OK hurry up and write more. I am hooked on all these Fanfics
Author's Response: lol thats a good thing.. another anxious Potter fan sucked into the vortex of Rowling-adorers...MWHAHAHAHA
Well so far it is a pretty good story however you have several inaccuracies in it. First of all if they are twins Harry would not have seen her as a little girl. Secondly students go to Hogwarts at 11 or twelve depending on their birthdays. It makes no sence that his twin would be a first year in his sixth year she is only one year from being an adult and would never be allowed to stay that long as an adult. Also you stated that she was a Gryffindor student but then you had her being prepared to be sorted. If she were a Gryffindor she would be in Harry's year and Hermione would know her even if the boys did not as she would be in Hermione's dorm. I like the story so far however so keep it up just be more aware of what you are saying. I know this is fiction but even in fiction things need to have some logic. On a side note no matter how much Harry was angry he would never call anyone a mudblood least of all Hermione. He may not be a mudblood but he was reaised by muggles he knows what it is like. Also he would never hurt anyone that way. He may yell but to call her a mudblood would be something unforgivable.
Author's Response: I hope this answers your queries. When Torrence got her Letter, Lupin decided that he would homeschool her instead of sending her to Hogwarts under a false name because Harry wouldn't be ready to meet her. And even though Hermione and Torrence are in the same dorm it doesn't mean they talk. It could mean that Hermione may dislike Torrence even more because she knows her better. You're not the only one to have said something about Harry calling Hermione a Mudblood. It is very harsh, but try and put yourself in Harry's shoes. If you were that angry, wouldn't you probably say something that you really regretted?
Just had to say I love this story. I wanna read more or I'm gonna cry.....wait a minute I already did that.
I love this story!!! Hurry up and save Sirius I miss him already hehe. Waiting for the next installment.
Author's Response: You shouldn't have long to wait. The next chapter has been submitted, so it's up to the mods.
HEHE this story is so funny keep it up
Loved it I want more!!!!
I like that twist HEHE But this was so short. I want more.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Yes, sometimes they are short...I will not deny that! But hey, short, sweet, and leave you in suspense!
HEHE Poor Harry with Dobby taking care of him. I can't wait to see how Petunia reacts to Bill. I loved it. Keep them comming.
Author's Response: Can't you just picture how Petunia will react to that long hair and earring? Hee Hee.
Ok I loved it!!! So when are you gonna start next year lol. Keep up the good work
Just wanted to let you know You are great. I even cried much to the amusement of my family who thinks I am nuts.
Author's Response: Aww, sorry to make you cry, but pleased as well. ;)
This is such a cute story I like Lilly and James being able to see that their son is alright. Keep them coming
Author's Response: Thanks. I will.
Great story keep it coming
I liked it and the reason for Petunia hating Lilly sounds about right. Next Chapter please!!
Author's Response: I will have the next chapter up soon, I am swamped with classes though. I promise to update soon.
I agree with grindelwald Hurry and update please
Author's Response: I sent in the third chapter its called "A rescue and a dream" it should be up soon -HPotter7
I love it and as to him being to emotional in the first I don't think so he wasn't nearly as emotional as he was in Dumbledores office the year before. I also like the whole thing with Aunt Petunia somehow I have never been able to believe she is as bad as she seems. She is afterall his last blood relative and I don't know any sisters who weren't close at one point or other in their lives. I think it really is just jealousy. Anyhow When do I get to read more?
Keep it coming you have me hooked LOL. As to Dudley being ooc well for him to be nice to Harry he would have to be. I am willing to put up with him being ooc to further the story besides I always wondered what would happen if they all knew the truth.
I love it Hurry with the next chapter.
Author's Response: The next two chapters have been submitted, but are sitting in cue. So as soon as they are approved they'll be posted.
I loved it hehe I really loved Harry picking up McGonagall and petting her like that. He will probably flip when he finds out he was petting his teacher. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Great so far. I kinda like the darker Harry's seems more realistic then him being Happy all the time.