A Black Rose and a White Lily
Update on August 9, '12- I have yet to start writing the fifth chapter. So that'll take some time. Okay, so, let's just admit this fic has been abandoned for now.
A Silent Change
Update on August 9 '12 - Chapter 4 was apparently with my betas. Chapters 5 and 6 were all written but I don't have any of these now. So, again, fic has been abandoned for now.
Update on August 9, '12- A sequel to my other James/Lily one shot: Beneath the Shell. A follow up one shot will be coming whenever. Okay, probably never.
I haven't written Harry Potter fanfiction in an age. I highly doubt I'll be writing any more any time soon and continuing these which I wrote forever ago? Don't think that's happening. Enjoy the one shots though. :)
one thing though, prefects arent allowed to take or give points even from their own houses. they can give detentions though.
cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hmm...guess the website I was using was wrong! No, no. Since Percy \'accidentally\' did it once in CoS, Jo kind of covered it up by saying you could take away from your OWN house. As to whether they can award to others, I\'m going to have to check my sources.
that was pretty good i must say!
good job! =)
wow! its really really hilarious! =D
i read this one before and i think i left a review but i can't find it anywhere. anyways, this is a really nice fic. really a cute way in which james and lily ended up getting together. no offense to the authors of other fics or anything (plus i like reading them too), but they have this whole 30 chapters fic and then james and lily end up getting together. (i guess i'll be doing that too, but... whatever.) yeah, so nice fic. keep wriiting fics as good as these! =]
cool idea... really random but very well written. and i love the 'crackpot' part.
Author's Response: =D Well, random, yeah ... but I\'m glad you liked it! It was a lot of fun.
“Opps,” gulped Harry.
“Coooool,” breathed Dudley.
“CUPBOARD!” roared Uncle Vernon.
I cracked up when I read these lines. LOL. I really liked your fic a lot. It was hilarious! =D
One typo, though.
Vernon Dursley started to turn and interesting shade of puce
The 'and' should be 'an'.
Overall, lovely story! =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
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Yay! Finally they're going out! =D
aaa... great job! i just want the queue problems to be solved, and then you can update it. trying to wait patiently for the enxt chapter. lol. *goes to add story on favs*
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I hope that these poor moderaters can get this fixed soon. They work so hard!!! And thanks for adding this story to your favorites!
thats a really nice change! i mean, i have never read lily and sirius although i have read rosmerta and sirius. good work!
Author's Response: I\'m guessing that the Rosemetra/Sirius fic that you read was Semi-Charmed Life? I don\'t think I have ever read a Marauder Era fic that wasn\'t Kerichi\'s... Anyway, I\'m glad you like this! And update should be soon!
nice chapter, as always. but, the part i liked best was when mr and mrs potter are talking about lily... hehe. The best line: "Well, that was obviously where the hopeless optimism came from." =D i know i should feel sorrie for sirius but i can't help it.
Author's Response: Sirius always has to have a bit of the hilarious sarcasm, or else he wouldn\'t be himself! I\'m glad you like the chapter!
I feel so frigging sorry for poor Sirius. You're actually making me love Sirius/Lily more than James/Lily, and that's saying something. In fact, that's saying a lot! I felt really bad when I was reading the letter. Sirius is a bit mature with Lily in this fic, and that's quite a refreshing change, as other writers tend to make him a 'womaniser', and that, i hate. Anyways, the chapter was very well written. Loved it. Can't wait to read the next one. =)
Author's Response: I know, I feel terrible for Sirius too. It seems like I\'m converted a lot of Lily/James shippers—I would really love to see more Sirius/Lily stories out there, so I hope this might convince someone to write one! I\'m glad you like Sirius, since by now I\'m struggling with not making him seem too mature, but since the reader only sees him around Lily, that\'s pretty difficult. Anyway, next chapter is about half-way written, and I\'m glad you left such a lovely review! :D
wow! sirius is so goddam sweet! and in love. lol. cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I know. I love Sirius too. Thanks for the review!
Yeah, you are right.
Author's Response: Thanks!!
That was absolutely wonderful! Update soon, please.
Author's Response: Thanks! And the next chapter is in queue!
omg! i can't stop laughing. =D absolutely loved this chapter!
oh, and a few typing mistakes...
“No, sir,” he said quickly.
(it should be professor cause it was mc gonagall who asked the question, not slughorn or flitwick.)
The crown broke into applause... (It should be 'crowd')
waiting desperately for the next chapter. *grins*
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out those mistakes! I\'ve corrected them already :D Haha, I\'m glad you loved this chapter. I\'ll send the next chapter into the queue quite soon... A week, tops. I hope you continue reading this fanfic! Thanks for the review. (:
aww... sho shweet!! man! the ending was just great! like finally they are together! =D =D
now i can't even write 'update soon, please' hehe.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, this fic is finally completed. I\'m going to miss writing it. I\'m glad you thought the finale was good! Thanks for the review!
omg! that was so sweet!! =D loved this one too!!
please make it happen in real... iv started to feel really bad for james now.
Author's Response: I\'m sure James will totally appreciate your sympathy. (:
and i laughed like hell at this part...=D
“Oh, she hates it when boys whip out contraceptives when she’s kissing them,” Gemma said brightly. When she saw James’ horrified expression, she laughed. “I was just kidding, James, just kidding– oh, for Merlin’s sake, I can’t believe he actually went catatonic! You guys, help me get him down to the Hospital Wing!”
update soon, will ya?
Author's Response: Yay, you saw the humor in that part! :D I hope the moderators validate the next chapter. Thanks for the review! (:
that was totally HILARIOUS!
loved the ending especially. Snape and good looks don't sound good together, yeah?
Author's Response: Yeah. Thanks for your review!