Bahh just tellll already Remus. Killing me
Author's Response: LOL..muwahahahahahah...<.< :)
Ahhh please please update! I read all the chapters in the span on 4 short days and can barely wait for the truth to come out..
Author's Response: Thank you, Charmed_S! That's a lot of reading! Thanks for letting me know.
Ahh that better be the pest plastic surgeon magician out there..
Author's Response: LOL We'll see... Muwahahahah.... <.< ;)
Wow - I loved it, nice job.. imagine that, its 1am here i have school tomorrow and im up reading this...
But seriously - i loved it! I hope Ginny will refure to marry him right at the alter or something... and hoping dick will see her hands that support no ring!.. well or new ring. Update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry to distract you from school but . . . I\'m glad you like it! And thanks for the review, of course :)
awww... that's all I can say...
but there's also -- AHA! i knew it was Seth.. he a dark wizard of some sort? weird odd secret hidden maybe? threathened selena - she somehow in on this secret?.. oo the suspense...:D
I knew seth wasn't good news when that shadow passed his eyes when lily told him not to treat the house elf so badly (yes I remember) =)
Author's Response: Ha, ha! Someone remembered! *bows down and praises* Nice predicting on the Seth part... You\'ll find out what Seth really is soon, and it may or may not surprise you. I\'m not sure, you seem pretty good at guessing. Thanks for the review, I\'ll try to update soon!
Hey, I just began reading your story - and overall i loved that you made Lily an Animagus, is there a particular reason she's a fox? as in Foxy Lady by hendrix :D?
anway, i ddnt think this chapter was boring actually - but interesting that the marauders are her new friends now...
was is both the sags that attacked her? hope its not selena... update soon!
Author's Response: Hullo there! I\'m glad you liked the fact that Lily was an Animagus. There is a reason (at least in my mind) that I thought Lily\'s Animagus form would be a fox. I\'ve always viewed Lily as someone who was very smart, although not particularly in an entirely \'book-wormish\' way. I figure her intelligence has a sort of \'sly\' side (and people always say foxes are sly). I figure that Lily\'s tendency to be, well, \'sly\', would help her to accept the Marauders - well, sort of accept them, anyway. You know, I didn\'t think of Foxy Lady by Hendrix when I wrote it, but come to think of it... ;-) Thanks for saying the chapter wasn\'t boring, I was afraid people wouldn\'t like it much. I\'ll tell you now that having the Marauders as her friends is a major part of my plot, so... Don\'t worry, Selena didn\'t attack Lily! I\'ll try to update soon! :-)
Interesting piece -- I'm not a Harry/Ginny fanfiction- type, but this poem's focus point isn't only them is it? I like the part where you talk about "unity" - you know all the Houses's traits and how they gather around or the final battle - right?
I also liked that little rhyme you had in "missed" and "kissed" -- though I think there still would be the electricity, but now Harry's too araid of that electricity isn't he - becaause that can ultimately kill Ginny. Still I liked that stanze as a whole :D
That bit you hald about Ginny's attempts to smooth his "rave hair". To me, that's a cliche.. overused in soo many fics. but your poem doesn't ocus solely on it -- so that's good!
Nice poem overall, I like how you focus on the war in general as well as Harry and Ginny!
I didn't understand much - but it seems like you're a good writer, and it'll turn out to be an interesting read, so update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I\'m sorry it\'s so mysterious; I can\'t give away that much. ^^;
I like how you compare the evening a warm blessing -- it contrasts really nicely with the murky and gray sky. Sort of shows Remus's feelings you know? Though I'm not entirely sure if that was what you were going for...
Also, it's nice and very believable how you say it isn't perfect... because loneliness is there even though they were friends to the end, at some point or another. Overall I think it's a very effective fiction - especially in using the sky to reflect the mood - in describing the relationship and exchange that would be present between them at the time. As a side note - I like the title; is it symbolizing the distant past or any other particular meaning? Senem.
aww that's so cute... "she was moodier than usual" lol -- love how Lily is kind-of moody while she wasn't pregnant as well... Nice fic!