Summary: This story sets right after the end of Harry's seventh year at Hogwarts. A final battle seems to have put an end to the conflict with Voldemort. But the future is uncertain, choices must be made, and they prove more difficult than expected... Harry's world is about to change dramatically, and he must deal with a rising threat on top of sorting his personal relationships.
I can’t wait for the next. For a moment I think Thomas Winslow is in Dumbledore’s side, but I didn’t think he will. I want to know more about him. And what’s going on for Hermione’s parents? This is really surprised me.
Summary: Harry desperately needs to talk to Hermione and they decide to meet at the Millennium Eye. Chapter 23 up!
This is wonderful story. I see the link to the BHP. It’s really wonderful that you can connect it to your story.
Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.
Nik, you promised...
I love your story. That’s a great idea that Ginny and Hermione switch the journal without they know each other. But, according to your prolog, Will Hermione die at the end? Well, actually I don’t really like that idea. I can’t wait longer, so, please update your story soon, okay.
Summary: A shock comes at the end of Hermione's fifth year and it will forever change her life. As she and her friends enter their sixth year, amid the second war, a frightening prophecy is made. A prophecy which will alter the Wizarding World and bring about a Christmas no one will forget.
Your last chapter is really touch my heart, I mean the part in the graveyard.
Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
I was searching stories. And i found yours. But, you had already finished your story. So, i think i'll leave you what i get from your story. I hope you don't mind it.
I thought i like yours because it didn't contain something heavy. You made a good plot, although i thought you made the condition wasn't so natural, for example Miranda that you can more explore her character. So, you can make a various conflicts.
Don't mad at me okay...
I give you my opinion as one of your readers.
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Oh.. I really love this..
Oh.. terrible.. and what happened.. were they kissing again or the Love-Knot was broken? They were free? Just my prediction..
Summary: When they finally realize that they love each other, everything will change. What will happen? Find out as the infamous trio enters their 6th year at Hogwarts.
It’s a good story. I like the idea about Fidus Amor.
Summary: In the years following Voldemort's victory in the second war, Muggle-borns must become slaves and servants to pure-bloods in order to survive. Over time, Hermione Granger has learned to suppress her pride and independence in households where she is considered lower than dirt. She thought she would be prepared for this new family, just like she was for all the previous ones. What she didn't know was that this new family was none other than Draco Malfoy's. Will she manage hold up when she finds herself struggling to withhold her sharp tongue, returning hatred, and...something else?
The last chapter of this story has been posted! Thanks for reading :)
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The story is really good, although I don’t really like the end of story about Draco must die. But, I like in the end of story about Hermione can keep her life move on and price that she can manage the relationship for the rest of Malfoy.
Summary: The story takes place in the seventh year and Voldemort is not yet defeated. While times may get harder and the future darker, Harry and Hermione find comfort in each others arms and Harry finally realizes his love for her. But just how much will they have to endure? Another guy in the way, death, solitude--are these issues unsurpassable? As they both mature, they discover that in a world of destruction and depression it is not easy to survive, both physically and emotionally, that loving is not as simple as it seems. Will their love win above everything?
This’s gonna complicated. I hope you will update soon.
Author's Response: I\'m doing my best to finish up. And this time I won\'t post the next chappie until the whole story is finished. That way, you won\'t have such a long wait between chapters! Thank you for your patience!
Summary: PLEASE READ AND REVIEW! Remeber the spell Dolohov put on Hermione in the Department of Mysteries. Well, see how it effects Harry. Will love conquer evil? Read or I'll tell Voldy!
You won’t get Hermione in trouble, will you? But, I think maybe you willI don’t really know what kind of that, because I don’t want to think about bad thingsbecause Harry will need more time to find out where is Hermione and Hermione is really has a bad situation.
A story about how the love between two people can turn out to be more than just love, but a life saving experiance. Plenty of suspense and twists and turns! Please Review: tell me you love it, hate it, want to change this or that, hell, tell me all about the secret conversation you and your cat had last night! Just review!
The Sequal is up! Look for Love Fulfilled in the Dark/Angst section by me! the dark arts master! So go read it, now! It's even better than the first one!
This is a good story. You made readers keep on waiting by cut of your story in important part on some of your last chapters. Fortunately, I get your story in a finish condition.
I really like your story until the battle. About this chapter, it’s really nice to make Dudley and Uncle Vernon can’t do anything about Harry. By the way, when will you continue your story. It is almost a year that you don’t post your next chapter?
Summary: SPOILER WARNING! Events in HBP are discussed.
This story picks up immediately after the funeral as Harry and his friends leave Hogwarts on the train. During the summer that follows Harry’s sixth year he begins his lonely quest to destroy Lord Voldemort. He finds two of the items that he is seeking and a truth he has been attempting to avoid.
This chapter covers the trip to London on the Hogwarts Express after Dumbledore’s funeral. Why are Professors McGonagall and Flitwick on the train? Why is Hermione crying on someone else’s shoulder? What is Percy Weasley up to?
mmm.. i think you wrote a quick scenes.. perhaps you can add description more so i reader can understand the situation more
Author's Response: Hi e_a_k! Thank you for the wonderful review. There is amost nothing better a reader can say to a writer than to ask for more description and background. I understand that Hemmingway would write 800 pages and then condense it down to less than 100, letting the reader fill in the background from the inferred ideas. JKR is a master of concise writing, we all want more background and more description. Her books aren\'t long, no not at all. My thesis in chapter 1 of \"HP and the Needed One\" is relatively simple: 1) Harry must face Voldemort and he isn\'t optimistic about his chances of survival so he doesn\'t want his best friends to be near him. and 2) Hermione is very worried about Harry, she loves him, so she tries to straighten things out with Lavender because she doesn\'t need any unnecessary enemies. There is a scene near the beginning of HBP where Harry drops his telescope and tennis shoes. It occurs when Dumbledore is ready to leave. He quickly picks them up again. I think this foreshadows Harry actions in the early parts of DH. The telescope represents Hermione - a source of knowledge. The tennis shoes represent Ron - comfortable and relaxing. I think Harry will try to be a loner for a while, but he will find he must, most reluctantly, involve his friends in the quest to destroy Voldemort. The overall thesis of this story is that Hermione has specific skills that Harry will need. And when it is time, Hermione will go wherever she must go and she will do whatever she must do. She vowed to Harry that she would do so in OotP, just before she went into Umbridge\'s office with him.
Summary: The fact that opposites attract might be one reason for Ron and Hermione’s new endearment towards each other. By the time the Hogwarts Express pulls into Hogsmeade Station for another year at Hogwarts, every witch and wizard on the train knew something had changed drastically between the two friends. Harry and Ginny on the other hand decide to keep their relationship a secret because of a “dream” Harry has about ‘You Know Who.’ If their secret love is discovered by the wrong people it could possibly cost Harry and Ginny their lives.
I confused for the first time for changing situation. But, i like the way you give point of view from different scenes. I hope you explain too how Harry and Ginny's being together.
Author's Response: That is the prequel to this story \"Everything is Easier in the Starlight\" Check it out in my profile if you want...
I think you can make this story is more horrible and description in the scene of Harry's dream
Author's Response: Yeah, I had started writing this before I actually hade a writing technique so the first...probably six chapters are not so hot, but they get better, I promise.
I think that was Ginny who write letter to inform her family. I just want to remind you to check up the relation between a scene to another scene, will you.
Author's Response: I\'m not quite sure what you mean....
Well, i smell a fire between Ron and Hermione because of Krum. And about Krum is agreat idea too. It will be great to know much about him. For Ariane, i like her too. I suppose to have concern about her speaking.
Author's Response: Krum was all thanks to my sister of course
The story will be more complicated if Harry doesn't meet Dumbledore soon, that's what in my mind. I am not really have a good feeling in DA's scene. I want read more about spell, charm, etc. that are new. Can you improve that idea? I like you more because you added some French words in your story.
Author's Response: lol. This was a hard chapter to write and I really didn\'t enjoy doing it...I\'ll keep that in mind. Thanks!
...ha..ha...I laughed when i read Harry to fool around Hermione and Ron...
Author's Response: lol