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Traditional Socks by Angharad
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 27]

Summary: Why does Professor Dumbledore tell Harry that he sees himself holding a pair of socks in the Mirror of Erised?

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2291 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 11/09/04


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 12/31/05 Title: Chapter 1: Traditional Socks

That was so cute. What a lovely tradition. You know I thought of giving someone I care about socks for Christmas, but then thought she would think it inappropriate. After this story, next time I'll think twice.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :-) Good luck with your real life sock story. ;-)

 

To See You Through The Dark by Narwen3
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 1598]

Summary: PRE-HBP!!! Harry starts out his sixth year in sorrow at the loss of Sirius. Ginny helps him to overcome it, and our heroes learn a lot about life and love. This story has been completed! Special thanks to my mod, Danielle and to my fantastic readers!

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 70054 Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/02/04 Updated: 06/01/06


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 06/03/06 Title: Chapter 48: The Truth

Ok. You did it. You hit a sentimental old fool with a really tear jerker, and it work. Wonderful story. Thank you and your betas.

Author's Response: Woot! *throws hands up jubilantly* I\'m glad that you liked it and I could touch emotional cords. Sadly, I didn\'t work with a Beta here, but I hope to get someone to go over my chapters for the next one. Thanks for reading! Narwen3

 

Summary: **Story Complete**It is the first Chrismas holiday after the loss of Sirius. Harry is beginning to kick himself for not noticing Ginny before...Ginny knows that even though she vowed to not hang on Harry's every word she can't help but still think about him constantly. The two of them will not acknowledge their feelings for one another, so how will they ever be able to see eye to eye.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14369 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/27/04 Updated: 03/19/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/13/05 Title: Chapter 6: Gryffindor Castle

I just read the first six chapters and think they are great. You show real talent. I find the idea of the castle neat. It could very easliy start a whole new series.

Author's Response: Yes, I thought of that. I would like it if you would take a look at my other fic here which is "Life Goes On". It takes place after they all leave Hogwarts. Youmight like it if you like the idea of the castle here. thanks for reading and reviewing. It's always good to hear what you all think.

 

Summary: Harry returns to Hogwarts, still saddened by Sirius' death earlier in the year. As the school year progresses, he slowly finds happiness again when he connects with Ginny and gives her a special gift at Christmas. But in the meantime, Lord Voldemort grows more desperate, and he will stop at nothing to destroy his greatest enemy.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 34866 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/29/04 Updated: 05/02/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/15/05 Title: Chapter 11: Getting Closure

This is a great story. I like it. You follow all of the story lines and because you didn't add anything silly or way out of the ordinary, I could see it clearly in my mind. You make it real. Keep going.

Author's Response: Thank you! I will!

 

Ginny's Love by The Marauder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 412]

Summary: After Sirius' death Harry is in his own private world of misery, but with Ginny's love and a plan to bring together his best friends, he is brought back to reality with much more than he expected...

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 21905 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/01/05 Updated: 08/14/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/10/05 Title: Chapter 4: Secret Refuge Part 1

This is my first reading, and I am enjoying the storyline. I like the treet touch, very classy.

 
Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/19/05 Title: Chapter 7: Behind the Door

Great story. Devious aren’t you. How did you ever think up a game like this? Touch of a Matchmaker are you huh? OK hurry up now with the next chapters.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/09/05 Title: None

I enjoyed the story, but I think you need to build on it. It looks like the beginnings of a good long story with lots to keep a reader interested.

 

Ancient Magic by kjpzak
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 276]

Summary: Past Featured StoryHarry and Ginny are destined to have a love that endures. He Who Must Not be Named certainly thinks so. Could their love be the key to fulfilling one of his greatest wishes?

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 38148 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/06/05 Updated: 03/22/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/10/05 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 7 - Late Night Revelations

This is a good story. Nice touch with the background history. The topic is great too. Old magic hmmm. What other old magic will come out? I still haven’t figured out why Sirius had the secret hideaway. Only the Shadow knows.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a tough time with that background. I'm glad to hear you thought it fit, too. Can't help you with Sirius, though. :)

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/13/05 Title: None

Great start. Looks like the begining is off to the right foot.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/14/05 Title: None

I like it, keep going.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!

 
Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 02/20/06 Title: None

Greta dear, you must finish this story. I know I'm not one to talk, since I haven't finished mine, but this is a great story that must be told. It feels so real, so right. Please continue soon.

 

Summary: Hermione Granger has been in love with Harry Potter since the middle of fifth year—she thinks the feeling is mutual and she’s tired of waiting. Now Hermione is a very smart witch; when she sets out to achieve a goal, the realization of said goal is generally in the bag. A tale about what happens when Hermione gets fed up and Harry gets woken up.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 21872 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/03/05 Updated: 03/25/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 03/16/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Best-Laid Plans

Too cute. When is the next chapter? Can't wait.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 07/02/05 Title: None

This is a beautiful story with some great ideas. Your plan with the songs bits works well in separating the time and locations. Although I feel like we are missing something. I am surprised that it was not Ron who kept pushing for more practice. I have always seen Harry more aggressive and determined when he wants something. You use the word “said” more than enough. To make the conversation flow, drop the “he said”, “Harry Said”…. When you separate the stanzas it already gives the impression of two people talking. If you feel the need to show exactly who is talking, have them doing something, like play with a button on there blouse,, or drinking from a cup. Keep up the writing, you have a great imagination and keep the story flowing. I have added you to may favorites and hope to read more of you works.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Chapter 3 has a bit of a better flow as far as the dialouge is concerned, I realized that it wasn't quite up to par. I only have two more chapters to go after 3 is posted, so it won't be long now... Thanks again, I hope you like the third chapter!

 

Healing Harry by pandafan81
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 507]

Summary: A rose, a new bedroom, a Pensieve, and a new home. Harry finds comfort in his friends and family. Will he find more?

Story is now complete!

Earlier chapters are going through a clean-up and final edit. Chapters 1-4 complete.


Half Blood Prince and Deathly Hallows Disregarded

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 59634 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/12/05 Updated: 09/15/07


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 12/31/05 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Christmas at Home

This is great. Just found the story a few hours ago and just could stop reading. All of this reading in one sitting, it magic. Thanks. Have a Happy and Safe New Year and we will see you on the other side of the monitor.

Author's Response: Happy New Year to you! My first reviewer of 2006!!!

 

All I Need by kjpzak
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 37]

Summary: Dragons, piece of Cake. Dementors, no problem. Valentine's Day? Oh Boy! FLUFF TO THE EXTREME The third in a series - The Deal, Harry Loves Ginny,All I Need.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2624 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/23/05 Updated: 05/23/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 07/02/05 Title: Chapter 1: N/A

That was just too cute. Love it. I can't type and laugh at the same time. he he eh

Author's Response: LOL - thanks! Multitasking can be hard... :)

 

Summary: This story is about Harry's struggle...his struggle to obey his mind when his heart is screaming out in protest .

It's about Ginny's secrets, her aching heart, and where her loyalty lies.
Mainly, this story is about friends, those you can trust and those who can't trust you.

Reviews are fun and easy! So don't shy away from stating your opinion...trust me, it feeds the fire so I'm not left out in the cold! ;)

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 100265 Chapters: 44 Completed: No
Published:
05/23/05 Updated: 07/10/07


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 02/20/06 Title: Chapter 30: Just Another Dean

great story you have going. On another note, your fans really should get together more often. Such close freinds are a blessing. Wish you all well in school.

 
Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 07/02/06 Title: Chapter 34: Half Blood Prince

I just reread the enitre storiy and find that I must have been born a dunce. You told us about the palace and Ginny trip there. Why I didn't piece that together.... Great story, glad your back, put the home buying goes well.

Author's Response: BRILLIANT!!!!!!! ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!!!!! WELL DONE! I doubt anyone is going to look this far back in the reviews to see your complete genius, but kudos to you for catching on to the early clues that I laid out. The smart people should be asking what happened at the Palace???

 

The Seekers by Cassie Payne
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 57]

Summary: What happens AFTER they climb out of the portrait hole?

Funny, but he had never thought of using the Invisibility Cloak in his schemes to woo Ginny.



Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4511 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/29/05 Updated: 07/29/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 08/21/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter Twenty Four and 1/2

That was a very lovely story. I enjoyed your style of writing. It shows a lot of feeling without making it too wordy.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words!

 

Dinner with the Weasleys by Zoltan42
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 33]

Summary: Arthur has come to Privet Drive to take Harry to the Burrow for Bill and Fleur's wedding, but first he want to have a little talk with Harry.

5000 reads for this little two-chapter story of mine! Merci! Danke! Thanks!

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5209 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/11/05 Updated: 08/27/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 08/21/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Appetizer

Oh, I am going to enjoy this. I can tell. does he or doesn't he .. get thumped or stumped in the end. I won't make it a double wedding, but if Iwere him, I won't walk away. When you find your special someone, you really never can walk a away. Please continue

Author's Response: So, did you enjoy the second chapter?

 

Summary: Harry wrestles with his feelings for Ginny at Bill and Fleur's wedding. Contains HBP spoilers.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6815 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/15/05 Updated: 08/15/05


Reviewer: LittleTom45 Signed
Date: 08/21/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

You have to do a series of sequels for this. this was great. You are a really talented writer. I have been torn with does Ginny say the heck with it and go with him and he he gives in or if she stays back and waits for him. Both are so romantic and both have strong merit.

 
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