wow, very good. Sounds interesting =) update soon plz!
Wow. That was a truly amazing story. Very well written, great descriptions of all of the emotions. It's wonderful, great job! Keep writing!
Author's Response: I\'m happy you enjoyed it and that you think I got the descriptions right. I was a bit worried. :)
wow, very dark, but very good. Awesome writing, it flowed very well, you could feel the saddness. Great job, keep writing.
That was a really touching story, great writing. Good job.