her dismay, was made Head Girl. There is also the problem of James Potter, who refuses to stop asking her out. Will she ever pull herself together enough to give him a chance?

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 12347 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
01/04/08 Updated: 07/20/08


Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 03/27/08 Title: Chapter 3: Dancing on the Roof

lol. how can anyone want to dance on the roof? your lily is SO original. :D

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Sleepwalker

i just looove it, so i've added your story on my favourites. =D
lily's characterization is pretty different, but nice. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh crap. i submitted the review for the first chapter, but, uh, whatever. the contents would have been the same. lol. and now you get a bonus review. tehe.

 
Reviewer: Afifa Signed
Date: 07/30/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow. I love this fic. =D gREat chapter! =]

 
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