ahh i'm alyss i'm fifthteen. i live in melbourne victoria AUSTRALIA!!! i am writing a novel on my school footscray city collage *throws arm up*. my school is crazy. we have anyone and everyone. outlaws, muzza's(look it up in wika), emos, goths, bogans, perfects, drama queens, wannabe gansters, stakers, back benchers etc etc... i major one english, humanities,law and cooking. i monior in photography and arts. my school runs on music and pop culture. lets talk about me!! i live with my mum brother and sister. i am the youngest. my dad, unlces, grandfather and granmother are dead. so yeah
Summary: Set in James and Lily's fifth year - this is their story. I promise you it isn't the whole 'James has changed - let's get married' but it does stick to getting together in the 7th year.
We begin just after OWLs and James' pathetic attempts to charm Lily go from bad to worse and not without the help of a certain friend...whose name sounds like furious...but with an i instead of a u...and no o...
I am disapionted in you. In your story says that voldemorts war is just starting wrong. In the first book its says that the war has been going for 11 years. Please reread the Harry Potter more carefully the next time you write a next Harry Potter fan fic thank you for your time
P.S try and make lily more bright and bubbly thank you
The Trials and Tribulations of James Potter's Love Life by morticia b
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 26]
Summary: James Potter and Lily Evans don't get along. Not from James' lack of trying thought. This story follows the two throughout their fifth year at Hogwarts and examines their love/hate relationship a little closer.
keep on writing
Summary: Hogwarts was Cupid's battlefield. Seventh years James Potter and Lily Evans, having just settled their differences, plan to contend against Cupid's mischief and sort out the students' tangled love lives. Yet what may seem like foolproof, thoroughly-analyzed and wily schemes may not be so when their plans are set in motion.
keep on writing it's pretty goood
Summary: Lily thought she was in for a boring summer... but James Potter had other ideas. Love Letters, with a rather bizarre twist.
keep on writing those letters thier helarious
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Summary: It's James and Lily's last night at Hogwarts and James doesn't want their relationship to end after they leave school. This is just a short fic looking at their encounter in the Astronomy Tower.
This is reposted because I was stupid and accidentally deleted it.
lovely really lovely but if they were going out they would be in first name bases thank you for taking the time to read this.
Author's Response: The use of surnames was an affectionate thing between them because of how much they hated each other in the beginning. Thank you so much for reading!
Summary: James has always been totally commited to Lily. So when he stands her up, she brushes it off. But when it happens a second time, she begins to grow suspicious. Is James Potter, the love of her life, cheating on her? Or does he have something else up his sleeve?
Author's Response: I\'m sorry this didn\'t appeal to you. I do appreciate your feedback. However, this review is not particularly helpful to me as far as improvement goes. If you\'re going to criticise my work so bluntly, please at least give reason for your criticism.
Summary: Lily is sick of pranks and lies. James is love-sick. She doesn’t believe the excuses given even when it’s truthful…this time around. He could be categorized as dead if he didn’t breathe, move and sleep- though, he's only done those last two under limits. It’s up to his friends, the Marauders, to get them together and for once, do an honest deed. That’s what friends are for after all.
BIG SORRY FOR THE FACT THAT THIS HASN'T BEEN UPDATED IN SUCH A LONG TIME- NOT THAT THERE WERE MANY READERS. SCHOOL, OTHER STUFF GOT IN THE WAY. HOPEFULLY WE'LL START WORKING ON IT AGAIN THIS SUMMER.
it's perttey good have you read the last book yet? i have in like five hours
Author's Response: I have read it, took me about twice that. :-) I liked it. But I\'m not going to saying anything becuase I REALLY don\'t want to get kicked off. Well, the other part of this account probably doesn\'t care too much. *laugh*
Author's Response: UGH!
Summary: The first war with Lord Voldemort is constantly getting worse; people are dying left and right, dementors are attacking people on the Death Eaters' orders, and nobody knows who is trustworthy anymore. Lily Evans, in her seventh year at Howarts, does not want to be a part of the war -- but some things are unavoidable.
oohh preetty good one of the best. but i must help you china has too langues cantonnesse and manarin. but manarin the offical langue i think if marly wants to learn japanesse i'm willing to help her
Author's Response: (: Thank you. Yeah I know about Cantonese and Mandarin. And thanks for offering to help Marly :)
Summary: The one thing that he knew what hurt him the most is the one thing he did. Watching her from afar was the only way he knew to feel close to her.
A Severus/Lily fic.
write more i loved this fic
Author's Response: Thank you =). If you\'re interested in reading more, there are always the other fics I\'ve written ^_^
Summary: Canon Compliant to Chapter 33 of DH.
Severus Snape: Dumbledore’s man or Dumbledore’s murderer? This OFC fic explores what happened all those years ago to make Snape turn spy and how it shaped the Potions Master into the man we love to hate.
i really like this its great keep the chapters coming
Author's Response: I am happy that you are enjoying it. The sudden delay in updates is due, unfortunately, to the fact that I live in the real world and only get to play in Jo\'s! Stay tuned - more to come soon!
Summary: She is wrong. She is wrong in so many ways, so many ways, in every way imaginable. I am with Lily; she is my girlfriend, I am her boyfriend - but she will never be my Lily. She’ll always be his and even she knows it as she entwines her hand with mine. [CHAPTER 3 REPOSTED!]
weird in so many ways i don't know what year lilly is in. for your first fan fic it could of been better thank you for you time
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I know the first chapter was really ambiguous, but I sort of intended it to be that way because I thought explaining everything in detail would take away from the general feel of the fic; but it is good to know that this ambiguity might become negative vagueness, so I\'ll definitely take that into account the next time I write! And Lily is in her seventh year in this fic.
Summary: James and Lily are married and Lily is acting strange and emotional. More so than usual that is. However, James may have an idea as to what may be causing Lily's strange emotions.
hellerious yet very different i tip my hat off to you
Summary: Exactly when did Severus Snape become a Death Eater? Prequel to RAB and the Beginning of the End, this story offers a glimpse into the secret marriage of Severus Snape and Richelle Bowen.
um i belive that r.a.b is regules black.
Author's Response: Oh, I think RAB is Regulus as well; this was an AU fic.
Summary: I'm not really sure how or when it happened. I'd say somewhere between when he saved my life (and didn't even mention it!) and our late-night conversation. Or maybe in third year, but I just repressed it. No matter when it happened, something clicked with James Potter, and I felt like a fool. Especially when I learned that he had a girlfriend. Hopefully with stories of a nude Petunia and my charm, he'll see the light.
This will be six chapters.
this is weird i like how made lily so shes gets things wrong but james is the one who i'm disapointed with i know hes supposed to mature and all but hes gotta mess up hes JAMES POTTER i think that james should have stuck with lily i understand that if james has a girlfriend lily will become jelous like harry did in the six book but i'd always imagine lily to be the most scarest girl there is because whenever sirius went out with on of her many friends and broke there heart lily would go scare him on one of the marauders many trips to the kitchens. And that is what made james go crazy for her. also why don't read about sirius??? hmmm? well my rant is finished toodle do
Author's Response: Sirius has popped up a few times. This is from Lily's POV and about her relationship with James. I don't really feel like Sirius plays as big as a role, especially from Lily's POV. Thanks for your opinions though! I hope you keep reading!
Summary: Seventh-year Lily Evans is ready for romance, but not any kind of romance--she desires the sappiest kind possible. She is not aware, however, that her knight in shining armor just might be the (until now) devilishly annoying James Potter.
like this so far but please don't try and make it corny i hate corny stories
Summary: We learn here the story of Lily Evans, a Muggleborn attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Her best friend -- and secret love -- Severus Snape, has been her guide through the first four years of her magical education. However, rumors of Severus’ doings are starting to concern Lily, as she starts to notice James Potter, a Quidditch star with unkempt hair and a knack for trouble. Lily’s internal battle is heating up, as she prepares to start her fifth year at Hogwarts.
(Character Death and Sexual Situations Warnings are for later chapters.)
UPDATE 01/30: Chapter 2 is FINALLY posted! I hope you all enjoy this one! Chapter 3 is currently being edited, so I don't have any good excerpts to provide for you...however, keep checking here for updates!
i don't think lily loved snape (sorry but DUMBELDORE KILLER!!)but other than that it great in fact i love it and i like how snape(DUMBELDORE KILLER!!) and james fight over lily.
cant wait for the next chapter
love silleri, aka alyss
Author's Response: I went based off of clues from Book 7 that Lily must\'ve harbored some sort of feelings for him. But then again, it IS only a fanfic! Glad you enjoyed it!
Summary: James Potter has just informed his fellow Marauders that Lily Evans finally agreed to go out with him. His best friend Sirius Black is feeling rather evil and naughty and cooks up a scheme to follow James and Lily under the invisibility cloak on their first date for pure Marauder fun. He convinces Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew to join him. But things don't go as planned and much chaos and unexpected events unfold...
The title was inspired by Fall Out Boy's album title, From Under the Cork Tree.
keep on writing!!!!=)
Author's Response: I promise I\'m working on! I\'ve just been so busy. Thanks for reviewing!
Summary: There are three sides to every story: yours, mine, and the truth.
Sixth year has finally arrived for the legendary Gryffindor Marauders, Lily Evans, Severus Snape, and Katherine Vance and with it, dozens of new responsibilities. Suddenly they have to juggle NEWT level classes, changing loyalties, and a war that threatens to destroy everything they hold dear. Somehow, in the midst of everything, romance blooms in the most unlikely places.
We all know how the story ends, but how did it begin? What really happened to make Lily fall in love with James?
Every story has a third side, for better or worse. Here is the rest of theirs.
i like so far. oh and i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeee gummy bear your in my good books
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! And yes, gummy bears are pretty much the best things ever...ha ha!
Summary: It was insane. It was stupid. But he had to do it. Severus Snape knew he would never be able to live without knowing.
It all came down to her.
different but it's bit too stalkerry for but it's good and i will read your other work or is this your first one
Author's Response: yes, this is my first fic