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Fate by Liisa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 598]

Summary: Sirius returns miraculously from behind the veil, uncovering a secret that's remainded hidden for too long and was obviously not supposed to be found...He undertakes the task of trying to fix the mistake he made all those years ago on Halloween night

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 135024 Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/04 Updated: 11/15/05


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 05/08/05 Title: Chapter 39: Erased All Trace

Honestly, this is the best story I've ever read! Seriously! Please update soon! nothing but a 10!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm so glad you are enjoying it! I'm sorry this update is taking so long!

 

Summary: What if Voldermort managed to kill Harry on October 31 all those years ago. How would the world be different. This story follows the lives of two of Harry's closest friends, in a world where fear reigns supreme. Character death of a major character in cannon but not in the story.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3747 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/23/04 Updated: 11/30/04


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 12/28/05 Title: Chapter 5: Fading

Interesting, with a complex plot that doesn't make the story hard to read...great! keep writing!! :))

 

It Did Happen, Didn't It? by fireandice
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: Sequel to "Is This How its Supposed to Be?" READ THAT ONE FIRST Imagine being plauged with strange memories that don't seem to be yours. Thats exactly what Hermione is going through after one night not too long ago. How can she deal with these feelings? How will an important discovery affect her?

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4232 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/03/04 Updated: 12/30/04


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 12/28/05 Title: Chapter 1: When the World Was Not Right

Great story, great ending! leaves a lot of space for imagination...that's cool...Anyways, keep up the writing, you're good at it! :))

 

Beyond The Veil by Secret Lily
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 457]

Summary:

All Harry's life he had been watched. Watched by the memories of his parents. When 7th Year comes Lily and James and Sirius watch Harry as he struggles to defeat Voldemort once and for all. Pre-HBP



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 22114 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/27/04 Updated: 06/19/05


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 04/21/05 Title: Chapter 13: Imprisoned

That was a very cool move, bringing Grindelwald in! Update soon!

 

Summary: Merona Knowles, your ordinary graduate from Hogwarts. During the day she's a janitor for the Ministry of Magic. At night, she's a spy for the Order of the Phoenix. One night Merona is caught with some crucial information, she is submitted through all sorts of torture. Some mental abuse. Last chapter has been submitted. Contains surprise twist...

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse

Word count: 14473 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/09/05 Updated: 05/22/05


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 04/12/05 Title: Chapter 2: Prisoner

Simply brilliant! Please continue!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 

Nothing Left to Live For by phoenix_trills
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: In order for us to rejoin our loved ones, we must sometimes give all we have... One-shot.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1182 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/08/05 Updated: 04/08/05


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 04/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: Nothing Left to Live For

That was great! The best thing I liked is that this one-shot has an ending, not a cliff-hanger that leaves you to think for yourself.

Author's Response: thanx! i dont like those either.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 06/10/05 Title: None

I love the dea of this story! It's really original! You've done a great job! Keep it up, I want to see what Harry and Sirius are going to do now!:))

Author's Response: thank you so much! i just found out chapter 6 was rejected because i said he too many times and didnt capitalize sugar quill.....woops--Sugar Quill. grr. glad you like it!

 

Summary: 6-year-old Sirius Black just wouldn’t listen; he snuck into the family cellar despite being forbiddened to do so... A broken artifact brought about a chain of events that’ll bring us to a different world. Although most of the events stayed the same, his absence brought about some minor changes - now Sirius is in Harry’s time.

This is a story that will reveal what will happen if the most mischievous of the Marauders joins forces with the ever-creative Weasley Twins. This is an epic tale that will reveal the mysterious myths and history of the Most Noble and Ancient House of Blacks. Be mystified, and roll over with laughter, as Sirius bumbled his way through his 1st year at Hogwarts in this alternate tale of the HP tradition.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 96153 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Published:
05/08/05 Updated: 06/09/07


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 12/01/05 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Siriusly Wicked Ideas

great chapter! I absolutely love the Sirius you portray in your story! it's also very easy to read your story, which is also a big +! update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I’ll try to do but experiencing a few problems with writing Hagrid … This shows that I’ve been relying too much on betas to help me with this. Now am determined to do this on my own. Appreciate your review. ^_^

The first reviews for a chapter is always special :)

 

Summary: Meet James Potter, a clever, somewhat mischievous, popular student at Hogwarts. He takes every situation in stride and has everything under control, except one: Lily Evans, an amazingly beautiful and intelligent individual. He loves her more than anything, but she despises him more than anything, and a not-so-impressive run-in late at night with her leaves James thinking that chasing after Lily might be hopeless. Then, a series of events happen in James' life, which is topped off by an unexpected visitor that makes his sixth year too sweet to remember.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 78521 Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/17/05 Updated: 07/21/06


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 10/22/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Duel

Great! Very interesting! You have a good style of writing....the only thing that bothers me is the relationship between the Marauders...but, I suppose, that's what makes your story unique! :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the great review! It's awesome to get such good feedback! Thanks for the "unique" comment too! It's great stuff!

 

Forever Yours by harry_potter_star
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 872]

Summary:
sigh.
Okay. Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay


For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!


James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 40400 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Published:
08/29/05 Updated: 07/30/06


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 12/04/05 Title: Chapter 8: The first Summer

I like your version of things...can't wait to see what happened that made James and Lily enemies, although I have a suspicion that Calista has something to do with it...;)...anyways, keep updating!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your review!!! I'm glad you like my version of things, though it makes my job alot harder, i have to get Lily to be angry with him and then in love. im not taking this out on you, but i mmust stress that in jk rowlings version, they are not enimies, lily just doesnt want to go out with james, but she doesn't hate him, as sirius CLEARLY staes (see review um...somewhere down there :)) Calista maaaayyyy have something to do with it...then again she may not! :) i will keep mupdating!! thx!!

 

Wolf's Bane by Cherry and Phoenix Feather
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 145]

Summary: All his life, Remus has known one thing: Love is not his friend. Love is the enemy for someone like him, which is why he denies it to himself. However, that denial could prove fatal as he and the woman he loves are sent on a mission that risks everything.

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A/N: Rated 6th-7th years for later chapters (violence, mostly, but concepts that kids can't comprehend, like noble sacrifice and possibly some sexual content).

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 20244 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/24/05 Updated: 04/26/06


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 12/28/05 Title: Chapter 1: Rain in Diagon Alley

Great story! Very easy to read and interesting as well..it's very nice and simple, which is also great...i'm repeating myself..keep up the story! :))

 

Anamnesis: All That Now Remains by Barabbas
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 32]

Summary: Past Featured StoryAlways he had been there. To cry, and to bear witness. He survived them all. Two centuries after the final battle, a solitary figure searches for solace in all that remains of his past; the shattered memories of yesteryears.


Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5114 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/08/05 Updated: 12/08/05


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 12/29/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Wonderful! I was listening to a sad song at the moment, and it was kinda hard to finish reading it cause of the lump in my throat. Very emotional; I love how you phrased everything and which memories you picked. It's also great that Dobby didn't have memories of only Harry, whom he adores, but people like Remus, Ginny, Fred and George, and especially Winky. Also, I liked the fact that you actually didn't have any descendants of Order members in Hogwarts, but only new people. In fact, that only mention of old times was the Weasley Wander, and that's great! Well, all I can do is repeat myself now -- twas great! :)) Thanks!

 

The Art of the Quill by Pussycat123
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 118]

Summary: *One shot* It is Lily and James's fifth year, and they have to endure many extremely dull classes. To pass the time, they swap notes. This is a collection of most of those notes ... and the madness that inevitably ensues.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 2218 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/04/06 Updated: 01/04/06


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Art of the Quill

Loved this! It was great how you had action as well as notes, and great (I'm repeating myself) that the notes didn't involve only James and Lily, but everyone else. You could see everybody's character through the way they wrote, and loved how you made it a story...My advice (which will probably be emt with screams of 'how dare you?!' and the such..) -- don't write a sequal, keep this a one-shot. That's the whole point that makes this special...Just an episode in the life of the Marauders and Lily and Co. ...:))

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving such a long review! I agree about the sequel thing, which is why I'm not going to write one. As I've said. I am so glad you liked it, and so glad you agree about keeping this a one-shot, as that's all this ever will be.

 

Seven by Noldo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary: Regulus Black only lasted a week. (HBP spoilers, ahoy.)

Updated 22/01 with the revised, beta-read version. :)

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2251 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/06 Updated: 01/22/06


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Seven

I loved this. It's great to see a story where the Black brothers are actually friends, and, however weird this may sound, actually brothers. I liked how you portrayed Regulus feeling sorry for his loss of Sirius, but not sorry if Sirius comes to kill him. In fact, I think he hopes it'd be Sirius...I'm saying obviuos things, ain't I? Ah, well, gotta get them out sometimes... Probably the only things that caught my eye were some of the sentences starting with "because".. I mean, the ones where you explain that Mrs.Black was already becoming mad and everything. Maybe I'm being picky, maybe it's my mood, but I just decided to tell you that it kinda irritated me. Other than that little miserable thing that only an idiot like me would notice, this is perfect! In-character and in-depth! Repeat - love it! Waiting for more of your writing...

 

Summary: Vague memories, nothing but memories,/ But in the grave all, all, shall be renewed. R/S, R/T

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Substance Abuse, Slash, Alternate Universe

Word count: 9600 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/19/06 Updated: 02/19/06


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 02/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: In The Grave All Shall Be Renewed

I usually don't read R/S, cause I don't support it, but I had to read this, cause you're the author. :) I must admit this is great! Very beautifully written, and you play on the feelings of the reader. I can see what Remus and Sirius and Tonks felt and everything. The part where you say that Harry found a spell was kind of unexpected for me, cause before that you describe emotions and everything, and kinda calmed me down, and then there's this action, so it shook me up. And yet I can't see any other way of writing it. Anyways, despite this, another great story and definitely going on my faves! :)) Keep up the good work! What about your other story, "The Crownless Again Shall Be King"? It is going to be continued any time soon?..Update either way! :)) Great job!

 

Only Rain by Noldo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: Sirius had always hated rain.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 845 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/17/06 Updated: 03/19/06


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 03/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Only Rain

Simple and moving. Quite different from your other stories, where you use longer sentences, but I think it wouldn't have worked so well here. The simplicity is what, in my view, lifted it to a whole new height. All in all, simply great. :) Loved it.

 

How Icarus Drowns by Noldo
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: On Regulus, and ink, and Daedalian mimicry; and, eventually, the end of things. Second-person, non-linear narrative.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 809 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/13/06 Updated: 05/13/06


Reviewer: Xriak Signed
Date: 06/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: How Icarus Drowns

To be honest, I needed to start reading this fic several times. The parallel between Icarus and Regulus (God, even their names sound alike) looked really interesting, but I understood that, with your fics, I need to sit down in silence and read and think. (That's a compliment.) :)

I can't cease to be amazed by your vocabulary..it makes me know that I need to work. Also, I'm reading a book right now - Mikhail Bulgakov's The White Guard and I thought you might like it. Your styles are very much alike, and you might find his comparisons interesting. (Gag, I sound like a commercial.)

Anyways, this story is really an accomlishment. The whole idea, the way you characterize the people through the littlest of things, and the way you've managed to maintain 2nd person without making it seem awkward was great. Congratulations and thanks for another fascinating read. :))

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