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Night by Elphin
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary: "He may well be the chosen one, but he is still my baby."

Lily and James Potter live every day fearing that the greatest dark wizard in the world will discover their secret. Knowing the threat that lies upon them, Lily reflects on how much it has affected their family.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1573 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/07 Updated: 09/23/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 09/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Night

just as MagEd says... seemed as if Lily was really there in front of me, very convincing!

emotions were expressed very beautifully... i enjoyed every word. keep up!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

 

A Living Memory by violet eyes
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Seven years later, George Weasley is still grieving the loss of his brother. With the help of a photograph album and an innocent child, he finds that Fred's memory continues to live on. *One-shot*

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1771 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/12/07 Updated: 09/23/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 09/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Living Memory

good one, hazel eyes... *wink*

Author's Response: Tee hee, thanks :).

 

Purple Ink by Nymphea
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 60]

Summary: James and Lily didn't wake up one morning and find they were in love with each other...but two mornings in particular were a help. So were two letters written in purple ink.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1420 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/16/07 Updated: 09/27/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 09/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Purple Ink

well, i loved anything it was ur A/N about Professor Scalar! dont i hate that topic! haha...

nice attempt Niymphea... i would have loved a bit more detail though... keep it up.

Author's Response: I was afraid no one would get the joke if I didn\'t point it out...I\'m quite proud of that name. ;-) When I wrote this, I was thinking of it almost as like two separate chapters, two isolated incidents. So the reason there isn\'t as much detail as perhaps you would have liked is that I know there was a lot going on in their lives, but I was emphasizing these two simple scenes and their effect on their relationship.

 

Alone With My Thoughts by Ginny_Hermione
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: It’s been a year. A year since I last saw him. It breaks my heart, the pain of not being with him. But I must be strong. Strong for him, and all those fighting. Fighting for peace.
Peace. I ponder the concept. What will a world in peace be like? It gives me a small feeling of warmth, that maybe there will be peace. Peace from a war that has gripped the world, my world, so hard, and made it suffer so much.


Read to find out who this is, and what they're talking about! It's angsty, but has a happy ending!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 1501 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/18/07 Updated: 09/26/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 09/28/07 Title: Chapter 1: Alone With My Thoughts

provides a break from the usual style of writing... i loved how Ginny questions herself abt Harry's safety...

good job

Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted Ginny to be unsure and all that. Thank you though!

 

Flame by Pondering
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: Every night Harry Potter lights a candle, reminding him of a woman he used to love.





Written for The Full-Moon Challenge. Prompt: Missing You by Pondering of Ravenclaw.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1816 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/28/07 Updated: 10/17/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 10/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Flame

I was on the third paragraph, Tash, when I hastily closed the window of your story. And then I held my chest and I was heaving *puffs*

Oh my Godric! That was the sweetest thing ever!

You said, something about your uncertainty with the characterization. Well, you were wrong. Absolutely wrong because every character was so original and convincing, I enjoyed reading every word.

One of the best type of fictions I think are the ones that portray the “other” side of a character. You accomplished that in Flame with Harry, Ginny and Molly as well. Harry was absolutely adorable ( I was getting giddy!) and really, his tempers just sets butterfly in my stomach.

Just like everybody else I too thought that Ginny was dead. You reinforced our assumption through Harry’s attitude at her absence from his life. The candles and his feelings towards Daisy. Real nice twist though. I can never imagine Ginny leaving Harry for the world but the thing that you can accomplish writing what seems such an unimaginable canon twist, is superb!

I think the main feature of a good story is that the author in some way touches the reader’s heart through the relation of the character’s attitude and attributes to those of the readers. Its always enjoyable to read something I can relate to. Sometimes the biggest things we say or do are made up of the little things.

Flame. Your title couldn’t have been any better! Flame. The little thing *wink*

It was sweet and touching and just shakes all the strings of the guitar in my heart. The echo lasts for hours too.

An excellent one-shot to add to my ever-growing list of favs.

-Akay.



Author's Response: Wow, Akay, thanks for the lovely review. I\'m really glad that you enjoyed the characterisations. I was actually unsure about them and wasn\'t even going to upload this fic at one stage, but I loved the actual story so I\'m glad now that I persisted. I\'m happy that you liked the title too. I usually try and keep them simple and to the point as I find an overly complicated title can turn me off sometimes. Thanks again! Tash

 
Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 10/20/07 Title: Chapter 1: Flame

and Tash, while i was reading the fic, it reminded me of Rascal Flatts song What Hurts the Most...

myabe its a conincidence or something but Harry could actually be singing that song! ha!

Akay

Author's Response: I\'ve never actually heard of the song, but I googled the lyrics and you\'re right--they do sort of match. :D Just a coincidence, though. :) Tash

 

Darkness Rises by Pendraegona
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: For twelve years Sirius has been imprisoned in Azkaban, forced to see the worst of himself, the times when he was powerless, the price of his mistakes. It is hate for the one whom he could not kill that compels Sirius to endure the darkness. He's at Hogwarts--he's at Hogwarts, and
Sirius is the only one who knows he's still alive.
The prisoner of Azkaban will be free. He will find the man who betrayed his best friend, and the hunt will begin here...tonight.

(Sirius' breakout story--Warnings for mild violence, and as far as "mental disorders" are concerned, some very sad memories)

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mental Disorders, Violence

Word count: 1144 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/07/07 Updated: 10/10/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i think its an excellent job, considering that its your first fic at MNFF or is it the first one u ever wrote?

really well written, i must say. sirius is one of those charcters not everyone can characterise vert well but u did a good job.

the memories were well thought and reflect your obvious talent in writing.

keep it up. i'll be looking out for you.

-Akay

Author's Response: Thanks--I think Sirius is hard to characterize too...esp. because sometimes he\'s so intense, but other times so laid back...

 

Blame by megan_lupin
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: One ran. One pursued. And one tried to understand. There was one night; there were three men; there was one emotion.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 4919 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
10/14/07 Updated: 06/28/08


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 07/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Part II: Pursue

Reading Blame was 'Like pouring salt in a fresh wound'. Literally!

Enjoyed it very much, Megan. Specially Pursue.

I'm guilty of feeling sad for Peter after reading Part One, owing to your detailed exploration of his mind. In the end, the line 'in running, he left his guilt behind' accurately describes the 12 years he cowardly spent as an Animagi.

Part Two was just torture. A blantant torture from Megan to all Sirius loving fans.

I love how your incorporatation of the voice of the inner self makes Sirius appear very vulnerable and then how his anger helps him bring back the composure.

I hoped that you elaborated when you wrote 'And Sirius had had plenty of experience with his anger' but I guess that would've affected the well achieved continuity of this chapter.

I liked this line very much as it sums up well how Sirius saw Peter throughout their years of acquaintence.

He saw the eleven-year-old boy that they’d met years ago. He saw the teenager that they’d laughed and planned pranks with. He saw the man that they’d trusted.

He saw the man that had betrayed that trust. He saw the coward. He saw the spy.


I think the information you give us in paragraphs was better being eliminated or else written without the paragraphs. It sort of distorted the flow of the story, and reminded of the horror of school textbooks "(refer to page no. blah)"

heh.

Keep it coming.

Akay

 

Tomato Seeds by Gin_Drinka
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 46]

Summary: It’s all about the little things…


If you’ve ever missed somebody special, this is for you.


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2588 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/22/07 Updated: 10/23/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 10/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Tomato Seeds

*near fainting* How do you people come up with stuff like this? *stares at her vanishing plot bunny*

*now grins like a maniac*

Loved every alphabet, every word, phrase, sentence, paragraph! Brilliantly expressed with the sweetest emotions in the world.

I love all those writers and their stories that circulate around those “little things” in life. Tomato seeds! I’m touched, really. It is one of the most beautiful fictions I have ever read.

Now you’ll say I named all of them, but *grins* do you leave me a choice? I specially liked the Sirius and Remus parts, then George and Andromeda and Teddy too!!!

It is a very sad story but unlike many others, I didn’t cry when I read Tomato Seeds.

In fact, I was smiling. There is a tragedy that makes you cry, which is sad itself. But I think there is a very rich and beautiful aspect to any tragedy too. This goes for the time when I think about Lily sacrificing her life for Harry. The sentiment is so strong and touching, that I tend to start viewing it from the emotional point of view.

Mudblood428’s ‘Mum, Dad, Its Me Harry’ was the first ever fiction in which I sat crying for an hour! I love Tomato Seeds as much, but cherish it in a very different, unique way, that is felt equally strongly. And of course ‘OMG’ was the only utterance from my mouth for a long time as I sat in otherwise a very Gin_Drinka’s-story-induced dazed silence.

I love the way you link “the little thing” throughout the story. I can even relate to certain parts of the fiction, which makes me even more attached to it. Characterization was awesome and very skillfully done.

Keep it up!

Awesome piece.

-Akay


Author's Response: Oh my goodness, what a spectacular review. I grinned so much when I read this. Thanks! Some people cried when reading this, they told me, but I sort of agree it\'s not the crying sort of fic. Of course it is sad, and tragic, but I try to always put a little bit of hope in any story that I write, no matter how sad it gets. Thanks a wonderful and extremely flattering review. I\'m so glad you enjoyed it.

 

A Shimmer in the Moonlight by Angela_Prongs
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: This is a one-shot I wrote for the In-House Halloween Hauntings challenge. (Ravenclaw) Personally, I wouldn’t say it’s the greatest piece of literature ever written, but it sure is quite dandy if I do say so myself!

Sirius Black is dead; we all know that. What we don’t know is that he has some unfinished business to attend to on this Halloween night.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1805 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/10/07 Updated: 11/17/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 11/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Shimmer in the Moonlight

nice.

loved your ending line. very touching

Akay

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I\'m so glad you like it. ~Ange^__^

 

I Choose You by TheGoldenTrio
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 55]

Summary: Hermione reflects on her relationship with Ron, beginning with his walking out in DH.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 2103 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/19/07 Updated: 11/25/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 11/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it was sweet really, but the way it started out, i expected more, er- better.

there must at least have been some solid details and emotions attached with each time Ron made Hermione angry. i dont mean there wasnt at all, but a bit more would have made ur one-shot more realistic.

i though, loved the ending line and the title is awesome.

the content was not aboslutely up to the mark. nice attempt anyways, buddy.

Akay

Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback-- it was honest and constructive, which is just what I needed.

 

Half Memories by rev02a
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 32]

Summary: Remus and Sirius share an awkward cup of tea.
One shot set during GOF.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1705 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/21/07 Updated: 11/22/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 11/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: Half Memories

touching :) two of my fav characters written beautifully. good job

Akay

Author's Response: Thank you.

 

Puzzles by phoe_gurl
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Random remus/tonks that i wrote ages ago and only just recovered from the depths of my computer. Remus has returned to Tonks during his time with the ferals, but it's not exactly the happy reunion that she had in mind ...

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1821 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/24/07 Updated: 11/28/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 11/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i specially liked the immediate start and the immediate end.

it was a good story

Akay

 

A Shower of Stardust... by lucilla_pauie
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: The Christmas after the Battle of Hogwarts is a battle in itself. The blackness of grief, the sound of tears and the taint of guilt and sorrow is a stark and ugly contrast to the backdrop of snow, carols, love and joy.

But one cannot grieve and live at the same time. And one realises it doesn’t really take much to go back to living after grieving: love thaws all sharp icicles the way spring has never yet broken its promise of driving away winter.

~LucillaJoanna of Hufflepuff believes Seasons Change and avows it with this entry to the Winter Tales Challenges.

~Dedicated to Wulfric Brian Dumbledore, who intimately knows grief and will successfully befriend it, too.



Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15592 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/26/07 Updated: 01/22/08


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: ...on Andromeda's lap.

loved Teddy's little gestures, Joanna! They were so sweet and made me coo. Oh and Harry-Ginny parts were AWESOME. My stomach gave me some very serious flicks!

keep it coming!



Author's Response: Thanks, Akay! *hugs*

 

Jack-o'-lantern by Stubbornly_appeared
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: James reflects (Trick-or-Treating is dangerous; he must not think of tomorrow; life is like a jack-o'-lantern) on October 30, 1981.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1414 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/26/07 Updated: 11/26/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 11/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Jack-o'-lantern

*bites her quivering lip*

that was very good, Stubby. i liked the line you wrote in your A/N, but somehow the reference to the colours is always more believable and touching.

poor James. descriptions were really very good. i loved how you talk about things such as trick or treating and kicking leaves. James' reaction to the muggle Halloween was sweet.

He forgets that maybe, maybe this is a promise he cannot keep. James forgets that maybe there might not be a tomorrow.

*nods her head impressively*

-Akay

P.S: what is it with dark fictions leaving you sad, Stubby? :)


Author's Response: *grins idiotically* Oh, thakees, Akay! I love to slip in little descriptions and small passages. It just makes things more... touching, in my opinion. I do rather like James\' opinion of Halloween. That line\'s one of my favourites, too. That was originally going to be the next-to-ending paragraph (With just \'There is a bang at the door\' after it.), but then I added more. Did it make you sad? How marvellous. -Stubby

 

Scrapbook by SimplyCharmed
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Life used to be wonderful until Voldemort became powerful. Every precious moment was treasured. Family ties were strong and friends were close. Then everything came apart. All that was left were the memories. And in a certain case, a scrapbook. A scrapbook that would help you remember what it was like before. A scrapbook that would make you want to go back.


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 1362 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/28/07 Updated: 11/29/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 11/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

absorbed within the second paragraph, i was like 'how is she?'

within the third line of second paragraph i was like 'damn! who is she!!!'

my first guess with the scrap book was lily, harry's daughter, complete with the his glasses and all. but then came ginger hair and i was like, thats probably ron's daughter.

then came 'defeat of the darkest wizard in history' and i was sure it was lily potter, the second!

but you didnt stop tormenting me there, because the third paragraph was next and i couldnt help saying 'on no'

finally in the fifth one, i smiled. ah, Ginny.

-

nice one, really.

-

i liked Harry a lot. supportive, caring and sweet. ginny, being a mess of emotions was sad.

Akay

P.S: now i see what you mean by the warning 'DH spoilers and Book 7 disregarded'!


Author's Response: Sorry for tormenting you. =) It did kind of sound like either Harry\'s or Ron\'s daughter. Yeah, the fifth paragraph was a HUGE tip-off to who the narrator was. o.0 I\'d actually be surprised if someone didn\'t get who she was after reading that paragraph. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story!

 

A Thousand Miles by rita_skeeter
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Sometimes it just takes one person to open your eyes...

Oh, it's what you do to me.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1444 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/30/07 Updated: 11/30/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Platform Four

I'm returning after three hours since I first read your story to tell you that

...

.

...

I can't stop smiling. :D

loved it!

Akay

Author's Response: Whee! I\'m really pleased. Thank you!

 

Summary: Harry spends a sleepless night at Ginny's bedside, with nothing but memories to keep him company.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1934 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/01/07 Updated: 12/05/07


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 12/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Excerpts from the Potter Family Album

absolutely hooked! loved it

- Akay

Author's Response: You can say that again! Ok, I\'m lame. But seriously, thanks, and thanks for reviewing!

 

Monsters Under The Bed by Mistletoe
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: "It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live."





A wise man had once told Harry Potter this simple phrase. Harry, in turn, passed on this advice to a brooding Teddy, who suffers once again as the Christmas holidays approach. More than he shows, the death of his young parents affect Teddy. They shouldn't have died, it should have been somebody else. Yet, Teddy has been forced to grow up without them, envious of those with loving parents. Victoire can't help but wonder why Teddy is unable accept the amount of love he has around him. Maybe, with a little persuasion and some good advice from a caring godfather, Teddy can finally get over the death of the parents that he never had the chance to know.





Character Death warning for previous deaths. They don't actually occur in the story.





Submitted by Mistletoe of Slytherin for the Winter Tales Challenge.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 15236 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/09/07 Updated: 01/12/08


Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 01/13/08 Title: Chapter 3: What Dreams May Come

You've done it again, Kat! I'm smiling and I'm crying. Oh Godric, it was spectacular!

I loved the following description very much:
Staring down at his hands as if they were not his own, Teddy stopped in the middle of the room; the world began to spin around him. The sound of the book falling against the stiff mattress echoed in his ears causing him to shift his eyes up to it. He steadied himself from the vertigo that had suddenly overtaken him and moved to the bed, leaning against it. The journal was a mere foot away from him and yet he could not pick it up. It was as if his arm had temporarily lost functionality as it hung limply by his side. The shine of the sun caught the gold trimmings of the pages and at dauntingly glared into his eyes, enticing him to pick it back up.

It was so real and I felt I was there standing beside Teddy watching the journal fall.

The best quote:
He did love her; just not with the type of love he had for his parents’ memory.

Thats it. Love exists in form and you've explored the whole philosophy of it in one beautiful sentence. A very appropriate retrospection to Teddy's cauldron of jumbled emotions.

Two words, Mistletoe: Loved It.

~ Akay



Author's Response: Akay, you have been the best reviewer... EVER! I loved this review :] I\'m glad you liked my description--I strive to be there with the character, as you\'ve said above. Heh. Thanks, dear! Now I\'m off to read your lovely entry :]

 
Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus Signed
Date: 12/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Cost Of Glory

you know what... in my opinion your story is the best one combined all the categories of the Winter Tales...

*thumbs up*

its like reading OotP! it feels as if i'm watching Teddy or Harry... Teddy, Harry, Teddy...

ugh... it should be like:

Mistletoe, Rowling, Mistletoe, Rowling...

*winks*

mind blowing portryal of Teddy's current position... its so realistic and love the way how he isnt even thinking abt how would Vic think, cuz his prob with his parents is too much more than a relationship with a girlfriend..
it was so nice to read something so real and well expressed...

good job!

Akay

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I\'m really glad you are so fond of this! :]] This review made me feel all arm and fuzzy on the inside. *grins* --Kat

Author's Response: warm and fuzzy... not arm... >.> <.<

 
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