*deletes old about me and bounces in* Hi folks! We're going to do two reps of squats, move onto the bench press, run on over the small step ladders for a minimum of 30 seconds to get those buttocks scrunching, and then we're going to collapse into a desk chair and read!
That's it! One! Two! Three - four! Reeelaaaaaaaxxx!
Vhe are - Dawnie & Steph Aspiring Spice Girls, Princess & Queen of the Typos, Two Top Investigators (and, quite obviously) Skinny pigs and Photobuckeneers.
Oh wowee. That was a nice little dumplin of b.s! Or like, interpretive dance in the form of words on a computer screen being blasted across all of the world to make some crazy dog lady drinking tea smile. Or, someone wearing very sexy cowboy boots in a very Salty Lake city grin. Or, it may even be possibly that someone in a very Ily-nnoying state of mind may be reading this. In which case, if you've recovered from the little workout earlier, you'd know I ♥ my sport, particularly the one I'm coordinated at, LJ & PV. Because the others are fun mostly for the laughs I get directed at me when I fall on my sweet little toushe. Although they may not be laughing with me. Hmm.
I'm a Turnip. I atually cooked some the other day, and heard their little plot-bunnies goig up in smoke with a guilty little voice wailing in my mind *cough* But I adore my SPEWlings more than anything, and I love the PIBETA gang more than they know. ♥
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+ Nominated 2006 QSQ – Malicious Intentions – Best Post-Hogwarts Fiction
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+ SPEW reviewer of the month - January
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Currently working on my WIP Malicious Intentions and fighting the urge to bite my fingernails. Maybe I’ll see you around some time, eh?
Well, i feel for Ginny, as Harry signed his letter as "your friend" Harry, and as for percy, well Ive always imagined him apologising to the Weasley's minus the parsnjips, but in a letter? It doesnt seem like Percy, also tyhe use of third person "why would Harry being tlaking to Percy?" perhaps "myself" would have been a better choice of words? TTFN- chapters await!
I dont know how this time turner thing is going to work out, hopefully for the best! I love stories where there are lots of plot turns, and left-out information,so it is more of a jolt of recognition when you finally realise sometyhing... seems to me this is going to be one of them!
Such a good story. Wish it wasnt finished!!!
So unfair! Sirius shouldnt have died, but your style of writing has b rought him back t life! Im on the chapter 2 now!!
LOL i guessed after 'Vegrin' and then the song being written by MEATloaf, then the whole thing the song was about. Cool how you kept all the people with dirrty minds thinking it was something else ( i knew she was a veggie all along:P) nehu ttyl all...
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
Wow. I was waiting for this story to end... but then i see it still hasn't! It must really take time to pout such feeling out into the computer for other people to see... It really moved me when i read the first 3 chapters, i couldn't believe how realistic it was, and i couldn't belive the pain and conflict Mione was going though. It's so sad, but maybe... just maybe... the last vivist she got wasn't from Draco, and subconsioul;y she belived it was someone else?
its would be so cool if you could check out my story, Malicious Intentions, the latest chapter i wrote (not on there yet) was actually inspired by your story, but of course has nothing to do with it. I don't think anyone could ever compete with such a moving story. ~Steph*
great to see you're still here, my queen :) Wooh, go emerson! *hands emerson flavoured marshmellow*
I started to read this story in the early days, back when Delightful Pain was assumed to be a one-shot. That was before I became Lurid, so almost a year has gone past form when i first started reading.
From When Draco first said his first line if dailogue in ch.1, i felt an intense hate for him. I felt extremely sorry for Hermione. I wanted revenge. But, as the storyw ent on, and we delved into Draco's P.O.V (which, might I add was a stroke of brilliance) we saw the inner Draco, and from that, his side of the story. His lust, his wanting and his need. And then, we saw Hermione's character start to develop. We saw her character pitied by many, and then, we saw some reel back in revulsion, all because she discovered she did actually feel soemthing for Draco; something other than fear.
I think that transition was extremely well done, and although you might have lost some reviewers, i feel the message you send from this story, and the power that seems ot come form each chapter effects people in either a negative or positive way regardless.
I would just like to congratulate you on a fantastic story, one full of emotion. Hate, fear, forgivness, and ultimatley, freedom. I thought that final chapter wiht Draco pleading for her to send him to Azkaban was simply beautiful. So plain, so simple, yet so intricatly involved wiht the whole story. It wa slike you summed up the entire story in one, small, sad paragraph.
I hope there is more ot this story, and would just like you to know, you have earned a permanent place on my favourites.-Steph
James...james...james....how can this be true? How could you know they would learn to Apparate in book 6? I must say.... this poses some very interesting theorires...like how you knew they would be practicing with circles...maybe you're JKR in disguise...she has been on here before ::looks arund shiftily, then continues with theory-ising:: hmm... the naked part was totally new to me though =-) it would be cool if yopu could check out my story....i only have one, and it's no where as good as this one =-D ::just smile and wave, smile and wave::
YAY! i love this story! its so great its finished, now i dont have to wait for you to post the next chapter! YAY! i can read it whnever i want! OK, now i aaid my kudos, i the rist of being a shamless lil plug couild anybody PLEASE read and review my story? THANKS so much!
erm.. was that Andromeda? Too right that was graphic...but if she was stupified she wouldn't have been able to cry or anything, coz you're 'asleep' looking when you've been hit with Stupefy...ah well. getting your face peeled off does kinda wake u up =P
Author's Response: No, that wasn't Adromeda. It was just someone Peter found.
I'm so sorry, But I'm ending my reviewing here for tonight. I hate having parents ot tell you to get off the net! I will be back.. mark my words...~Lurid*
Great chapter! Can't wait to be back at Mungo's. Usually i love it there. It just seems so mch less sterile than normal hospitals, and JK makes you feel right at home. It's just so sad seeing Molly there coz as Bill said she's neverbeen admitted before.... Harry's Patronus... i read somewhere in one of your reviews that JKR didn't want them to become Animagus so you wern't going to have that in the storyline...i LOVE the whole green flame aspect, is that referring the title HP & Green Flame Torch? If so where's the torch?
exellent!!! Best chapter yet i rekon, but if it was longer you probably would have told us about M.W. Is the curse the same as Snivellus used on James in 'Snapes Worst Memory' and on Hermione in The Department Of Mysteries? Funny how these thingys connect aye?
I've really looked forward to this chapter! I usually check every day, but my computers had some bugs =( I hope it doesnt do it again coz i really love reading your FF!! I think the animals you chose were appropriate, but yeah for names like that SSmg or watever it is said whats 'Roe' mean? For Hermy....hhmmmm...maybe a scrambled version of a nickname or real name like I AM LORD VOLDERMORT (Tom Marvolo Riddle) Coz like in this other story it said she got ful owl... just like Ol' Voldie. Maybe they're some likeness?
Well done Weasley Mom! I am detirmined to make this my longest review ever..
okay i thought it was absolutly halarious when Harry gave Remus the impresion he wanted 'the talk' lol you can just imagine Remus looking around shepishly then going "ahem... well... erm the birds and the bees, Harry... we should probably sit down.." lol just my view. You can imagine Sirius boasting about all his shags...."Oh yeah, and then there was the one in 6th year where we got busted by McGonagall in the broom closet...that was good..." he said with a wistful look in his eye. "Yeah,. those were the days..." lol sorry got carried away..
I've never really thought of Tonks as an Auror in a story before... she's always seemed so flippant...my new word. Apparently im 'flippant when it comes to concentrating at training' :S yesmm....but yeah. When Tonks took on sucha serious tone i was like "wow! That's right! She's an Auror!" ahh... i can't wait for their wedding! Wonder what colour hair Tonks will have? Knowing her.... purple to go with some violets??? even tho violets are kinda blue ::scratches head::
Yay! I think this is deffinetely my longest review! I just hope when you finish the last two chapters you'll ask us questions. I love answering questions in reviews... makes me think for once...not that i don't always think.. being a year 9 student...thats reminds me; i go back to school on the monday afetr HBP! I should be finshed by then! I hate being in Australia some times...BTW i think ur Canadian or from America, coz Brits and Aussie spell 'mum' with a U and you spell it with an 'O' just a lil tidbit sorry... I'm straying from the path =-)
I've been following this story from the start, tho *sorry* not reviewing coz I haven't had an account that long, but this was the first story i EVER read ::honest:: and i love it to bits! It's a shame to see it finshing, but at least this way we can always go back and nit pick obsessivley without having to wonder stupidly if our questions will be answered in the next chapter ::grins sheepsihly:: i know from experience =-D
well, its time for me to stop rambling, hope you start a seventh year Fanfic once HBp reveals the new plot line, and I look forward to reading it, as i expect, Will does! Lucky boy! ~Steph* ::20 as always, but if i had my way, 100000... you get the picture:: 62 lines!
I agree with Lisa K and Nadia ( the most recent review before mine. JK does refer to Ginny as a cat alot? Maybe a nice Giger Kneazle (Fantastic Beasts -- Crookshanks is most probably one, maybe Ginny could have some kinda connection?) She could have her new scar as a sumbol like McGonnagall's glasses.... As for Ron the idea of Birds is coming up alot, Maybe a Pheonix, with all that red hair he's sure to fit the part :) maybe a roan unicorn (totally random I know) because his wand has unicorn hair in it, but if he was a pheonix maybe they could fashion their own wands with his feathers for a stronger connection. like a junior branch of the Order. I have almost no ideas for Hermione, except the little bit of info that Otters are oart of the WEASEL family. Maybe if Ron & Hermione's romance became stronger she may one day become a Weasley (I know big step 4 her) but that could prove a strong connection. Also maybe Neviile could be a 5th Marauder? Time's have changed and he's really closely linked to Harry with the prphecy and all, maybe a toad like Trevor or a Hawk? They're really wise & detirmined, like he is to avenge his parents. I can tell I've tired you out with all my thinking, so ttyl all...
I like the way Tonks percieved fear of predictability ( i know, big word for a 13 yr old :) )but yeah, well done. I think her little talk has scared them into thinking they can't trust strangers, no matter of the saying (a strangers just a friend you haven't met)
YAY!! first reviwer. I think this is a really well structured chapter. i just gotta go back and dreg up some questions for you....
Aww! Sirius is back! I love when people put Sirius back into their stories; i would just like to add that chapter with Andromeda and Ted was fabulous. I'd just like to say (sorry for nit-picking) but you spelt maliciously wrong =-) I should know, i only spent about five minuted trying to find out the right spelling for my story (Malicious Intentions, General Fics, could you please take a look? It would be such an honour =-)) but other than that, I am so sad to hear that this story is almost finished. I almost cried when Colin died, and i just hope he doesn't die is HP1/2BP!!! Loves it!