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But I expect you know that by now!
great stori!!!!! Gotta love the randomness. Try Harry Potter and Mr Sheep of harrypotterfanfiction.com. (The gal hoo rote it's a mate and i owe her 1)
Author's Response: SHEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thank you for calling me insane. Out of the four of us authors, Bri is probably the most sane. Sarah and I are outright loonies, and Mary, well, Mary is just good at hiding her craziness. So therefore, I must thank you again for not only taking the time to read and review, but to comment on the randomness. YAY!
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! I have recommened it 2 all of mi fanfiction-reading m8's, and they agree. I wish you'd hurry up, though...I want 2 no what happens! ;)
i hav just read sum ov other peoples reveiw - i am v suprised no1 else has guessed this - i Medea Voldies daughter? i no JK sed he had no kids but hey! this is FAN FICTION. this would make sense why she onli has 1 name, and is automatically in Slytherin. am i right???? Actually, please dont tell me. i don't want to no. but pleas update soon!!!!!!
You're really very good, you know. 10/10. Look out for my story (if it ever gets accepted). 'Every Last Drop'. Hopefully sometime in the next two weeks.
PLEASE UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! ... ... ... be afraid. be very afraid. 10/10
This is very kwl. I cant wait to see lupin and sirius meet eachother and peter! creepy. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
Author's Response: Very, very, creepy. I'll update as soon as possible- (cough cough when the next chapter is written since I haven't started)
Is it finished or not? because it still says "this story is not yet completed" but you said chapter 12 was the Final chapter. 10/10, though.
Bloody Hell man - thats not just good, its bloody Rowling! S**t! (I don't normally swear often, but bloody hell man!) Made me cry when Lily + James...bloody hell dude, u could've published that stuff if it weren't for copyright! (i apologise again if any of my language offends anyone.) 200% 100/10!
Ok. Apologies for the swearing in my old review - I just refound this again and re-read it and had to review. For the third time, this nearly made me cry! Don't you think it would be cool if, after they made the seventh HP film, they made like a little prologue clip - I have this really great image in my head of Sirius racing through the rain on his motorbike as James tels Lily to run...ah, if only. I'd be in tears though. I hope you have written something else I can read - I'll go see.
Hey! Good story, you're obviuosly a brilliant writer - when are you going to update? I really hope its soon. Please don't stop just because of the release of HBP! 10/10.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I am glad you like the story and my way of writing. I hope to update very quickly, but real life has come in between the last few months, but I will finish this story. It might take a while, but it will be done. :) Thanks again!
You are completly insane! (in a good way - no, wait, and EVIL way...no...that can't be right...). 10/10.
Author's Response: I am insane, actually. I've been beginning to show some of the signs of it...
Pretti kwl! i like the way u did a diary and thoughts and notes ect. hurri up with the next chapter!
Author's Response: For the last time! It's general...but I don't know how to change it...I'm hurrying I'm hurrying...purely for your enjoyment. Geez!
You are completly insane. Its a good thing to know. Join me in the funny farm someday? ;) love the stori.
Author's Response: lol, thanks. Hopefully I'm expressing my randomness in the story so I don't have to in real life, therefore, not landing me in the insane asylum.
This is really good, dispite the way Harry is a little OOC - thats what makes it so good. I really want someone to give Harry a good yelling at. He deserves it. He's got his head so far up his own butt I'm quite surprised he can see where he's going. Maybe Ginny could give him a good licking. (soz if ur english and already know this but 'licking' = yelling at.) And dumbledore being kinda stupid too. Oh well. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. 10/10
This is a really good story line but you obviously spent ages on James's time at his house - if you'd've cut it to two or maybe three simpler chaps, then more people would've perservered to read it. Its good though. Keep it up! I hope to see James with Sirius again. I will check out and review Green now.
Author's Response: Yeah I know, I didn't mean to make him stay so long at his parents' house - it just happened! I didn't know what to cut out though, but I think a lot of what happened there is probably going to be relevant. Thanks for your review!
This is FANTASTIC. However, if you don't update, you may have to fend off demented readers who are going insane from the LACK OF UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!
wicked. cant w8 2 find out wot happens next! ; ) Definatly 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks for the 10! OH, and chapter 5 has been submitted so you shouldn't have too long to wait!
Wicked! its great to read one thats mostly just a continuation of the last book instead of an almost opposite timeline. Definatly 10/10!
Author's Response: *Grinning* Thanks for the 10! I'm so glad you like it!
this is a great stori! I can't wait till the sequel comes! I don't normally ask people this, 'cos is seems a bit mean, but could you maybe check out my stori, Every Last Drop ? please?
Author's Response: Thank you! And chapter one of the Flame of Obitus has just been submitted! And of course I'll check out your fic; no worries!