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04/23/07




I love books, art, music, religion, school, friends, family, computers, movies, phone, email, and IM. I do not like swearing, drinking, tattooes, drugs, piercings, or any of that stuff. I like people who talk about good stuff, lift you up, listen to you, think you're important, give their time to you, laugh when it's appropriate, and...yeah. I dont like people who are snobby, giggle too much, hate the world/families/etc., and think that people with glasses are nerds. (My brother...grrrrr!)


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A Few Detentions and A Story by LaneTechFreshie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 1701 Reviews
Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.
Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 11: More Detentions

OMGOSH! you have a great imagination! OMGOSH! that was so funny! I was almost on the floor laughing!



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 12: Secrets, Questions, Answers, and Doubt

It's finally happened! *sniffs* I'm so happy! And just the right timing too!



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 13: Betrayal

I was right! The American girl really is evil! I have a 6th sense about these things, you know. That's me, Queen Lily the fortune teller!



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 14: A Few Discussions

So, they finally spilled the beans about Stacey and Snape. Well, I hope they take it to Dumbledore soon.



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 15: Another Detention

Well, it's a good thing James put the Marauder's Map back because otherwise, Fred and George wouldn't have found it and given it to Harry. It all works out! Great job on this story!



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 16: Bad News

That's so sad! And to both of them! I wish I could have my hands on Stacey and Snivellus right now....GRRRRR!!!!!



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 17: Talks with Friends

I love chocolate too. And I hope that Stacey and Snvellus get what's coming to them (or at least what they deserve).



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbye

It's a darn good thing Stacey left, but the funerals were so sad! I hope it gets happy soon! :(



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Unbelievable Head

How can James become Head Boy if he wasn't a prefect? But I like it!

Author's Response: *shrug* I think that maybe I\'ll edit that, so that JAmes was a prefect. I think i read in another fic that he wasn\'t a prefect, but he was Head Boy, and b/c I had read it so many times, it just became \"fact\", so i used it. But... I\'ll edit it.



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

I hope Nikeia and Josey give Lily a good talking to. She's moping around too much. Does it get happy?



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/25/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Trainride

When's Lily going to start liking James??!!

Author's Response: You got a while if you\'re only at \"Trainride\". But, soon enough. :-)



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 20: In Which Lily and James Have a Conversation

I'm glad they made up. I was getting depressed that Lily was depressed. Haha.



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 21: A New Day

I like the idea that Sam likes Monica, and Sirius and Nikeia were just HILARIOUS!!!

Author's Response: Yup. There\'s the best! Hehe.



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 22: More Bad News

You know, I have no idea how Voldemort always has to worm his way into the best moments. It drives me nuts!
And Nikeia? That's just tragic.Are you sure it gets happy?



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 23: The Duel

Oh, it's sad!!! I hate depression! Your story didn't make it that bad, though. Now, when does it get happy?



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 25: The Passing Days

Well, Samuel stated the obvious. Stacey being a Death Eater sure was a stupid move!



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 26: Coming Out of It

Sirius was revived! Finally! I really do hope you don't kill Nikeia.



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/26/07 Title: Chapter 27: This November Day

Does Nikeia come out of it soon? I don't think Sirius can bear it anymore!



All Right, Evans? by anglophile

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 270 Reviews
Summary: Everyone knows the story after that Halloween night that Harry Potter became an orphan... but what about before? James Potter and Lily Evans are two young people with an extroadinary story of bravery, friendship, and love. Join them throughout their seven years at Hogwarts and see how the past affects the future.
Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/29/07 Title: Chapter 2: A New Beginning

I like how u started at the beginning. It sort of gives us backround info.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Queen_Lily Signed
Date: 04/29/07 Title: Chapter 13: A Night in Hogsmeade

Oh, u need 2 update! I'm dying! *makes gagging sounds, clutching throat* My life is flashing before my eyes and i'll never get to read the end...Noooooooooo! Back off, Grim Reaper! Okay, i'm cool.

Author's Response: Oh man, I hope you live to see the next chapter! ;)