Funny, smart, and not afraid to say what I think. You either hate me or love me, I don't care what people think (but that's because I can usually make a great come back) so kock me down as much as you want but prepair for the fireworks.
Very nice, I really like the joke I think you got me hooked after only 2 chapters!
Author's Response: thanks im trying sooo hard to update~!
It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.
But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.
But life is full of mistakes...::~!~::..
"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.
“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”
“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.
Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.
Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.
Yes! I was laughung so hard that my mom came in and asked if I was crying ( I was close to). Brilliant, something that Sirius would say if I ever saw one.
Please update soon! I read all of them in about an hour!
Wow! Just wow, is all I have to say to this!
Author's Response: Haha, are they really that good? Thanks!
Bravo! One of the best I've ever read, I will look forward to reading the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks! I always love new readers!
It's offial you are one of the best writers on this site! Ilike the way you describe how she denies her feelings for James. Only problem is the part on her seeing the future.
Yes oh so evil. Anywho... great chapter, great plot, interesting way to write the story. Keep it up :).
Author's Response: I shall.