I have a bad habit of putting things in parentheses (a fact that annoys my brother). I like to procrastinate (SO not good for my grades!) I tend to lose all common sense when I'm angry (so don't provoke me). I think JKR is the goddess of writing and I would do anything to have her talent (ebay here I come!). I will try to create a story soon. It will be called "Before and After". It is a romance fic mostly based on James and Lily but it will have other ships. I am new at this so it might suck. If you wanna email me (for some strange reason) my email address isthesims2totallyrox@yahoo.com. Good bye. All hail JKR! *Vala*
Lily and James: Their Story of Love by Secret Lily
Rated: [Reviews - 3878]
Summary:
"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”
“No,” Sirius said simply.
“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”
The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP
I find Venus more realistic than Umbridge. She actually has a motive, a sad past. Umbridge's motives aren't really explained all that well...she just seems to like power. I like your character better. I felt sorry for her for a brief moment. But she still did a lot of wrong.
Urgh, I HATE rumors. I wish James let his friends hex everyone into oblivion. Then again, that'll only make things worse...I love ur stories!!
Ok, I see a lot of the "Lily and James see their future death" kind of thing in a lot of L/J fics. But urs was unique. You put more description, more emotion into it. A bit fast, but I totally enjoyed it!
Well, I see that people are very mad at Lily now...as long as she provides a good reason though, I'm not really all that PO'd.
I feel sorry for Peter, I really do. I don't think of him as a betrayer, I just think of him as a stupid idiot who chose the wrong friends. Ok, where the heck is my torch?! I'm joining the mob! DIE SCABBERS, DIE!!!
NNNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *screams on forever* Not the curse of the cliffie again! It's times like these when I wish I had a wand...hey wait a minute...what the hell am I screamin about, this story is completed already! Ok then...I'm gonna scream about Snivelly...DAMN THAT SLIMEBALL!!!!
That. Was. The. Most. Shocking. End. Ever. Urgh, I can believe Sirius tried to make a move on his own cousin! Oh well, it's not his fault.
Wonder who the chubby guy is...*coughcoughpetercough* nah, not likely
WAAHHHH!!!! Not the drama!!! *makes the sign of the cross* hope Halle lives.
WWWAAAAHHHH!!!!! Oh well, I understand. Lily's havin a hard time, she must feel upset. I dont approve of what she did, but I'm not yelling either. But I think James is getting a *little* hysterical!
I LOVE ur stories!! You rock! DON'T ever change!! (I know that sounds cliche, but I really mean it.)
Argh! Not fluff! It bbuuurrrnnnsss! Nah, jk, I'm ok with fluff. Besides, it's not like you overdid it. Just a question: when the prophecy said "the last Potter was his downfall," you meant Harry right? Did you mean to confuse James and Lily into thinking that James was the target? P.S, I don't think that this story is going downhill, I think it is great!! Just gotta read the rest so that I can read the sequel!
Life Goes On by scarlet phoenix feathers
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 581]
Summary: The war is over and the Weasley's along with Harry and Hermione try to get on with their lives. Harry and Ron leave to fulfill their childhood dreams. Hermione, with the assistance of the new Minister of Magic, opens a new department in the Ministry, and Ginny finishes her last year at Hogwarts and then begins a career of her own.
Luna is so weird! plastic wraps? and I thought lotions were annoying!
Author's Response: I had to come up with something a bit of the wall for her...LOL And what I think is even better not many even thought twice about her doing. They are use to her doing strange things...that is why we all love her. Thanks for reading and I hope you are liking it.
poor Rose...blissfully unaware of the fact that her parents are in danger. hey, if you become an English teacher, assign ur class a HP book to read, will u? my 4th grade teacher assigned the first book to us...how much i miss her! then again, if you become a college professor, nvm what i said!
Author's Response: LOL thanks and my British Lit Professor did actually assign the First HP book right along side Frankenstein and Whuthering Heights...so the college students are even getting in on the reading asignments. Of course I was one up on the rest of the class, I didn't have to read it again...although I did
hope u finish the sequel soon! r u sure u wanna be an English teacher? u could be a good author...well, now i gotta go back to doing my math homework (yeah right, i wanna procrastinate more! maybe i'll read ur other stories!)
Author's Response: Oh I will continue to write once I start teaching. I have to make money somehow. It's hard to get anything published. My creative writing professor is actually a published author and spends alot of time on the Lord of the Rings. He is actually the one that got me started writing. We had an assignment to write something, anything. So I figured a fanfic was it. He agreed and here we are. BTW "Life GOes On" was my assignment. The assignment was due before Christmas so he got all but the last few chapters.
WHAT?! Rose is Hermione's daughter? No wonder! I thought, isn't Molly Weasley a bit too old to have a daughter? nice and shocking twist. yet, it's more realistic than if Rose was Molly's daughter. I should've known when there was the part where Hermione was thinking haw great a father Ron was going to be when he hugged Rose. Was that your idea of foreshadowing?
Author's Response: Right on there my good man...LOL I had this planned from the get go. The sequel that I started had her in it so I had to come up with something that wouldn't compromise my sequel...LOL I always look forwardt o reading the reviews on this chapter. It is so fun.
Yay! I can finally say something! I finally got registered. Very good start! It makes me want more (luckily, that won't be very hard to satisfy). Well, adios. I gotta read more of this story!
Author's Response: Thank you, good to have you onboard. Hope you enjoy the rest.
aw, Percy. so arrogant. wants to act like he knows everything! what a wannabe. hmm...I can just imagine Mr. Weasley getting all excited about the DVD thing...he must've asked poor Hermione a million questions, lol.
Author's Response: I wanted to include as much of the families characteristics in here as possible. And I figured what a perfect way, include some kind of electronic. LOL
*bursts into laughter* P-P-Percy did that? *peals of laughter* stuffy Percy did that? *laughs* *chokes* *turns blue* *takes a deep breath* ahh...that's better. Percy cracking is a nice contrast to the serious conversation Harry and Hermione had. (great, "contrast"? "foreshadowing"? Im starting to sound like my English teacher!)
Author's Response: Well that's all good because I'm studying to be an English teacher...LOL I thought Percy needed to lighten up a bit and what a perfect way...get Fred and George...LOL
I decided to post something so that it wont look so empty, lol. nah, jk. very realistic. I was actually half-convinced that I was reading something 4rm JKR!
Author's Response: Now I am flattered...however I can only wish to be able to write as well as she does someday. Glad you like it. BTW THANK YOU!
