Summary: She is wrong. She is wrong in so many ways, so many ways, in every way imaginable. I am with Lily; she is my girlfriend, I am her boyfriend - but she will never be my Lily. She’ll always be his and even she knows it as she entwines her hand with mine. [CHAPTER 3 REPOSTED!]
Wow. That's a really great story! I especially liked the last lines:
She is wrong. She is wrong in so many ways, so many ways, in every way imaginable.
I am with Lily; she is my girlfriend, I am her boyfriend — but she will never be my Lily.
She’ll always be his and even she knows it as she entwines her hand with mine.
Awesome job! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I\'m glad you liked those last lines; I wanted them to be the focus as I was writing this chapter. I\'d be so happy if you\'d read the next chapter when it\'s up! :)
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wow, very good. Sounds interesting =) update soon plz!
Summary: Six years ago, on a sunny afternoon after the end of the war, Ronald Weasley slipped out of 12 Grimmauld Place for ten minutes, to get some fresh air. He never returned. Now, his sister Ginny writes a letter to her lost brother.
When someone goes missing, you hope with all your heart that that person is still alive. And it’s the hope that destroys you.
There is an answer of course, somewhere out there… even if sometimes, it seems like there can’t possibly be. Six years ago something happened to Ronald Weasley on a bright, happy day, when it seemed nothing could possibly go wrong. That's the thing about bright, happy days - they can fool you.
Wow. That was a truly amazing story. Very well written, great descriptions of all of the emotions. It's wonderful, great job! Keep writing!
Author's Response: I\'m happy you enjoyed it and that you think I got the descriptions right. I was a bit worried. :)
Summary: One Shot. Ron POV. Angsty.
"I never thought that I would be the one to survive this war. I had always imagined myself the first casualty. I imagined myself diving in front of a bolt of green light for one of my friends. For I am no one important and never have been. Not brilliant like Hermione or brave like Harry, I am ordinary. I am expendable. "
"I never told her how I felt about her. How I could stare at her for ages, fight with her forever, love her for eternity and it’d never be enough. But I was too late. I’d missed my chance. "
wow, very dark, but very good. Awesome writing, it flowed very well, you could feel the saddness. Great job, keep writing.
Summary: Post HBP -- The horcrux search has begun. Will the new dangers make two friends realize thier love before it's too late?
That was a really touching story, great writing. Good job.