OK hurry up and write more. I am hooked on all these Fanfics
Author's Response: lol thats a good thing.. another anxious Potter fan sucked into the vortex of Rowling-adorers...MWHAHAHAHA
Well so far it is a pretty good story however you have several inaccuracies in it. First of all if they are twins Harry would not have seen her as a little girl. Secondly students go to Hogwarts at 11 or twelve depending on their birthdays. It makes no sence that his twin would be a first year in his sixth year she is only one year from being an adult and would never be allowed to stay that long as an adult. Also you stated that she was a Gryffindor student but then you had her being prepared to be sorted. If she were a Gryffindor she would be in Harry's year and Hermione would know her even if the boys did not as she would be in Hermione's dorm. I like the story so far however so keep it up just be more aware of what you are saying. I know this is fiction but even in fiction things need to have some logic. On a side note no matter how much Harry was angry he would never call anyone a mudblood least of all Hermione. He may not be a mudblood but he was reaised by muggles he knows what it is like. Also he would never hurt anyone that way. He may yell but to call her a mudblood would be something unforgivable.
Author's Response: I hope this answers your queries. When Torrence got her Letter, Lupin decided that he would homeschool her instead of sending her to Hogwarts under a false name because Harry wouldn't be ready to meet her. And even though Hermione and Torrence are in the same dorm it doesn't mean they talk. It could mean that Hermione may dislike Torrence even more because she knows her better. You're not the only one to have said something about Harry calling Hermione a Mudblood. It is very harsh, but try and put yourself in Harry's shoes. If you were that angry, wouldn't you probably say something that you really regretted?
Summary: A sixth year fic that explores what might happen if Harry moves past the angst and starts to put his life together and has a few things break his way for a change.
Just had to say I love this story. I wanna read more or I'm gonna cry.....wait a minute I already did that.
I love this story!!! Hurry up and save Sirius I miss him already hehe. Waiting for the next installment.
Author's Response: You shouldn't have long to wait. The next chapter has been submitted, so it's up to the mods.
HEHE this story is so funny keep it up
Summary: This story starts during the summer between Harry's fifth and sixth year. It follows his journey from the skinny, guilt-ridden Boy Who Lived to the Man Who Would Defeat Voldemort. Some H/G and R/Hr romance. Chapter 50 is up!!!! STORY COMPLETE!!! Written pre-HBP. This story no longer follows cannon.
Loved it I want more!!!!
I like that twist HEHE But this was so short. I want more.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Yes, sometimes they are short...I will not deny that! But hey, short, sweet, and leave you in suspense!
Summary: Harry is struggling to come to terms with the events of his fifth year. Can he learn to depend on those he considers family and become what he needs to be in order to survive?
HEHE Poor Harry with Dobby taking care of him. I can't wait to see how Petunia reacts to Bill. I loved it. Keep them comming.
Author's Response: Can't you just picture how Petunia will react to that long hair and earring? Hee Hee.
Ok I loved it!!! So when are you gonna start next year lol. Keep up the good work
Just wanted to let you know You are great. I even cried much to the amusement of my family who thinks I am nuts.
Author's Response: Aww, sorry to make you cry, but pleased as well. ;)
Summary: Voldemort attacks the Potters, James and Lily try to protect their beloved baby boy. Then suddenly they're in a house they do not know. Harry isn't with them and they don't know what happened. Where are they? And who are the redhead children running down the stairs? Why have they been sent?
The story is placed in the future, years after Voldemort's death, but danger is still lurking.
Features Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione.
Joint winner in the genfic category of the Multifaceted Fanfiction Awards
This is such a cute story I like Lilly and James being able to see that their son is alright. Keep them coming
Author's Response: Thanks. I will.
Great story keep it coming
I liked it and the reason for Petunia hating Lilly sounds about right. Next Chapter please!!
Author's Response: I will have the next chapter up soon, I am swamped with classes though. I promise to update soon.
Summary: With the ever-growing threat of Lord Voldemort and secrets of the past that could tear Harry apart, Harry’s six year will be like no other. More attacks on muggles and wizards then ever before as Voldemort gains back the power he once had. Harry will make a decision that will change not only his life, but also everyone’s around him. He will have to choose between what is right and what is easy...
I've finally updated! Now that it's finally summer I'll have more time to write! I've submitted my new chapter and I hope it will be out soon. I really need a beta because I can't get a hold of my last one, so feel free to volunteer!
This story was written Pre-HBP so it's my own storyline!
I agree with grindelwald Hurry and update please
Author's Response: I sent in the third chapter its called "A rescue and a dream" it should be up soon -HPotter7
I love it and as to him being to emotional in the first I don't think so he wasn't nearly as emotional as he was in Dumbledores office the year before. I also like the whole thing with Aunt Petunia somehow I have never been able to believe she is as bad as she seems. She is afterall his last blood relative and I don't know any sisters who weren't close at one point or other in their lives. I think it really is just jealousy. Anyhow When do I get to read more?
Keep it coming you have me hooked LOL. As to Dudley being ooc well for him to be nice to Harry he would have to be. I am willing to put up with him being ooc to further the story besides I always wondered what would happen if they all knew the truth.
Summary: After the death of Sirius, Harry realizes that not everything is as it seemed. The Trio grow tighter, and learn that there is more to their frienship than anyone knew. A secret of their own making will separate them from those they love, but the final battle will not belong to them alone. Will Harry be able to prepare himself for the inevitable, and continue to expand on his various relationships?
I love it Hurry with the next chapter.
Author's Response: The next two chapters have been submitted, but are sitting in cue. So as soon as they are approved they'll be posted.
I loved it hehe I really loved Harry picking up McGonagall and petting her like that. He will probably flip when he finds out he was petting his teacher. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Great so far. I kinda like the darker Harry's seems more realistic then him being Happy all the time.